VN Ren'Py Abandoned Derealization [v0.0.5.0] [Greenish Purple]

[estrada777]

Greenish I'm working on a port to Android for this game and I wanted to suggest that you run the "Check Script (Lint)" Activity in the Renpy Launcher. It finds a lot of issues, many of which you can ignore, but it is also pointing out a few actual problems with your code.

Love the artwork in this game, by the way.

 

[gregers]

None of the choices in the game so far seems to matter. At least for now this looks to be an entirely linear story where you can occasionally pick some dialogue options for colour.

Other than that, the setup and the writing (apart from the poor English) is pretty decent. The highly introspective, melancholy tone isn't really something I find appealing, but it is well done for what it is. And as others have said above, always appreciate having an actual adult as the MC.

 

[estrada777]

Updated Android port. Nothing too fancy but let me know if you have any issues.

Version: 0.0.5

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[YogSothoth1982]

Good question.

Let's start with what will NOT be in the game:
NO NTR
NO PREGNANCY
NO GAY
NO FUTA/TRANS
NO SANDBOX

PLANING:
YES most of the basic sex tags
YES HARDCORE
YES LESBIAN
YES HAREM
YES CHEATING
YES TWINS
YES MILF
YES MALE DOMINATION
YES CREAMPIE
YES HORROR
YES HUMOR
YES GRAPHIC VIOLENCE
YES ANIMATED
YES BLACKMAIL

Most of tags will be optional.

I don't touch other tags because I don't know if I will use them.

Will blackmail, lesbian and male domination be among the optional tags?

 

[HogRocket]

I really hate starting up stories with depressed shithead MC's with anger issues......because I started out as a depressed shithead with anger issues. Stories like this are a little to "close to home" sometimes starting out but, depending on how they're written, can be kind of cathartic as they progress. I still deal with depression, but I have learned to process the anger and "cage the beast" better and better over the years and hopefully I'm not as much of a shithead anymore . There are some games where the MC either never shows progress or it takes a looooooong time. I like to see some progress early, even if the struggle continues for awhile (believe me it is a lifetime struggle that never truly ends), because it shows that the game is going to be worth following to watch the "redemption". So far - pretty interesting. Gonna keep following.

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

Well, make it a yes and this game will surely takeoff in terms of success, you know how the incest folks are

I mean "kind of" could also mean she and the MC might not be blood related but grew up as siblings... Cant say it's incest then cause they not related... Id actually prefer it to be that way so it won't be weird to start a romantic relationship with her

 

[Rodrigoofb]

I mean "kind of" could also mean she and the MC might not be blood related but grew up as siblings... Cant say it's incest then cause they not related... Id actually prefer it to be that way so it won't be weird to start a romantic relationship with her

I totally agree with that, but if i'm not mistaken even stepcest is forbidden by patreon rules, so i was worried we wouldn't get any content with her at all.

 

[khalidevil]

Good question.

Let's start with what will NOT be in the game:
NO NTR
NO PREGNANCY
NO GAY
NO FUTA/TRANS
NO SANDBOX

PLANING:
YES most of the basic sex tags
YES HARDCORE
YES LESBIAN
YES HAREM
YES CHEATING
YES TWINS
YES MILF
YES MALE DOMINATION
YES CREAMPIE
YES HORROR
YES HUMOR
YES GRAPHIC VIOLENCE
YES ANIMATED
YES BLACKMAIL

Most of tags will be optional.

I don't touch other tags because I don't know if I will use them.

No baby making... shame on you
Going to try it anyway.
Good luck dev with the game.

 

[estrada777]

Update for the mod made by ripson

android port by estrada777

It's already in there.

 

[Nizzquizz]

... wait, 'yes harem'?
So I don't have to decide between Sydney and Gray? Maybe even get a side dish of twin magic?
Yeeeeeshhhh!

But seriously tho, just wanted to say - I came in bored and looking for a fap, but the writing captured me so quickly, I kinda just forgot about that. Which speaks volumes about the writing ... if you can keep that level up, this is going straight to the top of my list, right behind Summer's Gone. The Sydney scene with the let's call it 'insistent voice' alone was chef's kiss.

Great job and great characters, I'm hooked and eagerly waiting for more!

 

[UnDoubleUpUhUh]

SWEET JESUS WHAT IS WITH THAT EVIL-I-FIED DOUBLE FREAKIN' STANK EYE?????

 

[Greenish]

Will blackmail, lesbian and male domination be among the optional tags?

Yup.

 

[omega_rugal]

scene with heels??

 

[Troy9000]

The 4th preview pic looks like the dude has to take a serious poop , colon issues ?

 

[oidex]

that is such a stupid plot that it makes the last of part 2 look like a masterpiece of a story

Have you ever worked in a virtually all-female office?
I had the dubious honor of working in one for a year, and the similarity was uncanny.
The top boss was basically made out of elbows and "toughness". The section chiefs were tripping over themselves trying to stab each other in the back while smiling. The workers were talking about sex all day. And everybody was trash-talking everybody else behind their backs.
If I didn't need the money that badly back then, I would have walked out of there on day one.

 

[Sum Boodee]

It's already in there.

Yeah IK, I'm letting people know that a port exists with the mod

 

[Dnutz]

Have you ever worked in a virtually all-female office?
I had the dubious honor of working in one for a year, and the similarity was uncanny.
The top boss was basically made out of elbows and "toughness". The section chiefs were tripping over themselves trying to stab each other in the back while smiling. The workers were talking about sex all day. And everybody was trash-talking everybody else behind their backs.
If I didn't need the money that badly back then, I would have walked out of there on day one.

sounds a bit like working at a strip club lol, locker room gossip check, trying to be the envy of all check, being desired more for your talents of persuading others into there greedy hearts of there wants and needs check and check.

 

[Ali ibn Hassan]

SWEET JESUS WHAT IS WITH THAT EVIL-I-FIED DOUBLE FREAKIN' STANK EYE?????

Took a little while before it sunk in!

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

I totally agree with that, but if i'm not mistaken even stepcest is forbidden by patreon rules, so i was worried we wouldn't get any content with her at all.

Wait so even if they not related its still an issue? That's just fucked up... Well let's hope the dev can find a way to work around that without getting into any shit..that's if he plans on making her a potential love interest

 

[HogRocket]

Have you ever worked in a virtually all-female office?
I had the dubious honor of working in one for a year, and the similarity was uncanny.
The top boss was basically made out of elbows and "toughness". The section chiefs were tripping over themselves trying to stab each other in the back while smiling. The workers were talking about sex all day. And everybody was trash-talking everybody else behind their backs.
If I didn't need the money that badly back then, I would have walked out of there on day one.

Yeah, every time I hear "the world would be a better place if women ran it" or "toxic masculinity" I think about having worked in an office of mostly women and how vicious they are to each other and how vicious they were to each other in school. My wife hates working with lots of other women, she hires mostly men and if a woman starts drama...."there's the door".