As for this release i thought the game was definitely decent, the content was definitely limited but what's there is definitely good, the writing is in fact "smart" but it could be more compelling if the dev try to make the narration and stuff more poetic or just use more vocabulary in it, the renders of the character and environment are indeed great and i gotta say its the highlight of the game so far, the music feels fitting enough and sounds good enough, and for the story, i think it could be better for a prologue, i think a prologue should atleast give enough information about the MC, well this MC is an ex drug addict that was cured but he still have another problem which is temper problem, now there is no problem to use that character background but i think its better to give a flashback about the visual of MC temper problem to make the player feels more connected to the MC, but instead you give us a dream sex scene with The'a and that name doesn't even sync with what Ezekiel said (Ezekiel said Breaa)also the current version doesn't really make me wanting more because of the lack of things that we should look forward on our next week, all's there is just a drink with our male friend (probably gonna be some exposition and past about the MC relationship), and a mystery about two girl of our past, and i think the dev choice to mention 2 girl is one of a problem because it makes me confused about which one i should focus on, i think its better to mention 1 girl by name and then you could just refer to Breaa as "her", and lastly i think nearing the ending or in mid game you should promise a big event in the next chapter or atleast give us a cliffhanger to make us interested in the next chapter, cause for me a drink with a friend and some character background isn't enough for me to be interested
But overall i think its a solid game with a weak emphasis on story. Render, Writing, Model, Music, and Posing is definitely solid and i think you should definitely try it for urself.