VN Ren'Py Desire for Freedom [v0.1.2] [GNK]

[Look-see]

the Samantha and Alan scenes suck ass. wish we could have an option to avoid those but the biggest issue is. that the game update are so small that at the way its going after 10 updates you'll be lucky to kill 10 mins of playtime. each update is pretty much just one scene.

 

[str8up]

i dont think that's a bad ending or leading to one. it probably just means that the consequence is Pregnancy.

that would be rewarding

 

[ben akeba]

i'm still waiting for the dev to tell us how much he'll pay us to play is pre-alpha demo of his game concept while sniffing bug typo and other shit

 

[Gleemer]

Here is the Italian translation

of Desire for Freedom [v0.04P]

This translation is "unofficial, it was created by a fan.



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Ecco la traduzione italiana

di un fan Desire for Freedom [v0.04P]

Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" è stata generata da un fan.



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Here is the Italian translation

of Desire for Freedom [v0.04R]

This translation is "unofficial, it was created by a fan.



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Ecco la traduzione italiana

di un fan Desire for Freedom [v0.04R]

Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" è stata generata da un fan.



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Here is the Italian translation

of Desire for Freedom [v0.03P]

This translation is "unofficial, it was created by a fan.



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Ecco la traduzione italiana

di un fan Desire for Freedom [v0.03P]

Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" è stata generata da un fan.



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[Here is the Italian translation

of Desire for Freedom [v0.03R]

This translation is "unofficial, it was created by a fan.



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Ecco la traduzione italiana

di un fan Desire for Freedom [v0.03R]

Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" è stata generata da un fan.



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Here is the Italian translation

of Desire for Freedom [v0.02]

This translation is "unofficial, it was created by a fan.



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Ecco la traduzione italiana

di un fan Desire for Freedom [v0.02]

Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" è stata generata da un fan.

Italian translation

Updated: 2021-09-01
Version: 0.04p

 

[Denos]

Mega link

 

[ben akeba]

If you don't like you can't play! Wait for updates of good games with a large team of developers and a big budget

i was just venting my anger at seeing another mediocre dev asking money for his subpar atempt at what could barely pass as an early demo of an uninspired "game" don't worry unless you call me back to spit on your trash i won't come back ^^ have a nice one

 

[ben akeba]

Sorry if I made you uncomfortable! Please refrain from downloading next time. My game is not for sophisticated critics like you. I will continue development in spite of this negative feedback from you. There are people who like my game and I do it for them. THX

you do you, but as long as you keep asking for me to come back to your thread ... i'll keep on telling you that you are mediore as a game developper and that the early pre-alpha demo of a concept of an un inspired game full of lag, typo, engrish and inconsistencies does not deserve to be called a game please just understand that i'm not thinking of myself as a sophisticated game critic, your error you call a game just suck ^^ once again have a nice none and please don't bother me with anwser it's wasting my time T_T

 

[defd©™]

and please don't bother me with anwser it's wasting my time T_T

Just one question...
Are you a developer?
Where i can find your games just to understand your great skill in developing games.
Judging an artist by his incomplete work is truly uncivilized.
Most of the new games here are posted with a few pages and stories that are in the early stages ... if you think you can do better ... post your game so I can have fun criticizing your mediocrity.
to judge the artist you have to wait until his work is complete ... or do you want to censor his story? ... this is simple to do ... go away from here and don't come back

I'm sure this game will be better very soon
Thanks to GNK games for is awesome work.

i'm not thinking of myself as a sophisticated game critic

you are not an art critic
you're just insulting the artist... and this is not correct!

 

[isabellapink]

This game is very interesting
talks about the women freedom...
I'm in.
Thanks to the developer

 

[ben akeba]

Just one question...
Are you a developer?
Where i can find your games just to understand your great skill in developing games.
Judging an artist by his incomplete work is truly uncivilized.
Most of the new games here are posted with a few pages and stories that are in the early stages ... if you think you can do better ... post your game so I can have fun criticizing your mediocrity.
to judge the artist you have to wait until his work is complete ... or do you want to censor his story? ... this is simple to do ... go away from here and don't come back

I'm sure this game will be better very soon
Thanks to GNK games for is awesome work.


you are not an art critic
you're just insulting the artist... and this is not correct!

yes i'm a developer, to make it clear my skill aren't that great but my work is meticulous and my games were both uploaded only once finished

and while i'm not nice with my word or suggar coating anything while commenting about what is lacking i think that if the dev had any counter argument that was reasonable to my first comment where i snapped i would have given him my sincere apologies ... that is not the case, he just snapped back at me like a child (because there's nothing actualy wrong in what i said) and now some random passerby is doing the same ... hope you'll get some joy out of the time i've lost anwsering your irelevant comment

btw most of the game you're speacking about are the reason i snapped it was not only gnk, but i'm not don quichote and won't fight against this trend of thinking that puting two pictures and one animation is sufficient to call yourself a dev and call what you did a game
and i won't be posting my game on f95 as they don't have sexual content and most importantly they are in french :/
as i don't fight against dumb trend i don't shit on rules and the users either ^^

i'll now wish you a good day and hope that you can see that when you "play" something with bug, typo, engrish, inconsistencies in the scenario/naration/event and you are asked to pay for it while reporting the problem, you are not respected (and i'm nice i'm not speacking about the renders this time ^^)

 

[defd©™]

you are not respected (and i'm nice i'm not speacking about the renders this time ^^)

Are you sure that I'm not respected?
and if you do not respect me why you replay to me?

yes i'm a developer, to make it clear my skill aren't that great but my work is meticulous and my games were both uploaded only once finished

Intresting.... so I got you!
but are not a professional developer because professionals do not try to change the nibd of another developer insulting him.
I replay to you just because yours is not a critic ... you are directly insulting the dev!
There is nothing meticulous in what you wrote about you as developer

i was just venting my anger at seeing another mediocre dev asking money for his subpar atempt at what could barely pass as an early demo of an uninspired "game" don't worry unless you call me back to spit on your trash i won't come back ^^ have a nice one

This is an insult is not a critic and your english skill is very bad can you please correct the "version of your lyrics"?!
(this is a critic without insulting you)
I can't wait to see your artworks...
you can just post here one of your marvelous render... just one please^ ^!

^^ once again have a nice none and please don't bother me with anwser it's wasting my time T_T

I'm quoting you as example.. (bad english as always)
seems that you are not telling the true
I think you want waste your time so bad to replay here... It is clear that there is something in the plot of this game that reveals your frustration about women's freedom - maybe you can go to Afghanistan I'm sure you'll be happy there

I do not believe a single word you write.
but I always respect who does not think like me!

if you don't respect people just because they think differently from yours ... you are nothing!

Cheers

 

[ben akeba]

Are you sure that I'm not respected?
and if you do not respect me why you replay to me?


Intresting.... so I got you!
but are not a professional developer because professionals do not try to change the nibd of another developer insulting him.
I replay to you just because yours is not a critic ... you are directly insulting the dev!
There is nothing meticulous in what you wrote about you as developer

This is an insult is not a critic and your english skill is very bad can you please correct the "version of your lyrics"?!
(this is a critic without insulting you)
I can't wait to see your artworks...
you can just post here one of your marvelous render... just one please^ ^!


I'm quoting you as example.. (bad english as always)
seems that you are not telling the true
I think you want waste your time so bad to replay here... It is clear that there is something in the plot of this game that reveals your frustration about women's freedom - maybe you can go to Afghanistan I'm sure you'll be happy there

I do not believe a single word you written.
but I always respect who does not think like me!

if you don't respect people just because they think differently from yours ... you are nothing!

Cheers

that's some elaborate bullshit here ^^

how does pointing out that a user of f95 zone isn't fluent in english (while making as much butchering of english as myself if not more) make gnk "game" something worth praising ?
i only made comment about the quality never the theme or the content( except the lack of it ^^)
does your point have anything to do with my comments or are you just angry because i don't praise something that don't deserve it

btw quoting only the part of a comment that make you look like the nice guy is a bit cheap >< even more when you don't seem to even understand what is writen
while i don't despise you, i do think you may be a little simple but don't worry i'm not disrespecting you as much as gnk and all the dev that ask you to pay to eat their shit :S

once again have a nice ... nah it was vaguely funny at first but you're a complete bore and a very disrespectfull prick T_T
on a side note AH i got you i never "replay" you i only anwser to your dumb comment :3

 

[defd©™]

AH i got you i never "replay" you i only anwser to your dumb comment :3

what is the difference?
you are quoting me so... youwrite real nonsense... just go out of here if you do nopt like the game!

 

[isabellapink]

I do not understand why people that evidently do not like the game continuing to arguing the same words..
I like this game een it is too short
I hope to see soon more content!

 

[Knight D]

Android?

 

[ben akeba]

what is the difference?
you are quoting me so... youwrite real nonsense... just go out of here if you do nopt like the game!

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have nothing to do here ^^
i don't like the game, but after saying it clearly once i got some childish answer by the dev then you an irelevant passerby started questioning my right to have an opinion then decided to quote part of my statement and point some typo in my comment to show how right you where to deny my opinion about ... the subject of this thread that certainly doesn't deserve to be called a game ^^

 

[defd©™]

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have nothing to do here ^^
i don't like the game, but after saying it clearly once i got some childish answer by the dev then you an irelevant passerby started questioning my right to have an opinion then decided to quote part of my statement and point some typo in my comment to show how right you where to deny my opinion about ... the subject of this thread that certainly doesn't deserve to be called a game ^^

You repeat yourself … yours are not opinions… you are just trolling here.

 

[defd©™]

This game is great and if the dev continues with one update every month he will get a lot of supporter... because the story is very good and promising
I will do my best to support his patreon soon as possible!

 

[ben akeba]

You repeat yourself … yours are not opinions… you are just trolling here.

if your difficulty to understand me (faked or not :X) did not bring the same question when you try to make me look bad for not praising something that do not deserve it, i would not repeat my point over and over again T_T aslo if you were not trying to have the last word while being in the wrong and speacking with a very stuborn person the problem would be solved (the one you want to see at least)

so as you say i repeat myself and i see you overpraising the shit out of the "game"
there's no consistencies in the renders, the naration is all over the place, the lack of content make it a kinetik novel while not being tagged as such, another tag that's wrong is the male protagonist you spend half of the ten minute of gameplay playing as a female character btw ten minnute of gameplay for a 0.0.1 would be ridiculous but here there's actually 4 or 5 upload that happenned since the fisrt one but between the paywall version and other change that are not even completely implemanted the actual content of the game did not grow much and the quality did not raise in any way some random irrelevant passerby told me to go to afganistan because saying that the scenario is cliché and badly writen seem to mean to him that i'm against women's right ... so you're saying that showing a woman cheat on her husband and ridicule him on a daily basis is showing women's freedom ... no, it's a very machist way of seeing women as gold digger only interested to serve a powerfull and rich male clearly this story is not one that praise women it actualy look down on them

and after the dev throwing all this shit at us f95 users you are calling me a troll ... that's what i call trolling, when adding the fact that earlier to make my argument look empty you were quoting only part of my sentence and only from the post where you could fish something other than a comment about the "game" trying as much as you could to turn around what i was saying

 

[isabellapink]

if your difficulty to understand me (faked or not :X) did not bring the same question when you try to make me look bad for not praising something that do not deserve it, i would not repeat my point over and over again T_T aslo if you were not trying to have the last word while being in the wrong and speacking with a very stuborn person the problem would be solved (the one you want to see at least)

so as you say i repeat myself and i see you overpraising the shit out of the "game"
there's no consistencies in the renders, the naration is all over the place, the lack of content make it a kinetik novel while not being tagged as such, another tag that's wrong is the male protagonist you spend half of the ten minute of gameplay playing as a female character btw ten minnute of gameplay for a 0.0.1 would be ridiculous but here there's actually 4 or 5 upload that happenned since the fisrt one but between the paywall version and other change that are not even completely implemanted the actual content of the game did not grow much and the quality did not raise in any way some random irrelevant passerby told me to go to afganistan because saying that the scenario is cliché and badly writen seem to mean to him that i'm against women's right ... so you're saying that showing a woman cheat on her husband and ridicule him on a daily basis is showing women's freedom ... no, it's a very machist way of seeing women as gold digger only interested to serve a powerfull and rich male clearly this story is not one that praise women it actualy look down on them

and after the dev throwing all this shit at us f95 users you are calling me a troll ... that's what i call trolling, when adding the fact that earlier to make my argument look empty you were quoting only part of my sentence and only from the post where you could fish something other than a comment about the "game" trying as much as you could to turn around what i was saying

This game comes with great renders and a very good story and there is also pregnancy in the tag and this is not common

yes it is a little but short but seems that the updates comes every month and that is awesome
I have seen also other completed game that are shorter than this one

In any case I think the potential in this story is very promising and i'm sure there will be interesting surprises.

This game has a VN structure and that is great because i dn't like sandbox games where the gring and the click click just hiding that the story is short.
I guess this developer does all the work without a team and I admire his strength and the passion he put in his work

Why you are continuing to repeat the same shit about this dev and F95?
I think you have to calm down.

sorry for errors in my english I'm using google to translate.