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When it comes to Jeremy, I absolutely don't want to make him an idiot or someone who's pathetic for the sake of progressing the plot. I've portrayed him so far as someone with a backbone and who's not afraid of confrontation, while also being mature and diplomatic. Making it so he's "weak" later on would just contradict what I've written him as so far.


As for Marissa, you're right in realizing that her story is about finding herself OUTSIDE of the MC and her relationship, but resentment is a little heavy. We're still operating under the context that their relationship is healthy and she DOES love him at this point in the story. It might start brewing later on - sure, but right now it's not exactly the plot point I want to lean on.



100%! As I said earlier, Marissa's whole story is about finding herself outside of her relationship and Jeremy, so having her cheat due to something he did/she thinks he did, would just undermine her entire arc. It needs to be something she arrives to of her own volition/without any direct or indirect influence from him.
its going to be interesting to see down the line how you are able to keep those core traits of Jeremy. When at the same time, the problems presented by time and distance, plus the tropes of the genre, apply pressure towards him being a spectator who is unable to truly affect the outcome of the plot. Not saying it can't be done, and personally, I want to see him drive the plot and play a part in the final resolution as much as the other three characters. I think turning him into a powerless cuck would be a disservice to the character you created. But I could see how it would be a challenge. Everything you've done so far has been great, and I look forward to seeing what you come up with.
 
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When it comes to Jeremy, I absolutely don't want to make him an idiot or someone who's pathetic for the sake of progressing the plot. I've portrayed him so far as someone with a backbone and who's not afraid of confrontation, while also being mature and diplomatic. Making it so he's "weak" later on would just contradict what I've written him as so far.


As for Marissa, you're right in realizing that her story is about finding herself OUTSIDE of the MC and her relationship, but resentment is a little heavy. We're still operating under the context that their relationship is healthy and she DOES love him at this point in the story. It might start brewing later on - sure, but right now it's not exactly the plot point I want to lean on.



100%! As I said earlier, Marissa's whole story is about finding herself outside of her relationship and Jeremy, so having her cheat due to something he did/she thinks he did, would just undermine her entire arc. It needs to be something she arrives to of her own volition/without any direct or indirect influence from him.
The person who cheats doing it so according to their own selfish uncontrollable desires is generally considered better writing too. It's more realistic, and unironically develops (regresses?) the female character(s) in their own ways.

Every phone related cuckolding game usually leans heavily to NTS rather than NTR which is a shame because this genre is infinitely more suited to NTR, specifically the mystery style you're going for.

I just wish I could go 7 or 8 months into the future and have 8 months worth of updates all at once. Anyway, good luck.
 

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Can anyone recommend more games like this one (with any pov, preferably female or Omniscient) with ntr/cheating corruption, especially manipulation like here?
 

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Can anyone recommend more games like this one (with any pov, preferably female or Omniscient) with ntr/cheating corruption, especially manipulation like here?
Oh boy, like half of the totality of NTR games are like that. As for recommendations, try with E-Thots, since, like it's been mentioned here before, it shares the gameplay mechanic of being on a simulated pc and getting messages. On that other game you also have to play a minigame to work, but it rewards you with more scenes, depending on your choices. It's currently on hiatus, but most of the story is complete.

Other than that, you'd have to be more specific. There's countless other games that fit your description.
 

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Oh boy, like half of the totality of NTR games are like that. As for recommendations, try with E-Thots, since, like it's been mentioned here before, it shares the gameplay mechanic of being on a simulated pc and getting messages. On that other game you also have to play a minigame to work, but it rewards you with more scenes, depending on your choices. It's currently on hiatus, but most of the story is complete.

Other than that, you'd have to be more specific. There's countless other games that fit your description.
Thank you, I will try it.
I will try to be more specific.
Games where:
- All female characters related to male mc (girlfriend, sister, etc.) get corrupted (preferably manipulation) and fucked. Games with only the wife or so are boring to me.
- Prefer 3d renders (others are fine too, like Illusion game renders but 3d is preferred).
- Netorare not netorase.
- Prefer non-male cuck mc pov, at least not entirely that. I like to see the women corrupted and manipulated.
- Some mind control is not bad either.
- Likeable characters and/or story.

Some examples that come to mind (most don't completely cover all of the things I listed before though):
This game
Sword Art Online
Demon Hunter
Of Birds and Bees
 

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Thank you, I will try it.
I will try to be more specific.
Games where:
- All female characters related to male mc (girlfriend, sister, etc.) get corrupted (preferably manipulation) and fucked. Games with only the wife or so are boring to me.
- Prefer 3d renders (others are fine too, like Illusion game renders but 3d is preferred).
- Netorare not netorase.
- Prefer non-male cuck mc pov, at least not entirely that. I like to see the women corrupted and manipulated.
- Some mind control is not bad either.
- Likeable characters and/or story.

Some examples that come to mind (most don't completely cover all of the things I listed before though):
This game
Sword Art Online
Demon Hunter
Of Birds and Bees
Man, most of the NTR games that I know of are 2D. For 3D games, off the top of my head I could recommend:

  • Nostalgia and Lust (it takes a bit of playing to get to the good stuff, and you have to actively fail to get the NTR route)
  • Desert Stalker (less NTR and more sharing, but it's a good game)
  • Calendar Bitchy Girlfriend's NTR Fiction (AFAIK the only translation available is MTL, so you have to either forget about the plot or try reallyhard to understand it.
  • Let the Nightshine In (used to be very good but the quality has fallen a bit in recent releases)
  • LOOK.hac
  • My Friend's Family (different routes available, but the NTR route is good. I recommend following the walkthrough.)
  • Pirates of Lust (abandonded, which is a shame since it had potential).
I also recommend that you take a look at games mentioned in these two lists. I'm sure you'll find something like what you're looking for, my dude.

 
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Hello again!
I come to you with a couple more previews cause... well, why not!

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And that's all! For now...
Can't wait to see Adrianna try to seduce Marissa - her brother's girlfriend!
 

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You make that shit happen, Glephy , and this officially becomes the BEST NTR game on the market, no doubt. Not even kidding.

Flora and Adrianna bickering over who gets Marissa's flower first ;)
 

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Enjoying the slow burn nature of this but I kinda feel like the NSFW content is light for 60 in-game days.

Edit: I will also add, though

I highly enjoy the layout and functionality of the 'messaging' app, and being able to peruse that Cuckchan message board is nice. I also wanna say that even though you intended it to be a condom, I straight up thought that dude was gonna toss a water balloon on the sunbathing girl in that one CG ..

One thing I wish more NTR games did was use snooping apps that tell you stats like how many times they've cheated, usage, arousal and relationship states.

Just shower thoughts.
 
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When it comes to Jeremy, I absolutely don't want to make him an idiot or someone who's pathetic for the sake of progressing the plot. I've portrayed him so far as someone with a backbone and who's not afraid of confrontation, while also being mature and diplomatic. Making it so he's "weak" later on would just contradict what I've written him as so far.


As for Marissa, you're right in realizing that her story is about finding herself OUTSIDE of the MC and her relationship, but resentment is a little heavy. We're still operating under the context that their relationship is healthy and she DOES love him at this point in the story. It might start brewing later on - sure, but right now it's not exactly the plot point I want to lean on.



100%! As I said earlier, Marissa's whole story is about finding herself outside of her relationship and Jeremy, so having her cheat due to something he did/she thinks he did, would just undermine her entire arc. It needs to be something she arrives to of her own volition/without any direct or indirect influence from him.
Glenphy I think you're going to lose more subs than you gain by trying to make the story too organic. i.e. Marissa finding herself? How long is that going to take? Plus, you shifted Marissa toward lesbian play which many NTR and cheating fans aren't into. Some are, but not the majority. Hope I'm wrong. You're writing is terrific and I appreciate your hard work.
 

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Glenphy I think you're going to lose more subs than you gain by trying to make the story too organic. i.e. Marissa finding herself? How long is that going to take? Plus, you shifted Marissa toward lesbian play which many NTR and cheating fans aren't into. Some are, but not the majority. Hope I'm wrong. You're writing is terrific and I appreciate your hard work.
Time within the game moves fast - it's already been over a month of their time apart in just 3 updates of the game. It's not unreasonable to assume her NTR arc will be fully realized in a few more patches (several months with her new friends and away from MC).

And for everyone bashing on "lesbian" NTR - go suck a lemon. The story is clearly setting up Marissa x Adrianna and Marissa x Flora. It's going to happen eventually - I am just asking the dev for Marissa to cheat on MC with Flora or Adrianna first, not that she never cheats with another guy. Read carefully before you twist your panties in a bunch. Do you know how rare lesbian NTR even is?
 

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For anyone who's concerned about Marissa's route...

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Hopefully, people will stop acting like I tried to ruin the game. Lesbian stuff will happen on Marissa’s route, it is unavoidable. There will probably be MFF threesomes as well. Flora won’t magically stop being a part of the NTR once Justin manages to sleep with Marissa, and neither will Adrianna.
 
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Lesbian stuff in NTR is like... the most boring thing you can imagine probably, especially if it's "pushing" corruption. Like wow, girl now push another girl to kiss another girl, INSANE!, what a corruption :BootyTime:.

For it to be NTR (as in netorare) - you (as player) should... kinda care what girl cheats on you, and what she will do something you consider cheating. And I might be wrong or too open minded, but I think there is considerable amount of ppl who if asked "do you consider cheating, if your girl will kiss or jerk another woman off?" they will be like "Eh, I guess it's whatever. Maybe she will call me next time to join, lol :p" :unsure:

If she will push her to cheat with SOMEONE and make her more open to it - it fits. If it's FFM LATER down the line, yeah - it fits. It can work if Flora (or Adri) "push" her toward other man to "corrupt" her toward cheating WITH HIM (Justin in this case), but not to claim her for themself in "Oi, I will steal GF of my brother, lol" kinda way.
If her beginning and first "sex" will be with another girl? Meh, again - it's whatever and just straight up boring to see
Is there many ppl who would care about Adrianna cheating on *her girlfriend name*, if it was with another girl? Let's be real :BootyTime:

I see there is some (1-2) dudes who want to turn this in to some lesbo heaven with every girl jumping on the GF of main protag, but there is a reason why it's not that popular in NTR titles - not that many ppl care about it and it's boring :lepew::coffee:
In my opinion of course
 

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Lesbian stuff in NTR is like... the most boring thing you can imagine probably, especially if it's "pushing" corruption. Like wow, girl now push another girl to kiss another girl, INSANE!, what a corruption :BootyTime:.

For it to be NTR (as in netorare) - you (as player) should... kinda care what girl cheats on you, and what she will do something you consider cheating. And I might be wrong or too open minded, but I think there is considerable amount of ppl who if asked "do you consider cheating, if your girl will kiss or jerk another woman off?" they will be like "Eh, I guess it's whatever. Maybe she will call me next time to join, lol :p" :unsure:

If she will push her to cheat with SOMEONE and make her more open to it - it fits. If it's FFM LATER down the line, yeah - it fits. It can work if Flora (or Adri) "push" her toward other man to "corrupt" her toward cheating WITH HIM (Justin in this case), but not to claim her for themself in "Oi, I will steal GF of my brother, lol" kinda way.
If her beginning and first "sex" will be with another girl? Meh, again - it's whatever and just straight up boring to see
Is there many ppl who would care about Adrianna cheating on *her girlfriend name*, if it was with another girl? Let's be real :BootyTime:

I see there is some (1-2) dudes who want to turn this in to some lesbo heaven with every girl jumping on the GF of main protag, but there is a reason why it's not that popular in NTR titles - not that many ppl care about it and it's boring :lepew::coffee:
In my opinion of course
I don't disagree, Lesbian NTR isn't really my thing either. At least for Marissa's route, I'm more interested in seeing how her corruption is written than the actual content itself. For the purpose of ultimately serving Justin's interests, I'm fine with Flora to an extent, just so long as it doesn't completely subvert the initial set-up. But I'd be lying if I were to say that I don't have any doubts about it, especially with how Adrianna's in the mix.

Even if things were to go in that direction, I'd be fine with it under the condition that Gemma's route remains as it's own thing. I can understand some overlap, but it's better if all the girls have their own distinct downfalls.
 
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