VN Ren'Py Abandoned Dirty Pool [v1.1] [Pirot King]

[supermanz95]

Engrish please?

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[pavar]

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Either your google-fu is better than mine or you proofread the google translation

 

[supermanz95]

Either your google-fu is better than mine or you proofread the google translation

Got masters in Runglish(Russian-English) from spending time around Russians:RarePepe:

 

[Dimitri57]

Yeah, I just noticed that, whomever made that screenshot needs to brush up on their PS skills. I replaced it with a proper image.

I figured it was a butt plug

 

[supermanz95]

I figured it was a butt plug

He meant the distortion mate

 

[Gomly1980]

What with her ass dude?

Yeah, I just noticed that, whomever made that screenshot needs to brush up on their PS skills. I replaced it with a proper image.

It's a butt plug, no?

 

[El bacca Del Chew]

It's a butt plug, no?

it is but they were talking about this image

the down right...thing

 

[El bacca Del Chew]

Then you have some obvious choices meant to be a joke, like the snake and the axe scenes.

Which is cool, most of same theme games are way too serious, and many users are taking it way too personal which lead to some quite disturbing comments in and there...to my eyes of course.
Anyway, a second (or third) degree humor script is pleasant to see for once.

 

[Pirot King]

Hi, guys! We just found this site, thanks for your comments, especially about problems with English. We will improve it in next versions, I promise.

 

[supermanz95]

Hi, guys! We just found this site, thanks for your comments, especially about problems with English. We will improve it in next versions, I promise.

Hi, could you give us some hints what kind of content do you have planned for the sisters son ? I'm very curious. Also love the comedy gags

 

[Pirot King]

Hi, could you give us some hints what kind of content do you have planned for the sisters son ? I'm very curious. Also love the comedy gags

Now we can't say a lot about it, but it is clear that you will have completely different story lines in each of three choices.

 

[Gomly1980]

I have an aversion to mess .... when exactly do we get to clean the pool?

 

[fulcrum]

Why the fuck do we have a snake in our pants? NO NOT THAT ONE

 

[myuhinny]

Where else are you suppose to keep it at?

 

[Hadley]

He no speak ze English. Would have been funny if that horrible English would have been worked into the Story. Like the Girl is from Russia and had to flee to America or something. But so its just hardly playable, because you have to giggle at every sentence.

 

[vivian.love]

Thank you, looks nice. Good graphics

 

[Pirot King]

Update 0.15 was just posted, you can download it from our patreon. In 0.15 we fix english grammаr, please check it and share your opinion about new translation.

 

[inbetweener]

Nice, thanks for the update!

 

[El bacca Del Chew]

Update 0.15 was just posted, you can download it from our patreon. In 0.15 we fix english grammаr, please check it and share your opinion about new translation.

Quoting the patreon page:
Hi guys, check out our new translation, and live your opinion about it below....

 

[fulcrum]

tag complaint: doesnt daughter apply only to character's offspring? would it be uncle-niece in this case?

@Pirot King
any new scenes or just text update?