VN Ren'Py Abandoned Deviancy [v0.4 Bugfix] [Mr. B0NES]

[mr.AwesomeGameTaste]

I got to say I really liked this one.I enjoy the dialogues,the banter between characters is great.I like that the mc is not a pathetic pervert spying on everyone in the shower.I also like that Suzie is the one who takes initiative.I feel like in the incest games where a girl is younger,she should be the one wanting to go for it more,otherwise all of the concerns that the aunt has about suzie being unsure and naive,become more valid. Liz is great and the date scene just felt natural,without said perving (apart from when he was staring at her ass,but she obviously wanted it) so yeah great job. The only thing I would change is that mc jokes too much even in more intimate setting like when he was with Liz in her room,It just felt too much at times,but that just me.
Overall,great job dev and can't wait for more!

 

[Lasse.9]

can the mc not be another braindead, cowardly, horny and immature kid.
that is how the protagonist in many games, including this one. they are often just plainly pathetic.
it would be great if the MC's in tis game and many other, ware at bit smarter, confident, can go 5 minutes without thinking about sex and learned some maturity.

 

[NoxLaw]

Why exactly would I want to ask Liz out after all this shit she's pulled? She's just fake.

 

[dartman51]

The girl is cute, BUT, she looks a LITTLE creepy with no eye lashes. Just sayin.

OK. After playing awhile, I noticed that the Dev added some eyelashes and a darker skin tone. She looks pretty hot now.

 

[LorgarAurelian]

Why exactly would I want to ask Liz out after all this shit she's pulled? She's just fake.

Exactly what kind of shit has she pulled, can't remember her doing anything that would make me not wanting to ask her out.

 

[jufot]

OK, I seriously loved this update. That chemistry class was pure excellence with top-shelf banter, and auntie turned out to be a much more interesting character than I'd have imagined. The utterly neurotic and insecure Suzy being A-OK with MC's date with Liz was a bit too porn-logic-y for me, but I suppose that was unavoidable

And that date? Perfect balance between sweet PG-13 romance and brilliant innuendos. My biggest curiosities now are the Deviancy club (bar?) and whatever the hell's going on with Ms. Buchardt.

Really looking forward to 0.5

 

[Mr B0NES]

Okay so just quickly before a waifu war breaks out, stuff's been updated. I'm going to message the mods to get the OP updated, but linking here for expediency.

New 0.4 build in full:

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Just the updated script file:

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[mr.AwesomeGameTaste]

Why exactly would I want to ask Liz out after all this shit she's pulled? She's just fake.

Liz is not fake. She is just under CeCe's influence and ok,she should be able to see what kind of person she is,but i can't really blame her for not wanting to get on her lifelong friend's bad side for a guy she just met.Besides,I think she knows deep down that cece is toxic,but still clings to her because she is her only friend.

 

[HogRocket]

If I don't get to use deadly force on Cece, this game isn't going to be for me. I HATE the game trope of "evil bitch that ruins everyone's life has a backstory and is really wonderful" - it still doesn't excuse or fix the damage they do.

Since I know I'm not going to be able to kill her, or probably even maim her, I'll probably wait a few updates to see if Liz can scrape the toxic cunt off and the MC can actually grow a pair and stand up to her and we can drop her off the radar - then see how it goes.

 

[Trasher2018]

So there are no choices right?

When you skip at the first night, it really just skips and the game still works like you havent's skipped.

Why then bother with choices?

 

[Krull]

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[Skeltom]

So there are no choices right?

When you skip at the first night, it really just skips and the game still works like you havent's skipped.

Why then bother with choices?

I never got a definitive answer either. From what I have played you don't have a say in many things, aside from unimportant banter comebacks everything is on rails. Being given the choice to skip only stops you from seeing lewd content, it still happens off screen so it's just watch it and know what going on or don't and have the game play out like you do.

It may change the farther along it goes but right now, for me at least, it is way to kinetic. I like to have a say in what happens in the games I play. On that note as well, I personally think the banter go on for quite a bit longer than it needs to. It's not bad but when the same back and forth goes on for three paragraphs it can be tedious, especially with this one and the limited player agency. After playing it reminded me of an adult version of the "Trails Of" series.

 

[Cernunnos.]

Enjoyable update overall with quite the mysterious ending (makes the mother's suspicions less far fetched.) I doubt I'll ever like Krista or Collette; as I played I most certainly started hearing Mrs. Howell's voice from Gilligan's island when Krista spoke.

I'll be following the harem route hell or high water so I did find the girlfriend proposal a bit out of place, early, and counter to that route. Perhaps overreacting toward it but I avoided that declaration like one avoids a pit trap.

 

[slapflash]

Update was awesome. Liz is great and I loved the progress with her and the date (although I acknowledge I am probably in the minority as I am more interested Liz and the nonfamily relationship options more).

 

[punisher2099]

Enjoyable update overall with quite the mysterious ending (makes the mother's suspicions less far fetched.) I doubt I'll ever like Krista or Collette; as I played I most certainly started hearing Mrs. Howell's voice from Gilligan's island when Krista spoke.

I'll be following the harem route hell or high water so I did find the girlfriend proposal a bit out of place, early, and counter to that route. Perhaps overreacting toward it but I avoided that declaration like one avoids a pit trap.

I actually hear Madeline Kahn since she looks so much like her.

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

I actually here Madeline Kahn since she looks so much like her.

Actually just rewatched a movie she was in tonight, "Clue".

 

[Black Swamp Ent.]

I love the comedic writing and banter, specially between the MC and Sister. As others mentioned, the chemistry scene was hilarious as well. The writing in this VN is top notch IMO.

Krista (Aunt) kinda rubs me the wrong way, I'm not sure if she's to be an Antagonist or what, but something's off with her. CeCe is just annoying, which is a +1 to the writing of the character, but overall she's a lil' bit cliche. I just noticed so many VN's go with a "mob" (side) storyline that muddles everything up at times. I hope this won't be the case.

Overall I really enjoy this one, there's a few open ended concerns, but those can easily be answered by the story/writing in future updates.

 

[regis nex]

This just became my bookmarked VN!

I love the character developments here, slowly but surely we're unraveling their layers. I love liz, she's so sweet and giggity with the MC. Victor is such a dork, a real friend ( so far ). Abi and Natasha are very interesting to say the least, and lucy is starting to grow on me. Slow and steady, please, make this VN a real dream come true for us all to actually play a game with great stories and development. I don't care about cliches, the writing is good and funny lol. Also, please don't defile liz, she seems to wholesome! With clear flaws and naivety, CeCe seems like she'll destroy her life being with the MC
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[Deleted member 111545]

please god tell me you are baiting, i cant tell anymore since this isnt the first time he says some cringe line like this

 

[Canto Forte]

Are you hatin” on bernie all of a sudden? He be democrat also ... appeasiong the grass roots.

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please god tell me you are baiting, i cant tell anymore since this isnt the first time he says some cringe line like this

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