VN Ren'Py Abandoned Dirty Pool [v1.1] [Pirot King]

[Xand]

Dunno if the dev is going to read this but there's a few minor bugs here and there.
During conversation the MC's name comes up when he is being spoken to. this happens quite a few times with the two female npcs.
not going to comment about the atrocious grammar

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[Madbadbutajoytoknow]

Can I ask why Russian Devs never ask an English speaker to help correct the piss poor translations? They must know by now what ever they use to translate with doesn't work

This not a dig at Russian Devs I'm just curious

 

[User_10739]

So we gonna fuck cancer i see.

I'm pretty sure I have a pink t-shirt that says that on the front

 

[Ennoch]

I'm pretty sure I have a pink t-shirt that says that on the front

Hey, this isn't pink month! But who gives a damn. Lets fuck cancer

 

[User_10739]

Can I ask why Russian Devs never ask an English speaker to help correct the piss poor translations? They must know by now what ever they use to translate with doesn't work

This not a dig at Russian Devs I'm just curious

Even the ones that use Translators don't always listen. I have sent corrections to Devs on pre-releases I have tested and the data has been sent to their translators and never made it into the game...

 

[Ennoch]

Simply put: They just don't give a fuck.

 

[King Monkey Mon]

whats the first picture in the galley? and is there any other corruption porn games that have the same lv of renders as this game because that blow job scene and those pussy lips on the sister of the MC were extremely tasty

 

[myuhinny]

I haven't played this much yet but had to stop because I'm laughing at the son. They could of just as well just gave him long hair and tits he already has lipstick on and looks totally girly so they might as well just make them another sister.

 

[flinger]

In this BEST GAME EVER
Trying to be tactful here.

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[riexor]

So... I get to BE Eric? Intriguing...

 

[doidera]

Male MC?
Female MC?
What??

 

[L☹VE]

I don't know about you guys, but i like NTR way here.

what is this person talking about?

 

[Deadlyreaper]

So that could still be really interesting the game I'm looking forward to the update and hope that then has more content and yes the locked door actually you could almost suspect what is behind it because the big picture is already almost a note on it the sic hda a BDSM / SM room is with lots of sex toys :closedtongue: but in any case, she is pretty nervous as the door comes to the language

 

[myuhinny]

The MC and Nicole are brother and sister so I doubt he's that shit stain.

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Male protagonist.

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Needs male protagonist tag.

 

[User_10739]

Male MC?
Female MC?
What??

Male protag, op & tags updated.

 

[King Monkey Mon]

so was anyone able to fill up the galley i dont know where the first scene of galley is

 

[Gomly1980]

So, this is the game version of The Shining?

 

[myuhinny]

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[bronze189]

Screenshot #1

"Heeere's my Johnny!"

"Heeere's Johnny! And I'm gonna put it on my willie! Then we're gonna have sexy!"

 

[pavar]

Damn, did they just copy paste from google translate? ffs. Renderings are good and the BJ scene was awesome, but the game over because of the blackmail was shit. I mean, why kill an interesting route in the beginning? To show that the MC has no morals? We had already figured it out by ourselves. Way too short, more of a demo than a Day 1. That BJ though...