A tag says 'gay', but every picture shows only women, and just a silhouette of a guy.
It’s not a gay game. But it was a mod that put the tag there, and mods aren’t always right
I can only suggest about writing, nothing more. You are dev, you are god on this side and doing a good work already.
"MC ugly"I can only suggest about writing, nothing more. You are dev, you are god on this side and doing a good work already.
Oh, as non-native english speaker, it's a little hard for me to go deeper in details and of course, it's just my opinion, don't be offended
The intro goes good until our mc leave vintus (or how that guy was called). After that he hops on rush train, there was totally no reaction from his "family" about his issue, no question, nothing. They were like "OH, MC BACK, COOL, LET'S F**K."
I know that most of players probably want to go straight for action and so on. But at same time the intro would feel much better if you add reactions and some dialogues, for example they sit in the kitchen and make some talk about mc situation and what he is going to do. That's good way to express his troubles, make some personal impressions from heroines and mc as well. Additional can be used to put some hooks to get later, for example: "When i go in that dinner, i saw her...bla bla" and BOOM you got another potential heroine that you can get into plot rather easily.
About issue with family being plain, is simply how they express themselves. I dunno what you want to show, but i see Kaira how a cheerful clueless girl with deep emotions inside. But that i get mostly by images, not text. There she very often switched personalities. In one scene she can change it several times. In one moment she is cheerful, in next she is strict and cold, it flick too much. Maybe that was intended in some cases, but overall get so-so feeling.
As for the "landlady", she lacks interaction very much. Yes, there is talk, yes there is actions later, but at a start she likes a ghost. You talk to her and that's all. Expect the scene when she saw you with Nicole, that was good one, even her reaction after was done well. But after that she becomes ghost again.
I'm not an artist, but i did write that UI need some work, so i will mention that. You can change bars and other menu images with better one, this will give game some different feeling based on how you make them. You did good work with pc, so why not play it bigger and move that style to the whole game?
You can make events where girls go to mc, not mc, go to them, that can add into the game some freshness.
P.S: I like how the MC is ugly, it's add the needed humor to the game, but sometimes in serious scenes it ruin the atmosphere i dunno if you aware of that.
P.S.S: Love Caro <3
Yea, he was a good looking only at sex scenes and at dance pool :3"MC ugly"
Thanks for the rest of the feedback. The reality is I am very pressed for time and my schedule is insane. I don't have the budget to change the UI, I think the default one is familiar and serves its purpose well enough. When 0.54 comes out, please have a play and let me know what you think.
