Furthermore, if Mulan reads this I want you to know criticism may seem harsh from a few (wether they want to be constructive critics or just bashful), but there's a whole lot of us out there who absolutely LOVE your work. Your world is immersive, is hilarious at times, serious at others, living (there may not be much in terms of interactions with "randomNPC", but you know they're here and they're varied enough to feel like they are here for their own reasons) and many others things. And above all things, your writing is absolutely stellar. The long texts are actually a blessing, because they make us better bask in the beauty of the CG while at the same time enjoy reading an excellent corruption story. The corruption scenes, OMS, they are good. Really good. The repetitions to imprint new fetishes as mantras, the use of different levels of language to make us know of Kira's evolution, all of this is well thought-out and realized. Without mentionning the art, which is wonderful.
People may whine, people may critic, but don't be fooled, the silent majority had a boner 75% of the time they played your game.