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These events were longer than I intended the mini's to be. The study lounge event with the cards is closer to the length that most will be in the future.
More coming end of this week.
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More coming end of this week.
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Pls keep the changes i made in the changelog section
Great update... Don't want to be annoying, but a couple of tiny things...
* On Isaac - " You existed the classroom and walked into a woman " should be "exited"
* In gym - " "bad gym edicate" " should be etiquette
* In the Serious Study Session - " Would you mind studying my room with me? " should be "studying in my room", I think.
* Dream Transference - " How is going to be big man on campus? " should be Who
* Same - " Each time they guys rimmed " should be the
Other than a couple of typos, hot as fuck!! (If I'm annoying with this, lmk and I'll stop doing it, haha)
* On Isaac - " You existed the classroom and walked into a woman " should be "exited"
* In gym - " "bad gym edicate" " should be etiquette
* In the Serious Study Session - " Would you mind studying my room with me? " should be "studying in my room", I think.
* Dream Transference - " How is going to be big man on campus? " should be Who
* Same - " Each time they guys rimmed " should be the
Other than a couple of typos, hot as fuck!! (If I'm annoying with this, lmk and I'll stop doing it, haha)
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Bro, you are never annoying. Well maybe that one time, with the thing that had the stuff. But other than that, your feedback has always been super helpful. Thank you.
I do my first draft in Grammarly and then move the text to Twine to make sure there are no game errors. Then I copy back to Grammarly to be certain my “little” edits didn’t add new typos.
This time I skipped that last step. So You get things like edicate.
Glad you liked update. I think Dr Duran and his dream transference helmets need their own spin off.
And thank you to BerylForge for letting me borrow his deck (I should have posted that thank you with the update notice)
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Oh, I missed the submission window Thankfully checking first page on first one already makes me happy
And thanks for making this multi select, so many good options to pick
Thankfully checking first page on first one already makes me happy And thanks for making this multi select, so many good options to pick
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yes that porn star is in a lot of images. I think I used him in a few currently in the game but I cropped so you didn’t see his head.
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The player are more creative than I am , so I need to milk them for their ...ummm....Oh, I missed the submission window
And thanks for making this multi select, so many good options to pick
Hmmm milking. BRB just thought of another mini.
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Great! Let's cut off his head. He doesn't need it anyway.
Isaac! Ufff... It seems Victor will have to make room on my Gryphon )) Maybe he should be given his own side story, instead of a random event at uni.
UPD: In some options Unruly forget that Isaac is doing PrEP. Or is it the consequences of PTSD? Or something else I don't know about.
Isaac! Ufff...
It seems Victor will have to make room on my Gryphon )) Maybe he should be given his own side story, instead of a random event at uni.UPD: In some options Unruly forget that Isaac is doing PrEP. Or is it the consequences of PTSD? Or something else I don't know about.
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Sorry, I missed that. Thanks!
Saw your 2nd post and missed your first...I'm going to fix that and the typos and repost. I'll edit this post when it is done and the moderators post the update.
EDIT: EDIT: Fix sent...F95 updated. We are up and running again.
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Wow, they are fast. F95 is running a tight ship. I'd make a "tight" joke right about now...but it probably wouldn't be appropriate. In fact, commenting about making a tight joke is also not appropriate. I'm just going to assume I am banned.
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I like Issac too, so no carrying him away on your Gryphon. I assume Issac respects the MC's desire to have condoms, but on rare occasions...Great! Let's cut off his head. He doesn't need it anyway.
Isaac! Ufff...
UPD: In some options Unruly forget that Isaac is doing PrEP. Or is it the consequences of PTSD? Or something else I don't know about.
(no deep conspiracy)
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