alexxxx000

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Damn, Unruly. Just reading there's an update gives me a boner. It's almost a pavlovian response by now.

Some typos:
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And now for my feedback.
Very nice update, I was hoping we would get with Daimhin someday and this is what I imagined would happen. I like his power to become irresistible, reminds me of Nym beguiling people. He gave us some extra info on Ryder and I'm curious. I know that goat is very crafty and likes to scheme.
The sex was hnnnng... let's just say if he offered me to become his demigod suck slave, I'd probably agree.
Also very curious to see what happens to Jake with the willpower thing.
 

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Damn, Unruly. Just reading there's an update gives me a boner. It's almost a pavlovian response by now.

Some typos:
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And now for my feedback.
Very nice update, I was hoping we would get with Daimhin someday and this is what I imagined would happen. I like his power to become irresistible, reminds me of Nym beguiling people. He gave us some extra info on Ryder and I'm curious. I know that goat is very crafty and likes to scheme.
The sex was hnnnng... let's just say if he offered me to become his demigod suck slave, I'd probably agree.
Also very curious to see what happens to Jake with the willpower thing.
Thanks for the feedback and typo check. I made a lot of late-stage edits directly in Twine (instead of Grammarly) so I am pleased I didn't have too many errors.

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The main DL links are updated (BTW)

 

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Holiday Contest #2: Poll Results
#4 Sam (aka Slam)​
#6 Brandon​
#10 John​
#11 Tyler​
slamBio.jpg brandon-Jonathan Guijarro.jpg John-benbrown_1.jpeg tyler-maxRyder.jpg

WINNER GREENRAY (contributed 2 out of the 4 winners)

POLL THREE IS LIVE
 
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So, I seem to have lost Trent...he's not appearing at practices anymore. I only stole strength from him twice and let him stay top dog as far as I know, did I mess up somewhere?
 

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So, I seem to have lost Trent...he's not appearing at practices anymore. I only stole strength from him twice and let him stay top dog as far as I know, did I mess up somewhere?
Hi rFox,

Sorry for the frustration you experienced. I hope I can help you out.

You probably did nothing wrong. You are in chapter 1 out of 3 of the game. Even though it is not complete, you are still able to reach the "exciting conclusion - starring Trent" to chapter 1, however, there are a few "placeholder events" where nothing happens along the way. To reach the conclusion, you need to complete all the main plot events. So until you complete these other main plot events, your evening swim practice repeats the "Trent isn't here passage".

As you advance through the days of the week, you should see some events listed as MAIN PLOT (they should always be on the top of the list of options). If you see one of these, you should do the event. If don't, that's fine, they will keep showing up on certain days/times until you do them. Eventually, for the story to continue, you must do all the main plot events. I tried to make the main plot events repeat frequently enough that if you do not select them, they will be available again in 2 to 3 days.

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Hope this helps and sorry for any frustration you experienced (I HATE when I get stuck in a game). Trent is very hot and I want to see him at practice all the time. Finish up those other main plot events and Trent will show up again. Also if you are a fan of Trent be sure to select Nym for Demigod Training, you'll get to spend an entire afternoon with Trent (and play beer pong). If you left him a Top Dog, you are in for a very fun afternoon.

I am still finishing chapter 1. In future updates, I plan to update the evening swim practice slightly to reduce the number of times you get the "Trent didn't show up for practice" message.

I don't know if this was the best way to design chapter 1. I am sure some players are frustrated that they must play certain events to move the plot forward. I understand and I take all feedback seriously. I marvel at developers that can create an open-world that still manages to have a plot. I can't.

Unruly
 
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basicgarlic

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In the new update there is scene that is kinda repeating. When you start the dream it starts:
"Like most nights recently, you found yourself back in HC's temple. HC stood up from his throne when you arrived, and walked toward you with his arms outstretched"
Then a small talk with hc, he goes to his throne a light appears and when clicking next, the phrase is again the same
'"Like most nights recently, ... you with his arms outstretched" and the light goes again at the end. and clicking next the phrase appears again a third time.
Is this ok (hc doing it) or just a small mistake?
it probably is hc, but it still feels weird, cause MC doesn't seem to feel anything.
 
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In the new update there is scene that is kinda repeating. When you start the dream it starts:
"Like most nights recently, you found yourself back in HC's temple. HC stood up from his throne when you arrived, and walked toward you with his arms outstretched"
Then a small talk with hc, he goes to his throne a light appears and when clicking next, the phrase is again the same
'"Like most nights recently, ... you with his arms outstretched" and the light goes again at the end. and clicking next the phrase appears again a third time.
Is this ok (hc doing it) or just a small mistake?
it probably is hc, but it still feels weird, cause MC doesn't seem to feel anything.
I'm sure it's nothing. Put it out of your mind. (Unruly goes back to his throne and there is a flash of light)
 
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Are you sure the options from #16, A and B, isn't the same guy?
I thought it was just me, hahaha. But I didn't say anything because, despite being white myself, I find it so hard to distinguish white people. They all look the same to me. I thought #5 was 2 or 3 different people, but it turns out they are all the same person.
 

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It seems to me that most people look at this like a beauty contest. Of course the attractiveness of the characters is great. But more important to me is # 14: Sean - Pool Maintenance OPTION B more suited to the role of the asshole from the pool story :cool:
 
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It seems to me that most people look at this like a beauty contest. Of course, the attractiveness of the characters is great. But more important to me is # 14: Sean - Pool Maintenance OPTION B more suited to the role of the asshole from the pool story :cool:
I think they are all stunning! I wouldn't kick any of them out of the orgy. Well except for Character #7: Camp Seer -- she haunts me.

The great thing about this contest (for me) is people have shared where they found their images and it has opened up a lot of new resources.

I voted both of them :love:

It's a shame that Buck option B is losing... UnrulyDogBoy , I'm gonna steal him from you to my future game :devilish:
If these polls result in more people make hot MM games, then I think we all win! (What is your game going to be about... please say professional wrestling)

I thought it was just me, hahaha. But I didn't say anything because, despite being white myself, I find it so hard to distinguish white people. They all look the same to me. I thought #5 was 2 or 3 different people, but it turns out they are all the same person.
Its called prosopagnosia.

Are you sure the options from #16, A and B, isn't the same guy?
The question was already answered but I feel that we don't get the chance to talk much, so... sup Maxdoug?
 

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UnrulyDogBoy
prosopagnosia, transference, Greek mythology (curious people and those who are in the subject, know the etymology of psychology and psychiatry)... I've been having these strange thoughts. Is this all some kind of experiment of yours?
Though... Nah! It's because you're so cool!


By the way, Eros and Psyche could be the prototypes of one of the stories. Something romantic and passionate or bizarre like psychedelic American McGee's Alice o_O
Also you can use Venus, so that everyone is not bored and has something to treat after non-stop sexual relations :unsure:
 
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I thought it was just me, hahaha. But I didn't say anything because, despite being white myself, I find it so hard to distinguish white people. They all look the same to me. I thought #5 was 2 or 3 different people, but it turns out they are all the same person.
In portuguese we would call they "padrãozinho" (something like basic standard/template). We have a few memes with that (basically a group of white guys with the same beard, few hairstyles and all looking the same)

The question was already answered but I feel that we don't get the chance to talk much, so... sup Maxdoug?
That's maybe it's my fault. I keep a very close look in this topic, but just talk sometimes. Not much
 

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In portuguese we would call they "padrãozinho" (something like basic standard/template). We have a few memes with that (basically a group of white guys with the same beard, few hairstyles and all looking the same)
Outro brasileiro na thread. Não importa o tamanho da internet, sempre tem um brasileiro onde a gente tá, por mais que seja um fórum razoavelmente pequeno de um jogo fetichista gay.

The great thing about this contest (for me) is people have shared where they found their images and it has opened up a lot of new resources.
Was the image you were looking for something like this?
I Googled "hit by a javelin"

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(What is your game going to be about... please say professional wrestling)
It will be an HTML date sim/ sandbox, my main inspirations are Young marcus and hornstown (my 2 favorite sandboxes), the plan is to cover a wide range of my own kinks (bears, muscle studs etc....), starting from vanilla sex to some BDSM. I'm still learning HTML/JS/Twine/Sugarcube, so I'm taking baby steps and probably would take longer than I thought. I'm doing it from scratch, right now I'm implementing the time system and figuring out how to set the UI on the story caption passage.

Now that you mention wrestling, I'll have a gym/dojo on the game (haven't decided if I'll separate them) so wrestling is a possibility, I even have one or two sex clips on the subject so it's noted.
 

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Updated the Play Online by moving it to itch.io. I don't know their policy on using real porn images, so this move might not last long. Here is an .
 
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