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Thanks for the report, I'll try to fix it, for the he's instead of she's, I have a lot of mistakes at the beginning of the game, normally by advancing a little in the story there are less.

I look for mistakes sometimes but I can't look at everything, I try...
 

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getting this error when going to strip and pick go as a bunny
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Thank you for pointing that out.

One of the two patches was corrupted...
If you want, download the patch I left on the first page and replace it in the game file... and try again to go to the club to work...
 

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Please make it so that the stats can be viewed by clicking 1 time on 1 window, and not making a window in the window, as it is now.
Bring the name of the day of the week (Monday, Tuesday) to the main screen, otherwise it is very inconvenient
 
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Please make it so that the stats can be viewed by clicking 1 time on 1 window, and not making a window in the window, as it is now.
Bring the name of the day of the week (Monday, Tuesday) to the main screen, otherwise it is very inconvenient

The statistics will no longer be present in the next updates, they are no longer useful.

It's a good idea to display the day, I'll see what I can do for the next updates.


Thanks for the feedback.
 

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Just played this and turned our cute little doll into a poor little lezdom toy. Very much excited about the prospect of the club that she is invited to by her employers (which I am assuming will lead to harder lesbian BDSM scenes).

I was kind of surprised that while I was trying to focus on the lovely science teacher as a maid Dina seemed to pretty much force the blackmail submissive route on me (kept taking away the choice of which house to clean). Not sure if I chose something that triggered that or if it was just so Octavia could get introduced, but it did sadden me a bit (happy for lezdom, but wanted to see the science teacher). Only scene I got with her was her mocking me thinking that I used her toy, then 1 more instance of going to her place while it was empty and bam forced down the Sanchez route.

I was also kind of disappointed at how few calls I got to help at the car dealership (I only got 3 through feb). I would love to have the option to help out more frequently there so that the scenes can unlock sooner.

Overall, I like most of the characters that are supposed to be likable and dislike those that aren't (so kudos to the their design and writing). The only part I was kind of disappointed on for character development was it seems that everyone in her apartment is in on the whatever it is that Paula is trying to do with Elpi. Nunia was very aware of what was going to happen to her on christmas and already said that Paula is her "guardian angel" during the talk in the park as well as Kami being the one who set her up to get that listing since she was friends with Paula. Mixed with Paula trickingt/manipulating Elpi into the lezdom office, it really gives off a vibe of not wanting to trust any of the people she is living with (doubly so after her experience in the jungle).

Only improvements I could ask for would be a way to review the non-repeatable scenes (I assume the computer will have that purpose at some point, as I haven't found much a reason for it otherwise) and lessen the grind needed to open scenes. I'm really excited about all the poor things that will happen to this lovely little sub as the development furthers.

As an aside, I do hope that at some point you will be able to illustrate the scenes that happens when she isn't around (Nunia and Minha scene or Lupe's gangrape flash back at police station), but I can understand wanting to keep everything in her view so what she doesn't see the player doesn't see either (although that's been broken a few times with Paula and Minha).

Edit: just finished car jobs and I officially want out of the apartment. I was looking forward to the teasing assistant job and instead find out there is a psycho stalker trying to control my little cutie's every aspect of her life. And it seems everyone is apparently in on it except my character. I would love to have been able to refuse the car being paid off without my knowledge or consent. Really did not like that twist. Hope I can move in with a safer roommate in the next update.
 
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Just played this and turned our cute little doll into a poor little lezdom toy. Very much excited about the prospect of the club that she is invited to by her employers (which I am assuming will lead to harder lesbian BDSM scenes).

I was kind of surprised that while I was trying to focus on the lovely science teacher as a maid Dina seemed to pretty much force the blackmail submissive route on me (kept taking away the choice of which house to clean). Not sure if I chose something that triggered that or if it was just so Octavia could get introduced, but it did sadden me a bit (happy for lezdom, but wanted to see the science teacher). Only scene I got with her was her mocking me thinking that I used her toy, then 1 more instance of going to her place while it was empty and bam forced down the Sanchez route.

I was also kind of disappointed at how few calls I got to help at the car dealership (I only got 3 through feb). I would love to have the option to help out more frequently there so that the scenes can unlock sooner.

Overall, I like most of the characters that are supposed to be likable and dislike those that aren't (so kudos to the their design and writing). The only part I was kind of disappointed on for character development was it seems that everyone in her apartment is in on the whatever it is that Paula is trying to do with Elpi. Nunia was very aware of what was going to happen to her on christmas and already said that Paula is her "guardian angel" during the talk in the park as well as Kami being the one who set her up to get that listing since she was friends with Paula. Mixed with Paula trickingt/manipulating Elpi into the lezdom office, it really gives off a vibe of not wanting to trust any of the people she is living with (doubly so after her experience in the jungle).

Only improvements I could ask for would be a way to review the non-repeatable scenes (I assume the computer will have that purpose at some point, as I haven't found much a reason for it otherwise) and lessen the grind needed to open scenes. I'm really excited about all the poor things that will happen to this lovely little sub as the development furthers.

As an aside, I do hope that at some point you will be able to illustrate the scenes that happens when she isn't around (Nunia and Minha scene or Lupe's gangrape flash back at police station), but I can understand wanting to keep everything in her view so what she doesn't see the player doesn't see either (although that's been broken a few times with Paula and Minha).

Edit: just finished car jobs and I officially want out of the apartment. I was looking forward to the teasing assistant job and instead find out there is a psycho stalker trying to control my little cutie's every aspect of her life. And it seems everyone is apparently in on it except my character. I would love to have been able to refuse the car being paid off without my knowledge or consent. Really did not like that twist. Hope I can move in with a safer roommate in the next update.
The story with Zita mansilhas, the science teacher is back in the next update... there is a lot of content with Sanchez because Carolina does the main story, a very big change is going to happen in the next updates.
I hope you played the end with Carilana... dina say you as Carolina never come back to bother Elpidia?

The car dealership, the car is paid quickly or not it's up to you... but the story can continue....
A very big part of the car dealership story will be on the second year of study, when elpidia will have chosen its future job...

Paula is a well-known character on the whole island... I often laugh at the fact that the only person who does not know Paula on the island is Elpidia because she is very dizzy...

non-repeatable scenes... it's very complicated, there's a lot of content and things to do in the game, you've played until February but if you've made a single save you haven't seen half of the content of the game, I'm forced to do repeatable scenes... but I've found a trick to make random scenes, when you're in an area where the story is stagnating there will be several scenes that will happen randomly. I try it with molano on the maid route.

Paula/Minha... the story goes on... Paula, Minha, Nunia and Elpidia are together for a long time and the story is just beginning.
Your idea of allowing to see other characters than Elpidia is interesting, so I will try to create the possibility to choose the characters you will follow during the night.

Lupe... Lupe and the police station is part of the main story, it's the continuation of what happens with Carilona y Marisol, the adventure continues in the next updates.

Lucas, Maisa's friend, the car dealership is there to create part of the story of the second year... cinema is one of the options that Elpidia will be able to choose for her studies in the second year.
Lucas isn't a stalker, he's a rich producer who knows how to offer contracts in exchange for little treats, but Elpidia is playing with that because she loves it.

A roommate... Paula Minha and nunia are elpidia's roommates and there are no plans to change her...
But nothing is definitively decided... in the second year the game will considerably change its aspect... so... why not consider a move.

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Lucas isn't a stalker, he's a rich producer who knows how to offer contracts in exchange for little treats, but Elpidia is playing with that because she loves it.
Yeah, my stalker comment wasn't directed towards Lucas at all as I hadn't unlocked him ( I went with the lesbian assistant route instead of the escort for my first playthrough). It was directly focused on Paula and her overbearing obsession with controlling poor little Elpi in regards to her debt and the job position.

Paula is a well-known character on the whole island... I often laugh at the fact that the only person who does not know Paula on the island is Elpidia because she is very dizzy...
I know Paula probably is a lot better than I make her out to be. But it very much seems to me that the reason Elpi doesn't know Paula isn't just because she's a ditz but is more sinister and intentional on the part of Paula (although I'm aware that's because I don't know the anything more than has been seen up til now).

Massive wall of text for those who are bored or curious on why I'm negative towards Paula. Abandon hope and common sense ye who read the spoiler.
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By the way, please don't take anything in the "anti-Paula" spoiler as too serious or intended in a negative way to the story you are telling (especially as I am assuming many of the things in it are not accurate about her but its too early in the story to understand Paula and her intentions/motivations so far). I genuinely love the way you've created the game and the characters and I'm looking forward to the story as it progresses. I also like the balance you have on positive slave/master roles (principal & office), neutral slave/master roles (cheerleaders & Enola) and negative slave/master roles (Carolina). It allows the player to get a taste of what they want for Elpi. So don't feel I'm advocating a change or actually wanting you to have Elpi move out asI want you to tell the story you want. However, if you were to have her move out in the second year it could be fun if she moved in with Octavia (happy/healthy relationship), Sonya (shy chef but could be lots of fun once out of her shell), Maisa (pet play), Miss Gonzalez & Victoria (willing sex slave), or even Carolina & Mona (hardcore unwilling slave) depending on choices down the road. But that would probably massively change the direction of the story and I don't think it would be good to do when you have already taken on such a huge task with the world you're creating.

The story with Zita mansilhas, the science teacher is back in the next update... there is a lot of content with Sanchez because Carolina does the main story, a very big change is going to happen in the next updates.
I hope you played the end with Carilana... dina say you as Carolina never come back to bother Elpidia?
Super excited and looking forward to more of Zita. She seems mischevious and playful with the little exposure I've had to her. And yes, Dina did set it up correctly so Carolina no longer bothers Elpi (she protects her girls which is good for a boss to do). I can honestly say it would have been fun to have Elpi keep getting further into a bad situation with her unless you choose to nope out of it as opposed to having Octavia rescue you whether you run or stay on the last scene. It does make it great that she is such an observant and caring friend, but for people who enjoy the darker/helpless path it is a shame to end it that soon. I was hoping that if you nope out of the last scene it would allow you to get rescued but if you continued with the scene there was more instore for poor sweet Elpi. I do like the hinted upcoming twist with the Carolina & Mona story as comeupance is always fun.

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Lucas, Maisa's friend, the car dealership is there to create part of the story of the second year... cinema is one of the options that Elpidia will be able to choose for her studies in the second year.
I just did the bi-sexual route so now I understand why you mentioned Lucas previously. Only got to the first 2 stages of that so far and its fun and flirty, but I like the lesbian assistant route with massages much more though it was ended too quickly to be satisfying by Paula *shakes angry fist at Paula*. I thought it had a great potential based on the flirts and things mentioned by Maisa, but sadly never acted on (doubly so hearing her comments after you have fun with Lucas in the escort role). I would have very much enjoyed a debt riddled pet role for those two. Even though I'm sure things will still be fun now that she is a "partner" of the dealership, but that change in dynamic saddens me as it makes her an equal instead of a submissive assistant doing what her boss wants (I thought it was going to be a sweeter/more soft office style position).
 
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Yeah, my stalker comment wasn't directed towards Lucas at all as I hadn't unlocked him ( I went with the lesbian assistant route instead of the escort for my first playthrough). It was directly focused on Paula and her overbearing obsession with controlling poor little Elpi in regards to her debt and the job position.


I know Paula probably is a lot better than I make her out to be. But it very much seems to me that the reason Elpi doesn't know Paula isn't just because she's a ditz but is more sinister and intentional on the part of Paula (although I'm aware that's because I don't know the anything more than has been seen up til now).

Massive wall of text for those who are bored or curious on why I'm negative towards Paula. Abandon hope and common sense ye who read the spoiler.
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By the way, please don't take anything in the "anti-Paula" spoiler as too serious or intended in a negative way to the story you are telling (especially as I am assuming many of the things in it are not accurate about her but its too early in the story to understand Paula and her intentions/motivations so far). I genuinely love the way you've created the game and the characters and I'm looking forward to the story as it progresses. I also like the balance you have on positive slave/master roles (principal & office), neutral slave/master roles (cheerleaders & Enola) and negative slave/master roles (Carolina). It allows the player to get a taste of what they want for Elpi. So don't feel I'm advocating a change or actually wanting you to have Elpi move out asI want you to tell the story you want. However, if you were to have her move out in the second year it could be fun if she moved in with Octavia (happy/healthy relationship), Sonya (shy chef but could be lots of fun once out of her shell), Maisa (pet play), Miss Gonzalez & Victoria (willing sex slave), or even Carolina & Mona (hardcore unwilling slave) depending on choices down the road. But that would probably massively change the direction of the story and I don't think it would be good to do when you have already taken on such a huge task with the world you're creating.


Super excited and looking forward to more of Zita. She seems mischevious and playful with the little exposure I've had to her. And yes, Dina did set it up correctly so Carolina no longer bothers Elpi (she protects her girls which is good for a boss to do). I can honestly say it would have been fun to have Elpi keep getting further into a bad situation with her unless you choose to nope out of it as opposed to having Octavia rescue you whether you run or stay on the last scene. It does make it great that she is such an observant and caring friend, but for people who enjoy the darker/helpless path it is a shame to end it that soon. I was hoping that if you nope out of the last scene it would allow you to get rescued but if you continued with the scene there was more instore for poor sweet Elpi. I do like the hinted upcoming twist with the Carolina & Mona story as comeupance is always fun.

Edit:

I just did the bi-sexual route so now I understand why you mentioned Lucas previously. Only got to the first 2 stages of that so far and its fun and flirty, but I like the lesbian assistant route with massages much more though it was ended too quickly to be satisfying by Paula *shakes angry fist at Paula*. I thought it had a great potential based on the flirts and things mentioned by Maisa, but sadly never acted on (doubly so hearing her comments after you have fun with Lucas in the escort role). I would have very much enjoyed a debt riddled pet role for those two. Even though I'm sure things will still be fun now that she is a "partner" of the dealership, but that change in dynamic saddens me as it makes her an equal instead of a submissive assistant doing what her boss wants (I thought it was going to be a sweeter/more soft office style position).
Ahhh... With Paula it's very different, the plot is about "Who is Paula?" it's going to last a few more months.

Paula is a very important character and she is very kind to Elpidia, she loves her very much as well as all the girls in the orphanage.
I also want to correct you on... You say that all of Elpidia's friends are close to Paula, no, it's not true... everyone knows Paula but not everyone is close to Paula, Amelia, octavia, alba... they have never spoken with Paula, but Paula is very famous on the island.
I also want to correct, I don't know the English words well... dizzy was I think mistranslated, misunderstood... I'm not saying that Elpidia is stupid... I'm saying that she is on a cloud, she has her head in the air... dizzy... I don't know how to translate that...

Paula and Minha don't try to separate Elpidia and Paula, play the evening routine to sleep with the girls... you can follow the tuto for this routine, it's complicated... but the real goal is to bring Elpidia and Nunia together... the real goal is to prepare Elpidia and Nunia something... it will come in the next updates.

Don't hate Paula... she's an angel... she's a little bit confused but she absolutely wants to help Elpidia, she does and she's ready to do anything to help Elpidia.

Maisa is jealous, she wants Elpidia... if Elpidia goes with Maisa or not depends only on you.

Yuki... I can't tell you much about Yuki... Yuki is a character who was very criticized at the beginning of the game, when he was called Santirosa... Yuki is a forgotten character in Diaba Doa, I think Yuki will disappear from the game... she has already disappeared because we don't see her anywhere.

Paula has nothing to do with Marisol.
I think you're getting very paranoid about Paula, that's the point, I want the players to be suspicious about Paula, but I think you're doing more than I would have imagined... lol.

I'll say it again, Paula is Elpidia's guardian angel, she would never hurt Elpidia.
Maisa is a biusness woman, she's not a bad person, but you should be more wary of people like Maisa than Paula...
 
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Yeah, my stalker comment wasn't directed towards Lucas at all as I hadn't unlocked him ( I went with the lesbian assistant route instead of the escort for my first playthrough). It was directly focused on Paula and her overbearing obsession with controlling poor little Elpi in regards to her debt and the job position.


I know Paula probably is a lot better than I make her out to be. But it very much seems to me that the reason Elpi doesn't know Paula isn't just because she's a ditz but is more sinister and intentional on the part of Paula (although I'm aware that's because I don't know the anything more than has been seen up til now).

Massive wall of text for those who are bored or curious on why I'm negative towards Paula. Abandon hope and common sense ye who read the spoiler.
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By the way, please don't take anything in the "anti-Paula" spoiler as too serious or intended in a negative way to the story you are telling (especially as I am assuming many of the things in it are not accurate about her but its too early in the story to understand Paula and her intentions/motivations so far). I genuinely love the way you've created the game and the characters and I'm looking forward to the story as it progresses. I also like the balance you have on positive slave/master roles (principal & office), neutral slave/master roles (cheerleaders & Enola) and negative slave/master roles (Carolina). It allows the player to get a taste of what they want for Elpi. So don't feel I'm advocating a change or actually wanting you to have Elpi move out asI want you to tell the story you want. However, if you were to have her move out in the second year it could be fun if she moved in with Octavia (happy/healthy relationship), Sonya (shy chef but could be lots of fun once out of her shell), Maisa (pet play), Miss Gonzalez & Victoria (willing sex slave), or even Carolina & Mona (hardcore unwilling slave) depending on choices down the road. But that would probably massively change the direction of the story and I don't think it would be good to do when you have already taken on such a huge task with the world you're creating.


Super excited and looking forward to more of Zita. She seems mischevious and playful with the little exposure I've had to her. And yes, Dina did set it up correctly so Carolina no longer bothers Elpi (she protects her girls which is good for a boss to do). I can honestly say it would have been fun to have Elpi keep getting further into a bad situation with her unless you choose to nope out of it as opposed to having Octavia rescue you whether you run or stay on the last scene. It does make it great that she is such an observant and caring friend, but for people who enjoy the darker/helpless path it is a shame to end it that soon. I was hoping that if you nope out of the last scene it would allow you to get rescued but if you continued with the scene there was more instore for poor sweet Elpi. I do like the hinted upcoming twist with the Carolina & Mona story as comeupance is always fun.

Edit:

I just did the bi-sexual route so now I understand why you mentioned Lucas previously. Only got to the first 2 stages of that so far and its fun and flirty, but I like the lesbian assistant route with massages much more though it was ended too quickly to be satisfying by Paula *shakes angry fist at Paula*. I thought it had a great potential based on the flirts and things mentioned by Maisa, but sadly never acted on (doubly so hearing her comments after you have fun with Lucas in the escort role). I would have very much enjoyed a debt riddled pet role for those two. Even though I'm sure things will still be fun now that she is a "partner" of the dealership, but that change in dynamic saddens me as it makes her an equal instead of a submissive assistant doing what her boss wants (I thought it was going to be a sweeter/more soft office style position).

Octavia... she is for a very serious and romantic relationship, this character is made for players who choose softer routines... if in the second year a routine proposes a move with Octavia it will be on a very special routine...

I have to tell you the goal for the second year so that you can better imagine the rest of the game...

In August Elpidia with her friends, Paula and Nunia will create a future for themselves...
She will of course continue to dispute with Minha.

If you do a lot of sport you will have increased Elpidia's abilities, but for me in development, the number of times you do sport is counted and the same for all the other activities...

so... if you go to sports activities a lot... in August you will be able to choose a sports career... the school calendar will then be modified... as well as your options in the day and free time.

You will be able to choose several career choices...
Sport
Cinema
Business woman
Contractor
Mannequin
Festive environment
graduate student
and others... I don't know anymore...

You won't necessarily have the choice of all these professions, they will be proposed to you in function of your choice during the first year.

So for Octavia, it will be possible for you to be with her, if you make choices that bring you there, but you can imagine that if you go towards pornography it is a medium, an Elpidia that doesn't go well with Octavia.



Now, Sonya.
A very big surprise is coming with Sonya... pleasant or not... depending on your tastes.
Sonya is on the same road as Zita Mansilhas and this road sometimes influences the main story, but it will really start in the future updates.

Miss Gonzales represents almost alone the road that leads to the job of biusness woman... to follow if you want to choose this job but also to follow for the pleasure without being obliged to make it the job of Elpidia.

Carolina and Mona "Keola"... this story becomes the center of interest in the update that will arrive very soon... October, maybe... this is the main story...
When you see what's going on with Carolina and Mona a lot of things will seem more precise... things will speed up considerably...
You will have answers to your questions about Lupe, Carolina, Zita, Sonya, Keola, Paula, Marisol and other characters you may have seen but don't know.

The update I'm doing at the moment is very long because I consider that this update will mark the end of the tutorial, of the Elpidia/Santirosa learning and will launch the main story in a much more precise way.



You also seem to like the dark stories in which Elpidia can undergo a lot of wild and dark sex...

I advise you to go to the cinema on sunday, at some point you're going to have a surprising meeting of two women you know very well but you didn't imagine together, it will open a very wild and violent BDSM route...



The story with Maisa is not over... you have to go on, you can go on...
Besides, if you like Maisa, Sydnee and Nyomi, they are also on the basketball routine.
 
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Wow! I wasn't actually expecting a repsonse from my random ramblings of suspicion beyond just saying I'm crazy. 8^D
Thanks for taking the time to respond so thoroughly.
Ahhh... With Paula it's very different, the plot is about "Who is Paula?" it's going to last a few more months.

Paula is a very important character and she is very kind to Elpidia, she loves her very much as well as all the girls in the orphanage.
Hmm... Kind isn't the word I would use so far. Her intentions may be, but her actions definitely are not so far.
I also want to correct you on... You say that all of Elpidia's friends are close to Paula, no, it's not true... everyone knows Paula but not everyone is close to Paula, Amelia, octavia, alba... they have never spoken with Paula, but Paula is very famous on the island.
This was more directed on knowing Kami, Nunia, and Chloe seeming to be in Paula's circle of influence and Amelia's comment about Yuki's negative reaction towards you moving in with her. But it is good to know that she is less involved than it appeared (was uncertain with both Christmas party and New Year party and seeing people Elpi knows but not having apparently been invited by Elpi).
I also want to correct, I don't know the English words well... dizzy was I think mistranslated, misunderstood... I'm not saying that Elpidia is stupid... I'm saying that she is on a cloud, she has her head in the air... dizzy... I don't know how to translate that...
No worries. Ditzy is definitely the scatterbrained idea and not stupid as such (though it can have a negative association, it isn't inaccurate for her character). Other words could be carefree, airy, happy-go-lucky, or oblivious, though the last one would be more negative than ditzy.
Paula and Minha don't try to separate Elpidia and Paula, play the evening routine to sleep with the girls... you can follow the tuto for this routine, it's complicated... but the real goal is to bring Elpidia and Nunia together... the real goal is to prepare Elpidia and Nunia something... it will come in the next updates.
Yeah I got the complete opposite of this situation from my playthrough. It felt like they were intentionally keeping them separated so they could prey on both girls. But again, that's the difference of not knowing what's upcoming which is why I don't want you to change your intentions.
Don't hate Paula... she's an angel... she's a little bit confused but she absolutely wants to help Elpidia, she does and she's ready to do anything to help Elpidia.
Currently, she is my second least favorite character. She is just way to obsessive, controlling, and manipulative behind the scenes. It gives a very uncomfortable feeling being on the receiving end that currently, as the only knowledge I have of her is Elpi who also appears to be bothered by this (with her failed intent to investigate more and the conversation with Maisa). It really comes across that the carefree Elpi is in a helpless situation falling deeper into the web that Paula is casting.
Maisa is jealous, she wants Elpidia... if Elpidia goes with Maisa or not depends only on you.
The lesbian massage assistant route was getting interesting before it cut short (I think I said in my last post how it was my favorite of the jobs so far). I do look forward to how the relationship and job goes with her.
Yuki... I can't tell you much about Yuki... Yuki is a character who was very criticized at the beginning of the game, when he was called Santirosa... Yuki is a forgotten character in Diaba Doa, I think Yuki will disappear from the game... she has already disappeared because we don't see her anywhere.
Ah, I never played Santirosa, so I just know her from the introduction and the lunch option. If its going to be a cut character than I'll ignore the conversation with Amelia regarding her as it is irrellevant.
Paula has nothing to do with Marisol.
I think you're getting very paranoid about Paula, that's the point, I want the players to be suspicious about Paula, but I think you're doing more than I would have imagined... lol.
Very glad to hear that. I did say I was taking things too far with my guesses. 8^D
It just seemed very strange that Marisol was so quick to toss someone she apparently cared about into the negative situation. It would make sense if she was just luring in Kami, but as she said she never approached her that made it seemed like someone else had pushed them together. Obviously, it could have just been Marisol was lying from the start and taking advantage of the situation that fell in her lap, but when we have a master manipulator it got my curiosity going.
I'll say it again, Paula is Elpidia's guardian angel, she would never hurt Elpidia.
Maisa is a biusness woman, she's not a bad person, but you should be more wary of people like Maisa than Paula...
Maisa was straight forward on what she was offering: monthly payment, become her toy, or whore herself out and all 3 of those fit with Elpi's character just fine depending on the choices you make. Paula on the other hand is scheming non-stop behind Elpi's back, deeply investigating Elpi's life without her knowledge, actively trying to control and dictate her decisions and future without speaking with Elpi, and taking away Elpi's indepence and right to choose how she wants to live. That isn't a guardian angel in my eyes. It is very disturbing and feels like she is in an abusive relationship without knowing how she got herself into it. For such an open girl, losing her right to live how she chooses is not good. Even if Paula is doing it for the best of reasons because she knows more than Elpi, without engaging Elpi openly about it there is nothing positive in my view regarding her actions. There are a large number of suspense/horror movies and books that revolve around a roommate moving in and taking over/controlling the protagonists life which usually end with a very negative consequences. I know you aren't going that way, but it feels a bit like that so far.

But again, you have knowledge my little Elpi hasn't been exposed to so I have faith that the direction you are steering us will be a fun ride even if I am not happy with Paula's current behavior. Please don't take my random musings in a negative way as I'm really having a lot of fun even with my suspicions. Your characters and world are enjoyable enough that they really engage my me even if I jump down a wrong rabbit hole here or there while playing it.
 
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Octavia... she is for a very serious and romantic relationship, this character is made for players who choose softer routines... if in the second year a routine proposes a move with Octavia it will be on a very special routine...
Yeah, I imaging this would be really interesting. But I also know doing any idea of moving out Elpi would have a very extreme change to the way the story would unfold. It might be fun but it would make your life so complicated to try to figure out how to balance everything.
I have to tell you the goal for the second year so that you can better imagine the rest of the game...

In August Elpidia with her friends, Paula and Nunia will create a future for themselves...
She will of course continue to dispute with Minha.

If you do a lot of sport you will have increased Elpidia's abilities, but for me in development, the number of times you do sport is counted and the same for all the other activities...

so... if you go to sports activities a lot... in August you will be able to choose a sports career... the school calendar will then be modified... as well as your options in the day and free time.

You will be able to choose several career choices...
Sport
Cinema
Business woman
Contractor
Mannequin
Festive environment
graduate student
and others... I don't know anymore...

You won't necessarily have the choice of all these professions, they will be proposed to you in function of your choice during the first year.
I look forward all the different possibilities. Currently, my lez route was working Surf shop on Sat & Sun (but not going professional surfer), VB, office, car dealer, Galindo, and Maid (with the desire to focus on Zita before the forced Carolina situation). She was a happy little playful sub bunny so I see a bunch of different fun options to be had in her future. Once I maxed out her available scenes I had her dabble with tennis and stripper (learning to dance) and was amused to find the strippers were tied into the VB route (sadly my playthrough ended before I got to the dinner due to how late I started it up) and had a ladies night party (WONDERFUL SCENE). Wasn't expecting either of those. I probably should have looked into strip club sooner with Elpi (I didn't use the walkthrough initially and didn't realize how developed it was for both routes, figured it would be more bi focused).
Now, Sonya.
A very big surprise is coming with Sonya... pleasant or not... depending on your tastes.
Sonya is on the same road as Zita Mansilhas and this road sometimes influences the main story, but it will really start in the future updates.
I'm looking forward to both of them being developed further.
Miss Gonzales represents almost alone the road that leads to the job of biusness woman... to follow if you want to choose this job but also to follow for the pleasure without being obliged to make it the job of Elpidia.
I do hope that the option to both move up her company and stay as a low level slave are both fleshed out. I was bummed that there appear to be no more slave scenes without recruiting more girls. When Paula explained things and gave the option to stay at her current sub role I was hoping for her to have some sub scenes from the office girls in charge popping up while working. Surprised though as it sounded like the Maisa deal would also lead the business woman route.

Carolina and Mona "Keola"... this story becomes the center of interest in the update that will arrive very soon... October, maybe... this is the main story...
When you see what's going on with Carolina and Mona a lot of things will seem more precise... things will speed up considerably...
You will have answers to your questions about Lupe, Carolina, Zita, Sonya, Keola, Paula, Marisol and other characters you may have seen but don't know.

The update I'm doing at the moment is very long because I consider that this update will mark the end of the tutorial, of the Elpidia/Santirosa learning and will launch the main story in a much more precise way.
Don't worry about rushing, I'm willing to wait for you to develop the world and story at the pace you want it to unravel. I know that story pacing is very difficult especially with all the many routes that you currently have. It can't be easy to keep that many balls in the air at once so take your time so you feel that it is right. Elpi is worth waiting for.

You also seem to like the dark stories in which Elpidia can undergo a lot of wild and dark sex...
I take most of it in the same attitude Elpi had with the principal. Even though she knows she might regret it the following day, in the moment it excites her too much to care. Don't you pity my poor Elpi. 8^D
Joking aside, my intention for her first play through is a lighthearted lez pet that gets passed around a bit, but with a chance at a relationship. My second playthrough is going to be a more agressive bi sexpot not focused on anything relationship wise but also trying to avoid getting into any bad situations. My third play through will be a break the cutie play through where I choose the options I didn't in the previous ones and have her spiral into despair due to bad choices and the dark options being the focus (Carolina will love this play through).
I advise you to go to the cinema on sunday, at some point you're going to have a surprising meeting of two women you know very well but you didn't imagine together, it will open a very wild and violent BDSM route...
I got this on Christmas week and was so worried and thought I lost out on it because of the Christmas and New Years parties being on Fridays when I was supposed to go to the club. I thought it got glitched due to the parties overlapping and that's why the option never showed up on Fridays until I realized that this probably just had not been implemented yet. Super excited and looking forward to it when you release it.
The story with Maisa is not over... you have to go on, you can go on...
Besides, if you like Maisa, Sydnee and Nyomi, they are also on the basketball routine.
Oh, good to know. One of the reasons I was so bummed the assistant route ended so early and against Elpi's will was I was hoping to get to know the girls while being in the assistant toy position (which going the lez route knocks out BB). Also, had two bugs during the conversation when the lez car assistant route is ended (not sure if it affects the escort route as I'm not there yet in the bi play through). The first is an error right before the 30% profit split discussion is mentioned (I didn't save there so I can go back and replay to that scene to get the error log), and after job is accepted and Maisa does the heavy handed Paula loves you speech, one of the nameplates has Elpi saying what is probably supposed to be Maisa's line and it looks confusing. I'll grab a screen shot when I have time to the get error log.

I just started the basketball route on this bi run through though and am enjoying it. I was actually hoping for more negative consequences for losing the basketball games than just having to pay money (the femdom team and the hoodlums both sounded like poor Elpi and her team would be paying with more than just money when losing). If you are thinking of doing that, as that's how Elpi managed to get on the team in the first place, I would happily encourage that idea. Also, not sure if it is intended or not, but once the BB route starts, it is almost impossible to walk around the city. It seems the logic to go to the BB court overrides the ability to choose destination. The VB route in the park always gives the option of park or VB, while BB is forced at all times, except afternoon, if you choose to walk around the city.
 
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Elpidia lets herself be carried away by life, she is a player, a kid... she doesn't really have a very good sense of responsibility... Paula guides her and sometimes she does it in a not very nice way, maybe... but I think it goes well with Elpidia's character. She gets angry little Elpidia, but in the end, who is happy afterwards? it's Elpidia.


Elpidia lets herself be carried away by life, she is a player, a kid... she doesn't really have a very good sense of responsibility... Paula guides her and sometimes she does it in a not very nice way, maybe... but I think it goes well with Elpidia's character. She gets angry little Elpidia, but in the end, who is happy afterwards? it's Elpidia.Moreover, I can't know which road you've been on, so I don't know which characters you know and which ones you don't... so I'm forced on the Christmas pictures to do with Elpidia's friends that everybody knows no matter which road they chose.
There are also some friends of Paula and Minha at the party... some of them are not known by Elpidia... some of them are even part of future projects, some of them are part of other games.


Marisol...
It's very good that you are curious... that's the main story... that's what should make you curious.
What happened with Marisol, there is indeed someone who manipulates, who pulls the strings, but it is not Paula, you have no idea who this person is... and the person targeted by these manipulations is not Elpidia.
Elpidia finds herself stuck in a story that is not hers, but her guardian angel, Paula, is watching.


Yes the strip club scares a lot of lesbians, they find it hard to conceive that there are 100% lesbian options and it's a pity because the lesbian content of the strip club is the best of the game ...
If you had started the strip club earlier you could have chosen between guest or worker for the lady night.
There will be regularly parties like this one, so don't worry you will find your pleasure...


No the job with Maisa opens the options for the entrepreneurial job...
But if you choose entrepreneur or businesswoman in August, two routes are linked.


The walk in the city at the beginning of the game is reserved for basketball, but soon new options that you certainly don't know in the game will be proposed to you, like the neighborhood of santo domingo, several routes are in preparation on walk in the city, and if you like Tiinja then welcome to santo domingo, Tiinja lives in this neighborhood.
 
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Right now I'm doing the gameplay for the first beach volleyball match which takes place on February 25th... it takes me two weeks of work... it's complicated to create a gameplay....

The gameplay of the basketball road is already created but I haven't yet give access to all the teams because the map, is not finished, all the basketball places have not been created yet... the basketball road is under construction, but it will start in a more interesting way during the summer tournament, if you have the level to participate.

Sexual content between players of basketball teams will be added, it's a project, but I don't know when.

When you play the basketball road and you have already played a game against the hoodlums, it opens another option when Elpidia has to choose what she does to get back at marisol after the rape, I advise you to test this option on your backup or you make Elpidia despair because it should open a sad road for Elpidia.
 

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I've already looked for people to help me with the translations and some of them do the translations for me, on Santirosa, unfortunately it takes a lot of time and the people don't have that much time for me.

I'm still hoping to find someone to help me.
Are you still looking?

I downloaded your game out of curiosity and 6 hours later I'm hooked and thinking: 'Maybe I could help out with the English!'

No promises though ...80,000 words is a real helluvalot!
 
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