Pretentious and very similar to Dreams of Desire, even the whole "dating someone from work and I don't like that dress 'cause I secretly want to keep you all for myself" situation was the same.
By the end, I kept asking myself how that's even a full chapter. It felt rushed. Ending was a piss-poor attempt of a cliffhanger.
Mom's Boss' character model is the same that has been used in a bazillion different games. Give that dude a goddam rest, for Christ's sake!
It's got some typos, including that annoying "Maby" many many many times. At some point, I wondered if it was being spelled that way on purpose, just to piss people off.
I mean, the word does exist.
During their couch talk there was this bit when MC was thinking and it was shown as Mom talking.
Now, I wish this dev the best in the days to come because Lilith cucking MC with Baldy McGlasses is not avoidable.
"Pussy or Ass." Where's the "Get the fuck out of my house, you naked psycho!"?
Absolutely distasteful! You, sir, are by no means a gentleman nor a scholar!
And then lil' Lily McTitties comes to you at night, your wimpy senses tingling, and her defiled mouth gets dangerously close to you...YUCK!
BTW, according to biblical canon Lilith is a redhead, just saying...