Tabu9000
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Hi @Hydra92 there isn´t any bug until now, after we know to use the locker-room first! Anyway you must be very happy with this update 0.45. Henry use your punishment and throw her out naked in the night. She show her naked body to most people in this town and her school. Nobody touched her body in this update, hard time for all tough guys here just looking 2 days and nights over Devin´s naked body. The slut neck-band from Farsin is missing to fit with her piercing.
Tabu9000
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Think @ taboo22 finds your ideas very well and reacts very positively. She also loves the more gentle moments instead of the hard humiliation! Henry is gone and she has a new home. Val and her younger sister can do the tough events in the castle or casino, for the tough players here. I give many tough idea´s and dream´s but it seam´s that´s not good for Devin.Happy, yes, if i can give somes enf ideas/thoughts to enjoy i'm glad
Go ahead and give her more idea´s with soft humilition to show her naked body in front of the class,beach,hospital,coffee bar or clothes shop . The blue piercing looks like a " Lego tool" if there silver maybe better, but just my taste isn´t importent here.
Tabu9000
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Try to make some suggestion for humiliation but the gamemaker never act to my post or like it, it´s better to not waist time here for both of us. Any question coming up here I´ll help so far the knowlege is on my side.
For all new players here Devin is sleeping in a new house, before she stand with an old guy, maybe change later again but the end of 0.45 is like this.
For all new players here Devin is sleeping in a new house, before she stand with an old guy, maybe change later again but the end of 0.45 is like this.
@taboo22
I have a couple suggestions: When Devin is got drugged at the beach Jennifer should also check to see if she has any underwear on and when Jennifer sees it she will either take it off and get rid of it or modify her pants by cutting out the crotch section out and having her underwear or pussy exposed . Another suggestions is: at the end when Henry found Devin back at his place he could give her back her clothes that she got from Stephen but at a price. She must spend time with Henry naked (watching movie and etc) and if he wants to talk to her and she is in her towel she has to take it off. Another one is when she goes to school to teach the principal stops her and demands to know why she is back to wearing pants. He gives her three options 1. GO TO CLASS WITHOUT ANY PANTS OR SKIRT ON (since all of her student seen her lower half and it will humiliate her even more) and the principal would drop in and see it 2. GO TO CLASS WITH OUT HER TOP ON (since all of her students have seen her breast already without her knowing), 3. GO TO CLASS WITH THE TRANSPARENT DRESS ( He found that while cleaning out the AV closet or Jennifer told him about it). If she chose not to he could always tell her that she will be fired for all the trouble she has given him.
Another idea is that Jennifer could blackmail Devin to teach the class without her pants/skirt on or without her top or naked.
I have a couple suggestions: When Devin is got drugged at the beach Jennifer should also check to see if she has any underwear on and when Jennifer sees it she will either take it off and get rid of it or modify her pants by cutting out the crotch section out and having her underwear or pussy exposed . Another suggestions is: at the end when Henry found Devin back at his place he could give her back her clothes that she got from Stephen but at a price. She must spend time with Henry naked (watching movie and etc) and if he wants to talk to her and she is in her towel she has to take it off. Another one is when she goes to school to teach the principal stops her and demands to know why she is back to wearing pants. He gives her three options 1. GO TO CLASS WITHOUT ANY PANTS OR SKIRT ON (since all of her student seen her lower half and it will humiliate her even more) and the principal would drop in and see it 2. GO TO CLASS WITH OUT HER TOP ON (since all of her students have seen her breast already without her knowing), 3. GO TO CLASS WITH THE TRANSPARENT DRESS ( He found that while cleaning out the AV closet or Jennifer told him about it). If she chose not to he could always tell her that she will be fired for all the trouble she has given him.
Another idea is that Jennifer could blackmail Devin to teach the class without her pants/skirt on or without her top or naked.
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Those are some great ideas.
Farsin will find out about what happened at the beach and there will be repercussion. Forcing Devin to go to school naked or half naked will probably happen, but not quite yet. I still have a few ideas before that will happen.
And I agree, I thought about Jen doing more to Devin on the beach, but I wanted to focus on the piercings, you will see why in the next update or two.
and this sir, is why you are both a gentleman and a scholar.
for real, one of the reasons i love this game and patron.
Tabu9000
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I´m not surprice that 2 guys vote the game with 2 stars only after 0.45 and I give you 5 stars. You underestimate the absence of Henry. Many love also the hard events but here Devin is not touched at all in this update. Please take an eye on this. The balance of soft/hard was before 50/50 about but now 100/0,with all the joy that is here now!!
Ragnaroekr
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I really liked the update, you can’t always expect full h-scenes. The tension needs to be built. Though the game is nearly in the middle now, some harder things happening to Devin would be nice.
OMG that ending with the forced nipple piercings is the best thing I've ever seen. I really can't wait for the next update and I loved how you used the situation with Henry to move to story so flawlessly. You really are a great storyteller and I'm thankful that you are sharing with us. Now the only thing that is missing for me (and only me since everyone have different tastes) is that she ends up working at the Casino at least one night
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I don't think Henry is the reason they gave this game only 2 stars. Honestly, they do bring up some good points. This game is a classic Retard in Lechertown style game. Which is fine by me, it's one of my guilty pleasures really. :FeelsGoodMan:
Tabu9000
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This was only a hint and should not be a criticism. This game is in my top folder in the first place. I'm sure Henry will be back, but I believe that the balance is still importent to keep the tension up.
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Yeah, I did't mean to make Devin dumb, and I don't think she is... I was going for more inosent and nave, but oh well. If she was smart she would have left town a long ime ago, and then we wouldn't have a game...
I think the game brings a fetish usually not used as enf theme.
We see so many corruption games with "classic" humiliations and not really interesting scenes, there the girl keep her personality despites all the things is happen to her, she stay strong , i don't think she's dumb.
By the way, i think Astrid is dumber than Devins (i love Astrid game anyway, this is not the question ) who keep her personality and don't hesitate to shout out the policeman when he have fun of her with her bags.
Devins is more into personality like Alona had in Alona japan investigation, she was into troubles despite herself but knew to keep reason to herself to get her gun out to kill a bad guy and we know inside of her she was a strong girl who knew to kick bad guy ass as martial artist
It's same about devins, things happen so suddenly to her so she don't understand whats going on, but despites all that she stay determined to find out her bags and take her revenge.
So no for me Devins is really far to being a dumb.
We see so many corruption games with "classic" humiliations and not really interesting scenes, there the girl keep her personality despites all the things is happen to her, she stay strong , i don't think she's dumb.
By the way, i think Astrid is dumber than Devins (i love Astrid game anyway, this is not the question ) who keep her personality and don't hesitate to shout out the policeman when he have fun of her with her bags.
Devins is more into personality like Alona had in Alona japan investigation, she was into troubles despite herself but knew to keep reason to herself to get her gun out to kill a bad guy and we know inside of her she was a strong girl who knew to kick bad guy ass as martial artist
It's same about devins, things happen so suddenly to her so she don't understand whats going on, but despites all that she stay determined to find out her bags and take her revenge.
So no for me Devins is really far to being a dumb.
Joe Steel
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Devin believes Henry when she knows Henry is, at best, a flake. She continues to work as a cheerleader (certainly inappropriate for a teacher under any circumstances, let alone when she is being harassed by at least some of the other cheerleaders), she believes the preposterous idea that people stopped supporting a beloved basketball team because one cheerleader (her) screws up. She doesn't walk out of the "Casino" when she finds out what it is. She strips in front of Henry for no particular reason. She's acting very dumb. It's not believable. That's why I gave the game two stars. It's not the absence of Henry.
The game has hot elements, which is why it did get two stars in my review. I just find the story painfully weak and the motivations of the people in it simply not credible. I still play, it, though, and wish the developer well. My review was intended to be constructive, even if honesty forced me to make it pretty harsh. I don't expect it to be changed to match my personal tastes, and others enjoy it a lot more than I do. The developer should definitely consider them his audience, and not me.
The game has hot elements, which is why it did get two stars in my review. I just find the story painfully weak and the motivations of the people in it simply not credible. I still play, it, though, and wish the developer well. My review was intended to be constructive, even if honesty forced me to make it pretty harsh. I don't expect it to be changed to match my personal tastes, and others enjoy it a lot more than I do. The developer should definitely consider them his audience, and not me.
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Hi Joe,
All feedback is good. I agree that a normal person would normally walk away in most of the situation that Devin finds her self in. It's not like she is being forced to stay in town.... At least not yet. It's hard to balance a story where the main character is being forced to do things, but isn't slowly starting to like the things. What I mean is in most game the MC is a slut, or is slowly being turned into one. That's not the case with Devin.
She doesn't want to do these things. So how do you tell a slowly escalating story of humiliation without the MC liking it? You have to make them nave and gullible.
Joe I hope you will play the next update and let me know what you think. There will be some good plot points that may improve that rating. And if not at least some fun H-Scenes.