VN Ren'Py Abandoned Devin's Life [3-31-20] [Taboo]

[Tabu9000]

Hi Joe,

All feedback is good. I agree that a normal person would normally walk away in most of the situation that Devin finds her self in. It's not like she is being forced to stay in town.... At least not yet. It's hard to balance a story where the main character is being forced to do things, but isn't slowly starting to like the things. What I mean is in most game the MC is a slut, or is slowly being turned into one. That's not the case with Devin.

She doesn't want to do these things. So how do you tell a slowly escalating story of humiliation without the MC liking it? You have to make them nave and gullible.

Joe I hope you will play the next update and let me know what you think. There will be some good plot points that may improve that rating. And if not at least some fun H-Scenes.

What taboo22 said to Joe Stell is correct, because she not left this town and and her dresses from the beginning ( when Farsin take her panty) are not proper at all - if we honest the dresses more lewd in this way- and to sexy for a teacher, if you focus on hard case to judge her. To stay a little longer in the Casino, why not! She is not a nun but a woman without a boyfriend: In real life, women do not run away immediately.
Joe is right with strip in front of Henry, but this was the request from the "poll". To do this easy, Henry can say : Look at you get out of the clothes and take a shower first. When she returns with towel, he can say to her " You can´t stay longer in my house and get out, but give me my towel first and push her out.
If he punish her with another "poll" we miss all nice event´s from 0.45. Let´s hope that all punishment take place later in Henry´s home when she returns. I glad that we have this long discussion over game, it´s great for further updates.

 

[Ragnaroekr]

What taboo22 said to Joe Stell is correct, because she not left this town and and her dresses from the beginning ( when Farsin take her panty) are not proper at all - if we honest the dresses more lewd in this way- and to sexy for a teacher, if you focus on hard case to judge her. To stay a little longer in the Casino, why not! She is not a nun but a woman without a boyfriend: In real life, women do not run away immediately.
Joe is right with strip in front of Henry, but this was the request from the "poll". To do this easy, Henry can say : Look at you get out of the clothes and take a shower first. When she returns with towel, he can say to her " You can´t stay longer in my house and get out, but give me my towel first and push her out.
If he punish her with another "poll" we miss all nice event´s from 0.45. Let´s hope that all punishment take place later in Henry´s home when she returns. I glad that we have this long discussion over game, it´s great for further updates.

Ok ok, Henry throws devin out of his house. She returned now, but the fact is, that Henry intentionally didn’t want her to leave. So after a punishment I guess she still can live there further on.

 

[Tabu9000]

Ok ok, Henry throws devin out of his house. She returned now, but the fact is, that Henry intentionally didn’t want her to leave. So after a punishment I guess she still can live there further on.

Yep,I just had this repeated for Joe. That this story deserves not only 2 stars for the vote.

 

[User_66221]

What taboo22 said to Joe Stell is correct, because she not left this town and and her dresses from the beginning ( when Farsin take her panty) are not proper at all - if we honest the dresses more lewd in this way- and to sexy for a teacher, if you focus on hard case to judge her. To stay a little longer in the Casino, why not! She is not a nun but a woman without a boyfriend: In real life, women do not run away immediately.
Joe is right with strip in front of Henry, but this was the request from the "poll". To do this easy, Henry can say : Look at you get out of the clothes and take a shower first. When she returns with towel, he can say to her " You can´t stay longer in my house and get out, but give me my towel first and push her out.
If he punish her with another "poll" we miss all nice event´s from 0.45. Let´s hope that all punishment take place later in Henry´s home when she returns. I glad that we have this long discussion over game, it´s great for further updates.

You don't need of Henry to makes enf or exhib scenes you know, i see you talking about Henry to make embarrassing scenes.

I don't understand all this talk around this chars to be honest, Henry is just a simple chars like Jen and others.

Devins can also find herself into embarrassing situation she created by inadvertance with no need of Henry or anyone else.

 

[taboo22]

You don't need of Henry to makes enf or exhib scenes you know, i see you talking about Henry to make embarrassing scenes.

I don't understand all this talk around this chars to be honest, Henry is just a simple chars like Jen and others.

Devins can also find herself into embarrassing situation she created by inadvertance with no need of Henry or anyone else.

I agree, Henry is a fun character and will remain in the game, but he doesn't have to. There a plenty of people that can take advantage of Devin...

 

[User_66221]

Remember about Alona when she found herself naked while karate lesson in front kids but not because she was weak or someone trapped her but because her ego and she underestimated her enemies and it created a sexy scene.

For exemple a classic one, Devins see a cat stuck in a tree, she climb the tree and she try to get the cat but she fall suddenly and her skirt hung to the brand and she find herself suspended by the branch of the tree by the skirt and panties exposed.

Not need of chars almost to create enf scene

 

[Tabu9000]

You don't need of Henry to makes enf or exhib scenes you know, i see you talking about Henry to make embarrassing scenes.

I don't understand all this talk around this chars to be honest, Henry is just a simple chars like Jen and others.

Devins can also find herself into embarrassing situation she created by inadvertance with no need of Henry or anyone else.

Yep,I just had this repeated for Joe. That this story deserves not only 2 stars for the vote.
I just talk about the strip from Devin in front of Henry for NO reason, as Joe said! I don´t want another " enf or exhib scene whatever - enf means-" or embarrassing scenes. You take my post wrong.

 

[Tabu9000]

Remember about Alona when she found herself naked while karate lesson in front kids but not because she was weak or someone trapped her but because her ego and she underestimated her enemies and it created a sexy scene.

For exemple a classic one, Devins see a cat stuck in a tree, she climb the tree and she try to get the cat but she fall suddenly and her skirt hung to the brand and she find herself suspended by the branch of the tree by the skirt and panties exposed.

Not need of chars almost to create enf scene

How want a " enf scene "?? Can someone here explain what " enf " means, I´m dump in modern talking.

 

[User_66221]

Yep,I just had this repeated for Joe. That this story deserves not only 2 stars for the vote.
I just talk about the strip from Devin in front of Henry for NO reason, as Joe said! I don´t want another " enf or exhib scene whatever - enf means-" or embarrassing scenes. You take my post wrong.

I well understood your post, i just said Henry isn't necessary to make embarrassing scenes simply

Enf is a theme to say "embarrassed nude female" to say also the girl or the main chars is embarrassed to
be naked in public and don't appreciates to be exposed like this so she will cover herself with her hands, a bit like Astrid with mage scene when she find herself naked in front all her natal town .

 

[Tabu9000]

I well understood your post, i just said Henry isn't necessary to make embarrassing scenes simply

Enf is a theme to say "embarrassed nude female" to say also the girl or the main chars is embarrassed to
be naked in public and don't appreciates to be exposed like this so she will cover herself with her hands, a bit like Astrid with mage scene when she find herself naked in front all her natal town .

Thank you, anyway the scene with Henry is done and history and I like this way . Only Joe don´t like it.
I played VWA but the surprices to Devine are more open compare to Astrid when the Teacher request sex scene from her depence on her dress, and we know what coming up in sex to her. With Devin we don´t know yet how or when she have sex with someone or never before the revenge take place, that the greatest point in this story.

 

[Tabu9000]

Hi @taboo22 I quest the weekend is over after the secound night. I suggest the 1 Day we miss in 0.45 to do this update with at least 2 days. I like to see this day asap as many other friends here, but to wait a little more for 2-3 days I don´t mind and we have more fun instaed of only 1 day and waiting then for 1 month again.

 

[antoniomontenegro]

Me thinks you forgot to include a link to your game...

just click MEGA and donwload

 

[bacchusplateau]

just click MEGA and donwload

Lol...me thinks you are just a wee bit late to the conversation... :coldsweat:

 

[Tabu9000]

Can we expect the one day you not finished in v0.45 this month or we wait for more day´s next month??

 

[taboo22]

Can we expect the one day you not finished in v0.45 this month or we wait for more day´s next month??

Likely not before the end of the month. The next update will be more then just the one day.

 

[Tabu9000]

Likely not before the end of the month. The next update will be more then just the one day.

Great to hear this today I love the May 2 updates.

 

[Buster65]

Ok... Aaaaaanddd another game about a woman humilliated, forced, corrupted and taken to depravation. I don't know why so many developers choose the same topic. (Surely they have been mistreated by many women being children and teenagers and they want to take revenge somehow... who knows) not judgment. And I'm not talking about the quality of the game himself (I'm not game developer... in fact... I'm a fan of his work. Surely it is not simple) But... I'm a writer... and I know about good histories. And these are not good histories. Only they are a sample of some traumas and mental complexes... By the way... only it's my point of view.

 

[User_66221]

Ok... Aaaaaanddd another game about a woman humilliated, forced, corrupted and taken to depravation. I don't know why so many developers choose the same topic. (Surely they have been mistreated by many women being children and teenagers and they want to take revenge somehow... who knows) not judgment. And I'm not talking about the quality of the game himself (I'm not game developer... in fact... I'm a fan of his work. Surely it is not simple) But... I'm a writer... and I know about good histories. And these are not good histories. Only they are a sample of some traumas and mental complexes... By the way... only it's my point of view.

It depend, many developper choose a dumb girl, not strong at all...so i'm agree it's not interesting to follow them being corruped or embarrassed.

Usually, i'm a bit tired of theses games where the girl is humiliated or corrupted really to easily until i've played to Alona.

I love this girl because i think the girl in the game isn't the dumb girl we see in many corruption game.

Without to talking about corruption you aren't forced to corrupt the girl and you can keep her strong personality but make her live many embarrassing situation despite her.

Unfortunately not many developper choose this path and prefer to corrupt the girl until she's a total slut and it's a shame.

Alona despite she lived many embarrassing situations she still can break a arms and out her gun to kill someone with no mercy.

It's up to developper to changer their way and to better write the background of their Heroines.

 

[taboo22]

Ok... Aaaaaanddd another game about a woman humilliated, forced, corrupted and taken to depravation. I don't know why so many developers choose the same topic. (Surely they have been mistreated by many women being children and teenagers and they want to take revenge somehow... who knows) not judgment. And I'm not talking about the quality of the game himself (I'm not game developer... in fact... I'm a fan of his work. Surely it is not simple) But... I'm a writer... and I know about good histories. And these are not good histories. Only they are a sample of some traumas and mental complexes... By the way... only it's my point of view.

What topic would you rather see? I think there are a lot of games like mine, because it's a fun and popular type of story.

 

[ayylmao243]

When i get to the first gym lesson it says it failed to load Day gym three (1) or something like that, i have redownloaded and still got the same issue