Ren'Py Dissonance [v4.1] [Glephy]

[OdinValgallovih]

What is even the purpose of this comment?

The game will have lesbian NTR scenes (Marissa x Flora, and possibly even Marissa x Adriana), that much is clear. Are you saying you are still hoping all this build-up with Flora dissipates and turns into Marissa lusting after Justin just to avoid lesbian stuff in a game that already features a lesbian couple?? Please, explain how wanting to see a natural culmination of a plot line the developer himself has been setting up since the start of the story is delusional or misguided?

Dissonance having lesbian NTR is actually a breath of fresh air, and if you don't like it - there are still 2 other girls that have been seduced by MEN first.

You look like a typical dispatched fetish fan who spams the thread with their fantasies and desires

 

[OdinValgallovih]

Glephy , here is my baked feedback for 0.4:
All of the NTR antagonists come across as too malicious.
Once again, the issue of "lesbian NTR" is given more light given the development in 0.4. I will say this again: Flora x Marissa deserve as much attention as Justin x Marissa will (presumably) get. The way you've built up their relationship is beautiful, and incredibly electric - it would be a giant waste of hard work to sideline Flora once Marissa's relationship with Justin progresses. I hope you can see that as well, and find some way to keep her included in the final arcs.

Welcome to the games of NTR, my young friend.
Once again, you're mistaking wishful thinking for reality. Even the developer noticed that the concept was leaning too much toward niche lesbian NTR and decided to fix it.

 

[Black123]

Great game, does anyone have similar game like this, Tks !!

 

[Filipis]

Welcome to the games of NTR, my young friend.
Once again, you're mistaking wishful thinking for reality. Even the developer noticed that the concept was leaning too much toward niche lesbian NTR and decided to fix it.

From what the developer said, and it was evident (even to me), that a lot of attention went to Flora - way more than he intended, given how little Justin got in comparison.

That however, is the side-effect of having to use Flora as a "sneaky" way to erode Marissa' morals (as outlined in one of his Patreon posts); it was his choice to do it this way, to make it as natural as possible.

The consequence is, Flora has become an integral part of Marissa's new "identity", that discarding her completely in favor of Justin would be just as big of a mistake as forgetting Justin was meant to be in it, too.

 

[OdinValgallovih]

From what the developer said, and it was evident (even to me), that a lot of attention went to Flora - way more than he intended, given how little Justin got in comparison.

That however, is the side-effect of having to use Flora as a "sneaky" way to erode Marissa' morals (as outlined in one of his Patreon posts); it was his choice to do it this way, to make it as natural as possible.

The consequence is, Flora has become an integral part of Marissa's new "identity", that discarding her completely in favor of Justin would be just as big of a mistake as forgetting Justin was meant to be in it, too.

I can believe a woman being seduced by a man, but a woman being seduced by another woman? So now Marissa has to be made bisexual? And after her experience with a woman, she suddenly wants to sleep with Justin too, right? Then I guess next comes sex with Adrianna? The next stop must be a brothel, since Marissa will end up sleeping not only with Flora, but also with Justin and Adriana. Even for NTR, this is too much.

 

[Jeycii_]

how does the gallery work. wont it unlock after starting ith day 60?

 

[Filipis]

how does the gallery work. wont it unlock after starting ith day 60?

The gallery will be added with a patched 0.4 version coming some days after the official release of 0.4, so some time in the next week.

 

[Filipis]

I can believe a woman being seduced by a man, but a woman being seduced by another woman? So now Marissa has to be made bisexual? And after her experience with a woman, she suddenly wants to sleep with Justin too, right? Then I guess next comes sex with Adrianna? The next stop must be a brothel, since Marissa will end up sleeping not only with Flora, but also with Justin and Adriana. Even for NTR, this is too much.

What a ridiculous train of thought.

Marissa is becoming more open sexually, and part of Flora's corruption on her was viewing sexuality and physicality as something detached from romantic relationships; evident in how she is enjoying Flora's overt sexual advances and physical contact. To be fair, currently, Flora is more into Marissa than vice versa, but that's likely just Marissa not being able to admit she desires Flora sexually as well (yet). End of the episode has Marissa come to terms with "living in the now" and not worrying how her actions will affect her future; saying she is curious to see how far she can push her 'fling' with Flora.

To me, that sounds someone that has been corrupted enough to consider their bisexuality. We'll probably see some more awkward moments between her and Adriana after that confession, too, but that doesn't mean the next step is becoming a village slut.

In fact, I'd argue it's imperative she breaks her boundaries of staying sexually faithful with Flora, because that's the natural segue into being interested in having a fling with Justin as well. It won't work if Marissa suddenly wants to fuck Justin without ever crossing any lines with Flora.

 

[OdinValgallovih]

It won't work if Marissa suddenly wants to fuck Justin without ever crossing any lines with Flora.

To make that claim, you'd have to be the creator of this VN

 

[Filipis]

To make that claim, you'd have to be the creator of this VN

No, I don't.

It wouldn't make any logical consistency if Marissa completely skipped over Flora to have sex with Justin first, when it's clear that Flora is attracted to Marissa and vice versa.

You are the one accusing Marissa of becoming a slut if she has sex with Flora, then Justin, and then Adriana - but immediately jumping into sex with Justin after so much fuss with Flora about crossing boundaries wouldn't make her a slut??

 

[orange112]

I know this is an NTR game but like another commenter said, i really hope bonnie remains a fallback LI for Jeremy or he atleast gets a bittersweet ending. I feel really bad for this guy man. Realistically, he'll end up in a very dark place if he keeps getting betrayed and ntred left, right and center.

Bonnie somehow getting ntred by nick would be absolutely heartwrenching.

 

[JohnSchuler]

Bonnie somehow getting ntred by nick would be absolutely heartwrenching.

Mmmm, Yeah. That would be cool

 

[Glephy]

Welp. Since the update's already been leaked, might as well make sure you're not playing a broken version.

Here's the

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. Just replace your current scripts.rpa file with this one.
Also fixes a couple images not being displayed properly.

 

[Deleted member 9536489]

Welp. Since the update's already been leaked, might as well make sure you're not playing a broken version.

Here's the mystery mode fix. Just replace your current scripts.rpa file with this one.
Also fixes a couple images not being displayed properly.

I liked this update, Dev. Just please don't stretch this Flora x Marissa's arc. I hope you start focusing on her story with Justin more. Thanks again for your hard work as always!

 

[hakunapotata]

Welp. Since the update's already been leaked, might as well make sure you're not playing a broken version.

Here's the mystery mode fix. Just replace your current scripts.rpa file with this one.
Also fixes a couple images not being displayed properly.

I know it can be annoying but really its the greatest compliment to your game, people are hyped and and eager to play every update as soon as possible.
Also good luck with future updates I love what you have so far

 

[Naughty Gamer]

Any Android port yet ?

 

[Eye-switcher]

Marissa going after Flora instead of Justin destroyed this game for me. Last time i played it

 

[Eye-switcher]

Btw "Lesbianism" tag is missing and probably should be added

 

[StrongEpsilon]

I get it... when I posted a pertinent comment about that guy Trevor, I got a stupid joke from some guy around here. It's OK, I don't care.

But now, with these burgundy shorts, besides the fact that a photo was posted of the girl wearing them, there is also a photo of the guy who posted it on his profile.

I also understand that there is a possibility that MC does not check the forum daily, although it should be self-evident that MC checks it daily, otherwise it makes no sense in the unfolding of the story... but, just like that, MC, who at first seemed to be paying attention to details, has become a moron, typical of the clichés of the ntr style.

Dude (you know who), what kind of joke are you making now, that those shorts are so popular that all the girls in that town wear them? Ugh!

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[Deleted member 9536489]

I get it... when I posted a pertinent comment about that guy Trevor, I got a stupid joke from some guy around here. It's OK, I don't care.

But now, with these burgundy shorts, besides the fact that a photo was posted of the girl wearing them, there is also a photo of the guy who posted it on his profile.

I also understand that there is a possibility that MC does not check the forum daily, although it should be self-evident that MC checks it daily, otherwise it makes no sense in the unfolding of the story... but, just like that, MC, who at first seemed to be paying attention to details, has become a moron, typical of the clichés of the ntr style.

Dude (you know who), what kind of joke are you making now, that those shorts are so popular that all the girls in that town wear them? Ugh!

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There can be a lot of girls with such shorts, Marissa was just another.