VN Ren'Py Abandoned Derealization [v0.0.5.0] [Greenish Purple]

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Before I Forget

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LOL SO MAKING A SISTER A SLUT AND A PORNSTAR ? What I am suppose to feel bad for the lil whore?

HAHAAHAHAHH

IGNORE LIST this one goes.


Don't care if she a LI or not like how about leaving family members df alone?

Oh nah we can't do that, "MUH REALISM" HUH?

man fuck her.
and if she is a LI down the line and we doing "step sis" to dodge the tag then fuck that too because she is ruined.


dev this is your game do whatever df you want, but I for one is not sticking around.

god what is with these devs fucking up there VNs?

like fuck.
Sure, but if my (step)sister dropped off the planet with no contact for 6 years and refuses to explain why, but "teehee let's play these 2 truths one lie game woops, I'm a porn actress now" and then act like nothing happened I would be understandably upset
Jesus fuck people are upset for having a character who does porn? What shallow smooth brains people have now. And people are pretending as if this is the norm now, when in fact the VAST majority of titles here don't feature this.
People are really pretending as if this is the end of the world when a massive irony just went over their heads. What disgusting people to think that a person is "ruined" now for doing porn and sleeping with people. When in fact most games here feature an MC being a WHORE who sleeps with a lot of women, who has a lot of partners; the same games that these people are praising and clapping. They are literally in a porn site playing as characters (sometimes even wanting to be able to change the MC's name so they can insert themselves more) who acts like a slut and then complain when having a character in a game does the same. It's hearing a person call others ugly and not realizing how hideous they are because they never bothered to look in the mirror. If you want the same old generic game where you can act like a whore and everyone else are pure and only has hots on you then feel free to look at most other games in this site. There's a butload of them.
Personally, I hope you well Dev. Your game stands out and its storytelling coupled with good CG quality and humor is a gem in this site where a lot of stale, repetitive games are being released. When this game was released, it really caught my attention and I hope you continue on this path. Your unconventional style already makes this more compelling than most titles here.
Seriously? Rating a great game with one star just because a minor character works in porn?
Again, if this game was promised her to be a love interest than yeah it's kind of fucking up and if she isn't and she's just your sister than it's still fucked up. Porn isn't something you just casually do, we're not talking about something in the same realm of deciding what's for dinner. Jilla isn't even the big problem here, it's the story and the ridiculousness of it.
 

vogelbeest

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Again, if this game was promised her to be a love interest than yeah it's kind of fucking up and if she isn't and she's just your sister than it's still fucked up. Porn isn't something you just casually do, we're not talking about something in the same realm of deciding what's for dinner. Jilla isn't even the big problem here, it's the story and the ridiculousness of it.
Dunno why the story is ridiculous, there's people with mental problems out there, actually there's more possible patients then treatment spots... Treatment can be forced if a patient is a danger to others or him/herself, but even then they have rights, this can't be done on a whim, certain rules must be followed. Most patients are voluntary and can chose to end their treatment... A psychiatrist can see it's not a good idea, but again, voluntary treatment can be ended any time....

I can agree this is a story that's not suited for all, i can even accept people being disappointed about the sisters background...
But the story telling is well above average, perhaps it's not the story you are looking for, and that's okay, but a story of a mental patient without any form of humor would be far heavier to digest. However the dev manages to deliver comic relief and still manages to bring attention to the signs belonging to the clinical picture of the main character...
If you have a conversation with a person in a psychose, you will often conclude his/her ideas are ridiculous, strange or crazy.
Sometimes it's sad, other times it's even funny.... Even with all the madness they're people with their own personalities...
 

goulet1995

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Dunno why the story is ridiculous, there's people with mental problems out there, actually there's more possible patients then treatment spots... Treatment can be forced if a patient is a danger to others or him/herself, but even then they have rights, this can't be done on a whim, certain rules must be followed. Most patients are voluntary and can chose to end their treatment... A psychiatrist can see it's not a good idea, but again, voluntary treatment can be ended any time....

I can agree this is a story that's not suited for all, i can even accept people being disappointed about the sisters background...
But the story telling is well above average, perhaps it's not the story you are looking for, and that's okay, but a story of a mental patient without any form of humor would be far heavier to digest. However the dev manages to deliver comic relief and still manages to bring attention to the signs belonging to the clinical picture of the main character...
If you have a conversation with a person in a psychose, you will often conclude his/her ideas are ridiculous, strange or crazy.
Sometimes it's sad, other times it's even funny.... Even with all the madness they're people with their own personalities...
i liked this game quite a bit until this update where now the sister is a pornstar completly kills the charactor for myself and alot of people obviously. had she been introduced like this originally then there is no room to say anything but changing her backstory after the fact is shitty cant trust the dev to not make other similar changes.
 

CrazyRabbit

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I loved the rework on this game ; it shows much better the madness and the troubles of our MC.
Don't understand why everyone is so upset about the stepsis... Sure I'm not that thrilled to have her be a pornstar but it gives her more depth than just being the MC's emotional support.
Did she got in the business of her own free will ? Is she really happy or liying to herself ? So much more drama to get from this.

Only a few things (some of them trivial, i'm sorry) got me wondering ; here they are :

1) Is the sis an official LI ? Or are we just having her as a sister and helping her for whatever problem she have ?
2 ) What about Glory ? Hate to leave without telling her ; plus the way the old guy said "we'll discuss it and maybe you'll love it"... that sound as dreadful as possible... Don't want to find the poor girl in a prostitute business....
3) Is it a good thing to call Sidney about the neighbour ? It makes her smile and have a date with her but it comes with so much warning that I actually fear for the girl...

Anyway, can't wait for 0.05 and great job Greenish
 

TurtleTacts

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I guess I'm disappointed with the update not continuing where the story left off. This is the second update where you had to rework the beginning, which took longer. How many more revisions are needed to get the ball rolling again? Could all this not have been revealed later because at this point it feels like filler? I like some of the characters and I like how you manipulate the camera to get cool shots or to show and not tell. So if perfectionism is the goal it's folly and only stunts progression.

If I see your next update, I'll see it and if not it was a good run
 

Thedude715

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Hm my last save date says I played this in february, so... yeah the game has had a rework? Added stuff is cool I suppose but no plot progression after almost a year.
 

kokos94

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I loved the rework on this game ; it shows much better the madness and the troubles of our MC.
Don't understand why everyone is so upset about the stepsis... Sure I'm not that thrilled to have her be a pornstar but it gives her more depth than just being the MC's emotional support.

Greenish
definitely, with sister fucking for money her character is perfect and complete, so there is probably no need to continue writing her in game...like ever.
 
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preskerd

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Greenish nice job for completely ruining Jil's character for me. She was the best character for me. It's not just she is a ex pornstar, you literally tell us that she is still actively doing porn. She fucks dudes for money. Also yeah it wasn't even like masturbation porn or lesbian porn. It's dudes with monster dicks fucking her in front of a camera . Ahahahaha. Nice occupation you give to mc's step sister and potential love interest. You must be a really clever developer. Also the audacity to type 'NO NTR!!!' in op is almost comedical. What a way to destroy your otherwise a really good game. I loved the characters and writing and you have to go all the way make one of the best characters a literal pornstar and ruin the game. Thanks I guess. Good luck with this trainwreck of a story you just made with Jil
 
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WatsonJohn

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Thank you dev for breaking the mold and being based. It's entertaining seeing how the people who keep enabling generic, repetitive, and bland stories and characters that are endemic in this site are malding. I'm excited to see where you're taking this and I hope you'll fulfill the vision you have for this game.
 

kokos94

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Thank you dev for breaking the mold and being based. It's entertaining seeing how the people who keep enabling generic, repetitive, and bland stories and characters that are endemic in this site are malding. I'm excited to see where you're taking this and I hope you'll fulfill the vision you have for this game.
u got that wrong.....she could be literaly anything, yet she is another whore like in other games where devs cant think about something comlex....
 

Kalsan

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Thank you dev for breaking the mold and being based. It's entertaining seeing how the people who keep enabling generic, repetitive, and bland stories and characters that are endemic in this site are malding. I'm excited to see where you're taking this and I hope you'll fulfill the vision you have for this game.
Dude what are talking about? Another dev ruining a good character by making her a whore is fucking everyday in this kind of games. What is even more annoying is all this white knights defending this shit like making her a whore was the best and more innovative thing to do, like seriously? I suppose all this white knights like to play to "Tell me you are cuck without telling me you are a cuck".
 

goulet1995

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Dude what are talking about? Another dev ruining a good character by making her a whore is fucking everyday in this kind of games. What is even more annoying is all this white knights defending this shit like making her a whore was the best and more innovative thing to do, like seriously? I suppose all this white knights like to play to "Tell me you are cuck without telling me you are a cuck".
exactly i never try to shit on a game for the type of content i it but the worst thing about it is it was added later and not in the original in games where i side charactor has a reveal like this i will usually still play as long as i can completly avoid the charactor but not when its a part of the main cast or a family member.
 
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preskerd

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Dude what are talking about? Another dev ruining a good character by making her a whore is fucking everyday in this kind of games. What is even more annoying is all this white knights defending this shit like making her a whore was the best and more innovative thing to do, like seriously? I suppose all this white knights like to play to "Tell me you are cuck without telling me you are a cuck".
Don't waste time with that guy. Dude thinks a character which had sexual relationships and being a fucking pornstar is the same thing. He thinks like we are hated this because Jil have had sex. I think in his mind there is no difference between a woman who is not a virgin and a literal pornstar who fucks huge dicks in front of a camera for money. Nobody here said that she needs to be pure virgin girl. But I think there is a fine line between a pure virgin girl and a fucking pornstar. She is still doing porn actively so not even a expornstar or something rofl. Also he thinks this whore/pornstar backstory is something new / fresh ahahahahah
 
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Well looks like porn sister is here to stay dev is liking all post that support it so lets see how dev will try to dodge the ntr tag. One thing i find funny is the NO NTR plastered all over by the dev so the dev knew the people brought in did not want that content. So this is going to be another game that is trying to ride the line and say "well it technically is not ntr" but if the dev knows to put bold no ntr why would people who hate ntr be happy about the technicality. Plus it is even worse with a sister....
 

kokos94

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Well looks like porn sister is here to stay dev is liking all post that support it so lets see how dev will try to dodge the ntr tag. One thing i find funny is the NO NTR plastered all over by the dev so the dev knew the people brought in did not want that content. So this is going to be another game that is trying to ride the line and say "well it technically is not ntr" but if the dev knows to put bold no ntr why would people who hate ntr be happy about the technicality. Plus it is even worse with a sister....
well it looks more than he just wanted to avoid abandoned tag after year (cant blame him for that) by redworking game by few diferences.

and unfortunately he got that "original" idea that in adult game must be whores, cause it is adult game and what is more adult than chick who take dicks for money?

and what is even beter idea than do it MCs sister...ppl just must love it cause ppl like sisters and whores.
 
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