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GS523523

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UnrulyDogBoy said:
I have been struggling with the writing on this next update. I don't know why.
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Sorry if this comes off as patronizing, but maybe you just need a break? You had originally planned to be done w/ Ch.1 by Chirstmass, so if you were working these 2 months straight maybe you're just tired/bored and need to take a month off.

Obviously everyone is differnt, but when I was writing my (shitty) chyoa I would set myself deadlines - "I have to finish these 20 chapters by the end of the week" - and by Friday I would have mostly lost interest and I was just forcing myself to finish instead of enjoying the writing. Taking 2-3 week off of porn would help get me motivated, and always when I came back and reread I would find that all of the later chapters I wrote were the worse ones.
Anyway, just my 2 cents.
 
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I just realized i never deleted a game file, so i basically have all the versions still on my Hd. Basically a Museum. Maybe i need a fan card.
Fun fact: one of the releases are on my birthday.
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greenray said:
I think you need a broom. Enchanted will be even better.
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Enchanted, please. I already has 3 normal on my house, i don't need more. But, maybe a enchanted could do the job for herself? Or fly. But, do the job for herself it's better.
 
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UnrulyDogBoy said:
Final Holiday Poll (MC Options) Results:

Four Top Images that will be among the MC options:
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Winning Player this time are:
1) GS523523
2) blackflames90 - BlackFlames and GreenRay suggested images that inspired the Holiday Poll.

All the winning images (and unopposed images) will be in the next update.

Unruly
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I have been without a computer and for some reason even though I was following I did not get any notifications even with being tagged.

So did I miss there being a contest for me to won at something even if it is second place? Its nice when you win without realizing you have or tried.
 
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blackflames90 said:
I have been without a computer and for some reason even though I was following I did not get any notifications even with being tagged.

So did I miss there being a contest for me to won at something even if it is second place? Its nice when you win without realizing you have or tried.
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Not second place, tie for first. Your contribution of the new Ryder image was fantastic and part of the reason I did the Holiday poll (which was a huge success).

I thought I sent you a message about your win but I just looked and it seems I didn't (sorry). Details are coming.

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Hi.
I uploaded the new update.

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I will talk more about it later. Here are the details in a nutshell:

New content added. If you have already played and want to just view the new content, use the NEW CONTENT cheat in the sidebar. The new plot content deals with training under Grey with you as a submissive. You will not be able to access this content if you steal any of Trent's confidence.

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  • Submissive Training with Grey and Trent
  • Ability to select different MC character images
  • Ability to turn off dialog colors
  • Preview of upcoming "Quick Visit" features
  • Winning images from Holiday Poll now available
  • Lots more minor characters have images
  • Several bugs fixed
  • Formatting of content/dialog/cheat selectors improved
EDIT: Comments on Update
So this one was hard for me to put together. Grey informs the MC (and so also the players) that the SUB/DOM encounters he has planned for the MC are different from typical SUB/DOM experiences. It was my aim that even people who don't care for the sub/dom dynamic could still enjoy this update. You will have to judge.
  • THERE IS NO OPT OF OUT SEX IN THIS UPDATE - You are being trained as a sub. You shouldn't get any choices, worm!
  • There is an in-game wrestling game planned for this update. I need more time to get it to work, so that will be coming later. You can decide to win or lose in the current update (fun times for either choice).
  • You can customize certain aspects of the game using the link in the sidebar: Turn off dialog colors AND select MC image.
  • I tried to clean up some formatting and spacing issues caused when I added character portraits. I think the game has a better look. Let me know if you observe any strange behavior or if you have any feedback on appearance.
  • I am adding a new feature to the game "Quick Visits". One of the things bugging me about the game is that certain characters show up and then you never see them for long periods of time (What is up with Drew? Didn't Deshawn invite us to shower with him every AM?) So, based on your interactions with certain characters, you can initiate a recurring random visit from the character. There are three triggers in the new update (two are partly implemented), Based on your actions in this update you might be visited by Vadim randomly in the evenings AND/OR a nighttime visit from Derrick. This system will be dramatically expanded in the next update so that the encounters include many more characters (Joel, Drew, Deshawn, Alejandro, Ryder, Felix, etc) and their triggers will be located in the story already written.
  • I am taking a break from doing the training updates. The next update will be the long-delayed: Go to Class, Study, Go for Run, Workout in Gym, and the Quick Visits. Short one page encounters that are fun, sexy, funny, fluffy, painful, etc. I also want to put in some work on the bio pages. Nothing crazy but get something on every page.

Unruly
 
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Awesome update again. I literally refresh F95 like 20 times a day hoping for these updates (along with a couple of other games). I noticed a couple of bugs:

*On the MC bio page, the images are broken. It uses an image titled You#Bio (where # is different). However, there are only You# and You#Text for each person.

*When you click "Choose Grey" in the new update, the very next passage begins with a '\' that appears to be typo. (Same in the second paragraph after the text bubble. Also, no space between the bubble and the text, but that might be intentional.)

*On the win page, the dialog right after " Intially, Trent stood " is classified as spoken, but it appears it should be thought instead.

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*On the last page of training, there's a typo, " You are free to conduct yourself however, you " there shouldn't be a comma between however and you.

*In misCouple the image hookText is broken.

Huge update, really amazing! This is probably my favorite storyline yet! I hope you aren't bothered about me pointing out the small errors, just trying to make it easier to fix. ;) But this was wonderful, looking forward to the next part.
 
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xxx_chris2018 said:
Awesome update again. I literally refresh F95 like 20 times a day hoping for these updates (along with a couple of other games). I noticed a couple of bugs:

*On the MC bio page, the images are broken. It uses an image titled You#Bio (where # is different). However, there are only You# and You#Text for each person.

*When you click "Choose Grey" in the new update, the very next passage begins with a '\' that appears to be typo. (Same in the second paragraph after the text bubble. Also, no space between the bubble and the text, but that might be intentional.)

*On the win page, the dialog right after " Intially, Trent stood " is classified as spoken, but it appears it should be thought instead.

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*On the last page of training, there's a typo, " You are free to conduct yourself however, you " there shouldn't be a comma between however and you.

*In misCouple the image hookText is broken.

Huge update, really amazing! This is probably my favorite storyline yet! I hope you aren't bothered about me pointing out the small errors, just trying to make it easier to fix. ;) But this was wonderful, looking forward to the next part.
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Thank you for the edits. I am doing some small Quick Visit stories now, so I'll push out an update early next week with these corrections. Last night I tried to be smarter about the images I used (trying to keep the ZIP size small) and apparently I caused a few image issues. I hate when I miss these things but I have to be honest, this update was all over the place so I am surprised there aren't bigger issues.

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xxx_chris2018

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UnrulyDogBoy said:
Thank you for the edits. I am doing some small Quick Visit stories now, so I'll push out an update early next week with these corrections. Last night I tried to be smarter about the images I used (trying to keep the ZIP size small) and apparently I caused a few image issues. I hate when I miss these things but I have to be honest, this update was all over the place so I am surprised there aren't bigger issues.

Unruly
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Yeah, for all the things you changed, definitely amazing to have so few errors. There are games with whole teams who have far more errors on smaller updates.
 
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xxx_chris2018

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So, I'm replaying the whole thing (not just new content) and found another small things:

* On jake2nd , the 2nd and 3rd options at the bottom of the page are on the same line.
 
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