- Oct 26, 2017
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I think its hilarious that if you let one guy brush up on your wife one time it just opens up the flood gates and she is up for grabs for any guy that walks past. Thats is some grade A writing as far as conflict and build up. Its actually shocking that she hasn't accidentally already been mind broken by a light breeze well before the story starts lol. Although the way you stomp out the NTR route is just as funny so I guess its balances out.
That was kinda fast. Almost as fast as the demo but I enjoyed it.
I just wish it had been longer and I played all the paths.
When is the next update?
I just wish it had been longer and I played all the paths.
When is the next update?
Who cares about that? All the devs have that problem.
- Oct 23, 2016
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More like his fifth or 20th language.
You sir obviously play all the wrong games. We have games with great writing here and a lot with really good writing.
So just looking at the Show affection points box tells me that one of the female characters gets cucked but not the mc ...nice.
I notice all the games have misspelling. What are you playing tic tac toe?More like his fifth or 20th language.
You sir obviously play all the wrong games. We have games with great writing here and a lot with really good writing.
- Dec 9, 2018
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Ain't nuthin' to it, Gangsta Rap made me do it.
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- Mar 13, 2018
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Nice game & sweet graphics, but the spelling & grammar are absolute shite (yeah I don't have great grammar, but atleast I know the basics & I'm good at spelling- especially with the auto spell check). It'd be alright if it was a few misspelled words here & there but damn near every sentence has misspelled words. Like at the first crime scene- "The crime sean is clean, No blood." (the word is spelled "scene" NOT "sean", & a word isn't capitalized after a comma unless it is Name or similar).
- Oct 23, 2016
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Wow, and you double down on your ridiculous statement.
Dude, there is a huge difference between the occasional misspelling and what happens in this game, where you practically can't find a sentence without one.
What about Phillygames VNs? Acting Lessons, MrDotsgames, Where The Heart Is, etc... there are dozens of games here where you have the occasional error, but apart from that the writing is great and the English fine.
Honestly, I get if you exaggerated for effect, but to stubbornly insist and even be stand-offish about it, that's really immature.
- Nov 22, 2018
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I really believe the devs could save themselves a ton of grief just by saying what their "true" intention for there game is, wether its gonna be NTR or non-NTR heavy. When devs dont state it clearly it will always piss off one side or the other. But I get it. They want drum up possible support and saying that one side will always get the short end is not going to fill their coffers.
This is probably the first game I've played that have spelling errors at just about every click.
That is not the only problem- there are some wrong words being used. "wont" when it should be "want" (or it is a spelling error... with so many it is hard to tell), "laying" when it should be "lying" etc...
That is not the only problem- there are some wrong words being used. "wont" when it should be "want" (or it is a spelling error... with so many it is hard to tell), "laying" when it should be "lying" etc...
I have tried to start the review with something good or neutral several times and couldn't find anyhing good or neutral in the Detective Life. This game is crap. Story is lazyass straightforward bundle, characters are nonexistent, spelling is horrible... Damn! There have to be a standard for those things! Even for a porn game, writing is bad. It is so bad that it's actually turning you off. Waste of time.
Its a devs world get used to t.Za inglisch iz soh bed that jou cane bearly unterstend
I'd give the game a -1 of 5 stars.
- Aug 21, 2018
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Wow ... is this a 1:1 copy from the game? reads like it ^^Za inglisch iz soh bed that jou cane bearly unterstend
I'd give the game a -1 of 5 stars.
I mean, the game really needs a proof reader. I said it after the demo and it is still true.
The dev seems to lack even the basic understanding of the english language... you can make some mistakes, fuck up grammar and stuff, but this is on a different level.
I wont play this in its current state ... you cant get a hard on, when you try to avoid peeing yourself while laughing so hard because of the writing...
- May 19, 2018
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I agree that Dev's need to make a choice about NTR and if it is the main focus or just a side portion of a game. I personally dont like NTR and wont play heavy NTR games but to each their own. Like that its avoidable here.
The Engrish is SOOOO Bad! He needs a spellchecker and an English proofreader. Makes the game unplayable.
The Engrish is SOOOO Bad! He needs a spellchecker and an English proofreader. Makes the game unplayable.
Welcome to F95 Zone where the games have that problem 24/7
Hey only in america
- Feb 17, 2019
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