Ren'Py Abandoned Deviant Anomalies [v0.9.5] [MoolahMilk]

[Meridian]

What can I say... Not bad, not bad at all... but far from top.
I'll start with the positives, the girls are mostly pretty (I didn't like the tattoos, I can't stand tattoos on young girls, especially when they cover a lot of skin), the pictures or animations of the girls individually are pretty normal, the story and the writing are also quite enjoyable.
Now the negatives...
The graphics are certainly nice and better than many... many but not all. and the only two sex animations (blowjob and toilet) are absolutely horrible... In comparison to the games in my signature and some others the distance to the moon, and if you compare it to the top HS game ahitr, it's just disgusting. Maybe it will be better in the future... time will tell. Well and the very fact that there are only 2 sex scenes at the size of almost 3 gb... is also not very good. I humbly assume many, many years in development, unless of course it dies in the process (I hope not). I noticed in the text that in some places there is no space between letters\words (For example: alot, abit, and when you introduce yourself by saying your name and surname is written as one word), English is not my native but even I noticed.
In general, play was a pleasure, or rather to read the story, I wish you luck in the future.

I also found sex scenes in this update pretty bad visually. Interactivity is kind of neat but angles are really bad for me personally. I don't mean lack of third person angles but they way first person angles are done. They don't feel immersive and it always look like girls fuck/suck a flying dildo. It is kinda counterintuitive but seeing more of a guy makes scene more immersive for me lol. It just feel more personal this way, don't really know how to describe it better. Since you brought up AHITR I will post a few examples.

Maybe it's just me though.

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[Yanagi-san]

I also found sex scenes in this update pretty bad visually. Interactivity is kind of neat but angles are really bad for me personally. I don't mean lack of third person angles but they way first person angles are done. They don't feel immersive and it always look like girls fuck/suck a flying dildo. It is kinda counterintuitive but seeing more of a guy makes scene more immersive for me lol. Since you brought up AHITR I will just post a few examples.

Maybe it's just me though.

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It will be good if more normal camera angles do))))

I will be very grateful)))

 

[tsunku]

how do you unlock any of the things you can do with mia?!? it always says you have not unlocked this on everything, very annoying.

 

[Yanagi-san]

Sage is a Bitch xD
infuriates xd !!!!!!

 

[MoolahMilk]

how do you unlock any of the things you can do with mia?!? it always says you have not unlocked this on everything, very annoying.

Content for the actions havent been implemented yet

 

[Xarin]

Mia's gotten poisoned, eh? Is the MC gonna have to suck it out in a future update?

 

[llDante]

I'm not sure if i missed some explanation in the game, but anyone know how this karma system works, do i miss some scenes if it's negative? or being positive is like a love route and negative a slave route? i'm not sure how to go about this.

 

[Edward8]

Is there an android port for this game?

 

[Phaxz]

How can I make Mia's stats increase or increase her corruption stage? Or is it not implemented yet.

 

[Toksicz]

That whole buildup to the Eleanor was pretty hot and you prolly have the best HS1 graphics. I can't name any game that compares and I have played almost all HS1 graphic games. But yeah, looks like people have already brought up the sex animation problems.
Also another good thing would be to add more fast animations on male domination scenes. There was only 1 out of 3 on eleanor scene not counting face cam, that was fast animation while other 2 were super slow. Slow, fast, faster would be better than slow, slow, mid speed incase of scenes including domination.

 

[fleuranza]

how to continue the story with beatrice ? i have yellow exclamation marks and beatrice said 'its good to see you michael, your karmic levels seem high today' but i cant choose anything to do with her

 

[TheYX]

Looking forward to the next update! You really nailed the graphics, especially Sage looks amazing.

 

[MoolahMilk]

Leave some space between q.load & Dining buttons. It is creating some touch problems for me on android

The circle buttons seem like they work well. Im changing all it to circles next update.

 

[zeph19]

Okay, here's my opinion on this game so far:

Most importantly: THIS GAME IS ORIGINAL.

The story gives me hope that this is going to be a nice and wild ride. Haven't seen "monsters" like that in a Honey Select game yet, so I was very positively surprised this update. I also like the "darker" tones here, a serial killer, monsters and the different stages / chat options also tell me that this is not going to be all that vanilla. I'm looking forward to seeing the plot unfold.

Visually, it's also a treat. The characters look great and different from each other, they're "hot" (to me) and they have wide ranges of expressions. The backgrounds and living rooms etc. are also looking great and fresh.

The upcoming dialogue options look promising too.

Now the things I didn't like:

I would have hoped for more main story and Mia progression. Being a detective, I would've hoped for a new case. The monster attack was great, but nothing came afterwards, only side quests.

It's only update 2 though, so who am I to complain? This is already one of the games I look forward to the most. If I were to rate it right now, it would be at 4.5 stars.

Edit: I would LOVE a button that immediately takes me to my room!

 

[Smilingjack4]

Please, for the love of god, hire a writer.

Everyone acts like they're from a different planet, and the worst is the MC.
Short recap with Sophia: She insults you as soon as you meet her, before you catch her, she TRIES TO KILL YOU, then the next day shows up at your house with her bullshit sobstory, tells you she just broke into the police station and had no qualms about invading your home and the MC is just like "ya you live here, we cool" instead of just burying her sociopathic ass in the backyard. Then she says the crowbar wasn't her and based on the logic in the writing, I just know she was telling the truth. But believing her is stupid.

No, she isn't "quite a character" she's a dangerous, manipulative, compulsive liar and the MC acknowledges this. Then still goes with it. No qualms. No precautions. Just the absolute mindfuck of it all.
It seems like you're trying to punch down on stereotypes like the fat guy in the mall while having absolutely no clue how any human interaction works. The dissonance between how people act and what happens is so sharp it destroys all the amazing work put into the game.

The past tragedy isn't at all reflected in the MC's or the sisters personality, everyone is so affluent, and there is no acknowledgement of this, like it's normal.

If the characters don't give a shit what happens, how am I supposed to?
My brother is my rock in this world, and the only family I have, and we have a great connection. How should I wake him up? Oh yeah, violence.

Find parents corpses in tub, let out a yell of despair and rage *is actually the audio from the guy sticking his dick in the power socket*. The entire game is like this, why do you spend hours making the pics/animations, coding them in and then taking a big wet shart on your own work like this?

 

[jimmyjoo]

Any idea how I progress Beatrice? I can't find an option to create a Pornhut account, nor can I find a spot for streaming. Is this not in yet?

 

[MoolahMilk]

Any idea how I progress Beatrice? I can't find an option to create a Pornhut account, nor can I find a spot for streaming. Is this not in yet?

It's in buddy. Have a chat with Chanel in the bar!

 

[followmyleader]

Yeah, it was tricky to figure out that you had to talk to Chanel to start the Pornhut account. I assumed it would just be at my own computer or something. I don't even think Chanel has the exclamation point icon at that part in the quest, so I only found it by chance.

Otherwise, this game is incredibly promising with a cool premise and fun mechanics. Very interested to see future updates; if there's a track record of getting these updates out quickly, I'll be a patron.

 

[MoolahMilk]

Yeah, it was tricky to figure out that you had to talk to Chanel to start the Pornhut account. I assumed it would just be at my own computer or something. I don't even think Chanel has the exclamation point icon at that part in the quest, so I only found it by chance.

Otherwise, this game is incredibly promising with a cool premise and fun mechanics. Very interested to see future updates; if there's a track record of getting these updates out quickly, I'll be a patron.

Awesome! Drop by discord to check out daily updates on the game's progress. I hang out frequently.

 

[jimmyjoo]

how to continue the story with beatrice ? i have yellow exclamation marks and beatrice said 'its good to see you michael, your karmic levels seem high today' but i cant choose anything to do with her

Having the same issue now. Maybe it's not developed yet?