Collection Ren'Py Discreen Vision Game Collection [Ch. 3 Day 25 v1.1] [Discreen Vision]

[SOYVALENTINA]

Do you think it's too late for Inusen to make a quality product?

I spoke to a guy on Discord and he says the ideas he's collected on his Patreon look promising. I hope so!

It's not so difficult to do man especially when in art you are capable , since the art can carry bad story,scam , and a childish person. Imagine if instead of remove the gallery i made would put it in game....would be better for him and for all. But he decide the route where he do what he want because he know that the money arrive anyway at the end of the month. The possibilities for doing good are incredible high, but are zero in the moment you know who person is inusen-discreen.

 

[YasuharaEma]

hey i'm on day 16 i have talk to everyone for the crime but i still have to look around, i don't understand what i have to do, on the walkthrough they say :

- talk to derbra
-open map and you see a police car click on it and talk to everyone
- Go to supermarket and talk to everyone
- talk to zoli
-go to green tent and talk
- go cili house and talk to her (Red dress girl)
- go to cake shop and talk to both police man

i have done everythings but don't seems to work

Maybe you didn't click on the two cops separately and their dialogue is different (this game is really bad without hints).

 

[darkel2001]

Of course he could but he has to cut his bullshit first, but he only needs to make quality animations and finally set a real goal when it comes to the stories and routes so the game doesn't feel like the next girl of the month thing.

Also get a fucking Team and stop doing all the shit he does at the same time.

Well, he doesn't know anything about the animations but the story says that he will finally advance in updates 24 and 25. I wait for that.

 

[Noce]

Well, he doesn't know anything about the animations but the story says that he will finally advance in updates 24 and 25. I wait for that.

That doesn't matter too much Darkel if you're a bad writer basically is going to be shit remember the plot holes on milftoon drama and how they use the "we'll get there and fix it eventually" thing that's why I'm afraid of Debra's personality when it comes to her sex drive is all over the place for the sake of the story, she works as Insusen needs her to work so she might become anything he want to advance the plot.

 

[SOYVALENTINA]

Well, he doesn't know anything about the animations but the story says that he will finally advance in updates 24 and 25. I wait for that.

still funny hear the word , story, in a game like that and from an artist like that

 

[Wahney]

When is the next patch coming out?

 

[SOYVALENTINA]

When is the next patch coming out?

Basically when he want , can be this end of the month, or any days since no more monthly updates. Right now is only out a pic for high tier showing another cynthia sex scene , feetjob , i already expect nothing XD

 

[Nullx54]

That doesn't matter too much Darkel if you're a bad writer basically is going to be shit remember the plot holes on milftoon drama and how they use the "we'll get there and fix it eventually" thing that's why I'm afraid of Debra's personality when it comes to her sex drive is all over the place for the sake of the story, she works as Insusen needs her to work so she might become anything he want to advance the plot.

To be fair The Secret of the House is more of a Porn game than an adult game as it's really the scenes that drives the game forward, not the plot. Milftoon Drama was a mix of both and that got canned for reasons people already know and have discussed.

If anything, Writing Debra's personality shouldn't be too much of a hassle as she seems to be someone that is a bit volitile, she wants to fuck Fred but at the same time she's a massive tsundere and does try to keep her Marriage to Bethalan from collapsing, so it wouldn't be too much trouble making Debra's plot revolving her indecisiveness, her relationship with Diana and her past as she had a daughter with another man prior to marrying her current husband. Going in that order could work as the "story" is reaching the tail end of her finally deciding to be with Fred and Diana is making moves on the kid so a conflict between the two would be the next step in the story before we get to see her Daughter and learn more about her past.

 

[Noce]

To be fair The Secret of the House is more of a Porn game than an adult game as it's really the scenes that drives the game forward, not the plot. Milftoon Drama was a mix of both and that got canned for reasons people already know and have discussed.

If anything, Writing Debra's personality shouldn't be too much of a hassle as she seems to be someone that is a bit volitile, she wants to fuck Fred but at the same time she's a massive tsundere and does try to keep her Marriage to Bethalan from collapsing, so it wouldn't be too much trouble making Debra's plot revolving her indecisiveness, her relationship with Diana and her past as she had a daughter with another man prior to marrying her current husband. Going in that order could work as the "story" is reaching the tail end of her finally deciding to be with Fred and Diana is making moves on the kid so a conflict between the two would be the next step in the story before we get to see her Daughter and learn more about her past.

"The Secret of the House is more of a Porn game than an adult game as it's really the scenes that drives the game forward, not the plot."

That right there summarizes everything and you're 100% I still come just to see the girls I want get fucked, which also makes the game boring too because how many times do we see some of the important girls have some development just to be moved aside for a random girl or for a scene or moment that doesn't go anywhere example the two air assistants in the apartment complex and so on and on.

I like how you have a simple option to move Debra's plot further too so simple and easy but effective.

Also when is Debra's daughter going to appear and how will that affect horny boy Fred?

I still say Inusen suck at everything else aside from Art and even tho I say he can still fix the plot/story I also believe it won't be a great one unfortunately, I don't like his dialogue and his humor doesn't make me laugh it just pisses me off at best.

Is a very hit or miss plot but hey maybe... just maybe... just a little tiny bit maybe... I can be wrong.

 

[darkel2001]

That doesn't matter too much Darkel if you're a bad writer basically is going to be shit remember the plot holes on milftoon drama and how they use the "we'll get there and fix it eventually" thing that's why I'm afraid of Debra's personality when it comes to her sex drive is all over the place for the sake of the story, she works as Insusen needs her to work so she might become anything he want to advance the plot.

Let's remember that the main "story" is knowing what happened to Fred's father and his murderer, I really found this plot interesting despite being very common, I hope this story progresses because we don't know what the hell happened to the letter I gave him to Fred to Debra in update 2, and about Debra, it's embarrassing what he's done to the best woman in the game. Now she's irrelevant and her infidelity plot isn't moving forward either, dammit!

 

[Noce]

Let's remember that the main "story" is knowing what happened to Fred's father and his murderer, I really found this plot interesting despite being very common, I hope this story progresses because we don't know what the hell happened to the letter I gave him to Fred to Debra in update 2, and about Debra, it's embarrassing what he's done to the best woman in the game. Now she's irrelevant and her infidelity plot isn't moving forward either, dammit!

he shouldn't have copy DarkCookie's plot and do something like Fred was sent to lived with his father's friend for a year since he's a no good teenager where he actually lives and make him work to be a proper member of the society with sex that way the plot is simple and Fred can roam around town helping Milfs and more.

 

[SOYVALENTINA]

he shouldn't have copy DarkCookie's plot and do something like Fred was sent to lived with his father's friend for a year since he's a no good teenager where he actually lives and make him work to be a proper member of the society with sex that way the plot is simple and Fred can roam around town helping Milfs and more.

or easily not pretend to make a story like he do, and just post gif and pics

 

[Icerock12]

"The Secret of the House is more of a Porn game than an adult game as it's really the scenes that drives the game forward, not the plot."

That right there summarizes everything and you're 100% I still come just to see the girls I want get fucked, which also makes the game boring too because how many times do we see some of the important girls have some development just to be moved aside for a random girl or for a scene or moment that doesn't go anywhere example the two air assistants in the apartment complex and so on and on.

I like how you have a simple option to move Debra's plot further too so simple and easy but effective.

Also when is Debra's daughter going to appear and how will that affect horny boy Fred?

I still say Inusen suck at everything else aside from Art and even tho I say he can still fix the plot/story I also believe it won't be a great one unfortunately, I don't like his dialogue and his humor doesn't make me laugh it just pisses me off at best.

Is a very hit or miss plot but hey maybe... just maybe... just a little tiny bit maybe... I can be wrong.

I must agree here with u mate! especially about the part with the girls being pushed aside!

I wanted to do a big rant about TSotH but i just cant find the will or time to care at this point...

 

[Noce]

I must agree here with u mate! especially about the part with the girls being pushed aside!

I wanted to do a big rant about TSotH but i just cant find the will or time to care at this point...

Is very exhausting I know

 

[Nullx54]

"The Secret of the House is more of a Porn game than an adult game as it's really the scenes that drives the game forward, not the plot."

That right there summarizes everything and you're 100% I still come just to see the girls I want get fucked, which also makes the game boring too because how many times do we see some of the important girls have some development just to be moved aside for a random girl or for a scene or moment that doesn't go anywhere example the two air assistants in the apartment complex and so on and on.

I like how you have a simple option to move Debra's plot further too so simple and easy but effective.

Also when is Debra's daughter going to appear and how will that affect horny boy Fred?

I still say Inusen suck at everything else aside from Art and even tho I say he can still fix the plot/story I also believe it won't be a great one unfortunately, I don't like his dialogue and his humor doesn't make me laugh it just pisses me off at best.

Is a very hit or miss plot but hey maybe... just maybe... just a little tiny bit maybe... I can be wrong.

I must agree here with u mate! especially about the part with the girls being pushed aside!

I wanted to do a big rant about TSotH but i just cant find the will or time to care at this point...

True, I don't mind if we get to see another woman but it veers too much of the story or even just the flow of things. Trying to tell Inusen anything isn't gonna happen because his discord is hollow and soulless, no one is giving him proper feedback or even criticising him.

At this it's better to just watch Inusen's slow fall because he hasn't been done anything to fix the game. If I was to make any recommendations it would be:

• Lower the fucking paywall, make it 45 USD tops if he is rewarding people and give people that pay 10 USD the extra scenes and make them available on for everyone on the previous build.
• Make draft of the story and talk with Writers about it on how to improve it alongside his patrons.
• Create a list of girls that are the main, secondary and tertiary/side and make sure that the story isn't move so haphazardly.
• Make the game less linear, give people the chance to meet with X girl and develop a relationship with them. This could potentially lead to the game having multiple endings but at least you could have options in how it's played. TSoTH is currently a really bad Kinetic Novel with no consequences to your actions.

Inusen got a treasure trove but is too greedy to properly make bank on what he has.

 

[Noce]

True, I don't mind if we get to see another woman but it veers too much of the story or even just the flow of things. Trying to tell Inusen anything isn't gonna happen because his discord is hollow and soulless, no one is giving him proper feedback or even criticising him.

At this it's better to just watch Inusen's slow fall because he hasn't been done anything to fix the game. If I was to make any recommendations it would be:

• Lower the fucking paywall, make it 45 USD tops if he is rewarding people and give people that pay 10 USD the extra scenes and make them available on for everyone on the previous build.
• Make draft of the story and talk with Writers about it on how to improve it alongside his patrons.
• Create a list of girls that are the main, secondary and tertiary/side and make sure that the story isn't move so haphazardly.
• Make the game less linear, give people the chance to meet with X girl and develop a relationship with them. This could potentially lead to the game having multiple endings but at least you could have options in how it's played. TSoTH is currently a really bad Kinetic Novel with no consequences to your actions.

Inusen got a treasure trove but is too greedy to properly make bank on what he has.

Man if I had someone like you when I was making my game I probably would have lasted longer but that's a thing of the past,

Your feedbacks are very on point when it comes to organize the development of the project and make it flow more naturally by having those guides.

I remember that Inusen has all his characters in his bathroom so when he sits there he never forgets how many he has (He tweeted that sometime ago if it was a joke it wasn't funny just makes me think his OCs are shit) but yeah making a list of girls that are the main, secondary and tertiary/side would help the game's pacing and stop being afraid of Older women there's people that also likes those even if it is a minority and if you as the dev doesn't like that then don't make them hot.

 

[SOYVALENTINA]

True, I don't mind if we get to see another woman but it veers too much of the story or even just the flow of things. Trying to tell Inusen anything isn't gonna happen because his discord is hollow and soulless, no one is giving him proper feedback or even criticising him.

At this it's better to just watch Inusen's slow fall because he hasn't been done anything to fix the game. If I was to make any recommendations it would be:

• Lower the fucking paywall, make it 45 USD tops if he is rewarding people and give people that pay 10 USD the extra scenes and make them available on for everyone on the previous build.
• Make draft of the story and talk with Writers about it on how to improve it alongside his patrons.
• Create a list of girls that are the main, secondary and tertiary/side and make sure that the story isn't move so haphazardly.
• Make the game less linear, give people the chance to meet with X girl and develop a relationship with them. This could potentially lead to the game having multiple endings but at least you could have options in how it's played. TSoTH is currently a really bad Kinetic Novel with no consequences to your actions.

Inusen got a treasure trove but is too greedy to properly make bank on what he has.

OH MAN SUCH A NICE IDEA, WRITE GOOD AND SERIOUS, CONSIDERING PEOPLE AND PATREON MORE, SHOWING DEDICATION ON YOUR WORK. YOU KNOW WHAT:

We give you the same short comic as usual , with not only two link to patreon for a comic on patreon, but 4 link in a single page of comic with more link then panel. As you guys said, a STORY, completely new and never see a woman draw excatly as the other big boobs and big ass, saying is ugly and shit , getting fucked again by another man. Wait is the same of debra and reused all over because is the only thing that you guys pumped up as a story and make support to discreen, naaaaah this is completely new only a good artist and writer could think something so personal and new. Now go pay for take the best next update ever where we have the same story but repeat let's gooooooooo

 

[Noce]

OH MAN SUCH A NICE IDEA, WRITE GOOD AND SERIOUS, CONSIDERING PEOPLE AND PATREON MORE, SHOWING DEDICATION ON YOUR WORK. YOU KNOW WHAT: View attachment 2411827 View attachment 2411828

We give you the same short comic as usual , with not only two link to patreon for a comic on patreon, but 4 link in a single page of comic with more link then panel. As you guys said, a STORY, completely new and never see a woman draw excatly as the other big boobs and big ass, saying is ugly and shit , getting fucked again by another man. Wait is the same of debra and reused all over because is the only thing that you guys pumped up as a story and make support to discreen, naaaaah this is completely new only a good artist and writer could think something so personal and new. Now go pay for take the best next update ever where we have the same story but repeat let's gooooooooo

The fuck I just read

That's what I mean when I say he needs a writer... Jesus that dialogue is worse than a 90's soap opera.

 

[Negativpro0]

Been having problem with the game, i need to get a screwdriver, i did all the required steps but when i talk to Svetlana the option to get a screwdriver does not appear? anybody has any suggestion?

 

[Argrond]

OH MAN SUCH A NICE IDEA, WRITE GOOD AND SERIOUS, CONSIDERING PEOPLE AND PATREON MORE, SHOWING DEDICATION ON YOUR WORK. YOU KNOW WHAT: View attachment 2411827 View attachment 2411828

We give you the same short comic as usual , with not only two link to patreon for a comic on patreon, but 4 link in a single page of comic with more link then panel. As you guys said, a STORY, completely new and never see a woman draw excatly as the other big boobs and big ass, saying is ugly and shit , getting fucked again by another man. Wait is the same of debra and reused all over because is the only thing that you guys pumped up as a story and make support to discreen, naaaaah this is completely new only a good artist and writer could think something so personal and new. Now go pay for take the best next update ever where we have the same story but repeat let's gooooooooo

For the moment here I've thought you replaced dialogues to parody his degraded writing manner, but then I've remembered who the author is. )
And here I thought he couldn't write it even more crappy...