VN Ren'Py Abandoned Derealization [v0.0.5.0] [Greenish Purple]

[Deep@Gaming]

I hope that the "step" sister gives up her profession in the future for a relationship with the MC ... Or maybe give an option to not have a relationship with her !!
Man ! she was cute ... !!!

 

[Chimba]

Ok soo, this needs Multiple Protagonist and Female Protagonist Tag, during the phone call from the mc to Sidney (?) the choices were for her(if this is going to be normal those tags are needed) also that was quite annoying, 13 times clicking on the same choice "Speak your truth" WTF.....

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Thela even being a hallucination, looks like the trope of that "best friend" who is very annoying, trying to teach how the mc should behave or that he spoke badly to the sister and bla bla bla and as soon as mc enters the gas station and sees this other girl the first thing she says is "She looks like a cum bucket" ahhh but the sister who is a porn actress doesn't look like that? how good it would be to have a choice to tell her to shut the fuck up...

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The back story that the dev added to the sister is hilarious, she ghosted the mc for 6 years, then in a game she tells him that she is a porn actress at least the mc didn't find out with a video of her in a GangBang

And for those who have doubts, I think she was always introduced as LI, that is, she is in the banner caressing the mc, the dev never ruled out the Incest tag (even if it was fake shit-cest) and also he had already said that the mc could have a relationship with all the girls that appear.....

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[Maevos]

Veeeeery good start.. the 'phantom' girl scenes had me genuinly laughing early on and the narrative was as solid as any new title i've seen as late.. hope this one gets enough traction to stick around.. its one to watch for the future for sure.. nicely done

Indeed. I genuinely hope that Greenish doesnt get discouraged because of the negative responses to sisters background and he gets all the support and funding he needs.

I'll be honest I just want to see more of Gray and the mechanic.

 

[baklol]

Here's my WT & Gallery Mod for Derealization v0.03a
updated

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hey man update out

 

[sdawg1234]

Was hoping the story would advance, but it sounds like the new scenes are from an earlier point from my save. Not really looking to replay if I don't have to so I guess I'll be waiting longer to continue the game.

 

[ChadInStrapJacket]

Spoiler: Dev and the sister...

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The back story that the dev added to the sister is hilarious, she ghosted the mc for 6 years, then in a game she tells him that she is a porn actress at least the mc didn't find out with a video of her in a GangBang

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ahh the classic braindead trope, not surprising.

 

[Deleted member 4865569]

Ok soo, this needs Multiple Protagonist and Female Protagonist Tag, during the phone call from the mc to Sidney (?) the choices were for her(if this is going to be normal those tags are needed) also that was quite annoying, 13 times clicking on the same choice "Speak your truth" WTF.....

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Thela even being a hallucination, looks like the trope of that "best friend" who is very annoying, trying to teach how the mc should behave or that he spoke badly to the sister and bla bla bla and as soon as mc enters the gas station and sees this other girl the first thing she says is "She looks like a cum bucket" ahhh but the sister who is a porn actress doesn't look like that? how good it would be to have a choice to tell her to shut the fuck up...

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The back story that the dev added to the sister is hilarious, she ghosted the mc for 6 years, then in a game she tells him that she is a porn actress at least the mc didn't find out with a video of her in a GangBang

And for those who have doubts, I think she was always introduced as LI, that is, she is in the banner caressing the mc, the dev never ruled out the Incest tag (even if it was fake shit-cest) and also he had already said that the mc could have a relationship with all the girls that appear.....

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the most funny thing is the people trying to defend the slut sis are saying "she not a LI" then why the hell is she in the front of the damn banner next to the mc? It's either gonna be fake incest or not but regardless if she was not a LI why be in the banner? make it make sense.. why waste time having any screen time with "NON LI" then? And if it turns out she is a LI then BAM, killed her already.

Wish these people stop being APOLYGIST for shitty writing of characters, Especially family members.. step cast or not.. people are SENSITIVE when it comes to that so it's important to write them with care and not make them been raped, sluts, cam girls. etc...

And like I said even if she is not a LI, the typical slut trope is tired df out and people are tired of it.

damn shame.

 

[SecretSal]

Not that bothered by what the stepsis does in her life, but it was a major bummer finding out that the story doesn't progress any further than the last update. Downloaded the update without checking the changelog because I remember it was one of the most well put together games I'd played here, turns out that was a mistake.

It's one thing doing this during internal development of a game to be released down the line, but another for episodic releases. We're always looking for progression, some forward momentum, and adding to the prologue instead doesn't satisfy that. Projects like these need roadmaps before the grunt work starts, or we end up with unnecessary feature creep, and narrative elements being added out of order, like so.

 

[baklol]

same story version updated

 

[BaasB]

What an boring VN

 

[vogelbeest]

MC immediately grows suspicious when Jilla tells him that a trucker helped her on the road. This will be the new dynamic in their relationship after 6 years of no-contact. I wouldn't want to be in his shoes. He is already dealing with his own shit and the first thing his stepsister does is dropping a bomb of this caliber in his lap.

To be honest, the MC is accompanied by and interacts with his imaginary ex-girlfriend, he ends his therapy and we see he is already low on medication and takes only pills when he really thinks it's needed and he already knows he will run out soon.
With a title like "Derealisation" (getting detached from reality?) it's safe to assume MC already has a twisted view of his surroundings.... He already is (bordering) psychotic, he's smart enough to still appear "normal" in most situations, but he will increasingly start losing touch with reality from medication deprival.... (psychotic people being suspicious is pretty much the standard, so is this a sign of the clinical picture or not?)

I don't want to justify the dev writing the sister into a pornstar role, but i seriously wonder how much of all we see is real and what exactly is just in MC's head? Last 2 updates mostly added the madness iirc... First the imaginary ex, now the pornstar profession....

 

[preskerd]

Here's my WT & Gallery Mod for Derealization v0.03a
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the game got updated

 

[m4pII]

This update is something like an extended prologue, where the fucked up mental state of the MC is better revealed. I like it

But I’ll probably join in the general bewilderment since it’s not clear to me why it was necessary to make a professional dick rider out of his sister.

I mean, I love your game and it didn't make it any worse, but... why?

 

[micojive]

I'll be honest, the second the sis said she was in porn I stopped caring about the story and started fast forwarding to see if the renders were worth watching. The second a potential LI drops the I fuck a ton for fun it instantly loses me.

 

[kokos94]

To be honest, the MC is accompanied by and interacts with his imaginary ex-girlfriend, he ends his therapy and we see he is already low on mediation and takes only pills when he really thinks it's needed and he already knows he will run out soon.
With a title like "Derealisation" (getting detached from reality?) it's safe to assume MC already has a twisted view of his surroundings.... He already is (bordering) psychotic, he's smart enough to still appear "normal" in most situations, but he will increasingly start losing touch with reality from medication deprival.... (psychotic people being suspicious is pretty much the standard, so is this a sign of the clinical picture or not?)

I don't want to justify the dev writing the sister into a pornstar role, but i seriously wonder how much of all we see is real and what exactly is just in MC's head? Last 2 updates mostly added the madness iirc... First the imaginary ex, now the pornstar profession....

nothing lost i guess....next update can be about how MC doesnt have sister and she was only imagination.

or everything is his imagination and he is roped in asylum

 

[kokos94]

I'll be honest, the second the sis said she was in porn I stopped caring about the story and started fast forwarding to see if the renders were worth watching. The second a potential LI drops the I fuck a ton for fun it instantly loses me.

honestly it have good renders , and looks like there will be story not some fuckfest....than i looked on tags and was pleased....no NTR shit bingo...glad that this site learned me to read coments and not trust devs much....knowing that sister (potentional LIS....when dev sayed that most of girls are romanceable and if not they r fuckable) is fucking on cam for money totaly destroyed it and even did not downloaded that.

 

[AM97]

Ok soo, this needs Multiple Protagonist and Female Protagonist Tag, during the phone call from the mc to Sidney (?) the choices were for her(if this is going to be normal those tags are needed) also that was quite annoying, 13 times clicking on the same choice "Speak your truth" WTF.....

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Thela even being a hallucination, looks like the trope of that "best friend" who is very annoying, trying to teach how the mc should behave or that he spoke badly to the sister and bla bla bla and as soon as mc enters the gas station and sees this other girl the first thing she says is "She looks like a cum bucket" ahhh but the sister who is a porn actress doesn't look like that? how good it would be to have a choice to tell her to shut the fuck up...

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The back story that the dev added to the sister is hilarious, she ghosted the mc for 6 years, then in a game she tells him that she is a porn actress at least the mc didn't find out with a video of her in a GangBang

And for those who have doubts, I think she was always introduced as LI, that is, she is in the banner caressing the mc, the dev never ruled out the Incest tag (even if it was fake shit-cest) and also he had already said that the mc could have a relationship with all the girls that appear.....

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Ah yes. We see someone literally fearing for her life and still trying to retain a sense of normalcy that is adequatly protrayed by wanting to do something but scared it could make it worse. And the MC taking pills and still talking to a presumed dead girlfried while we have flashbacks of him punching someone into the ground.
But all that doesn't matter, you had to click more and read more. Who the fuck cares about a story that makes sense while not spoonfeeding us and respecting the players to be able to actually think

 

[KeiNineX]

I think you should have been able to choose how MC reacts to the sister. The way it's handled now is kind of like a joke which is a bit weird. Some people just don't like this kind of stuff ESPECIALLY with a sister. Also if she's an LI then this whole situation is just a recipe for disaster, if she's like a minor side character then it's kind of whatever imo.

 

[m4pII]

Seriously? Rating a great game with one star just because a minor character works in porn?

 

[Alfius]

Bit sad that the story did not progress, but no worries, still love the game.
I still think it's one of the best games on the site.