VN Ren'Py Divinity [Update 2] [toasterkun]

[theprout]

hi there is something that I do not understand the game just stops after the idea of the invasion of "DOG" or I miss something?

 

[garbage.kun]

hi there is something that I do not understand the game just stops after the idea of the invasion of "DOG" or I miss something?

Hi theprout

if you're refererring to the end of chapter 1 from the red haired girl, yes, that is the end of update 1 i wanted to avoid a message that breaks the fourth wall like "this is the end of update 1", so i'm sorry if the end of part 1 "message" is unclear 0_0 (it only said to the effect of "there's nothing more for now")

thanks!

 

[theprout]

Hi theprout

if you're refererring to the end of chapter 1 from the red haired girl, yes, that is the end of update 1 i wanted to avoid a message that breaks the fourth wall like "this is the end of update 1", so i'm sorry if the end of part 1 "message" is unclear 0_0 (it only said to the effect of "there's nothing more for now")

thanks!

ok thank you, so I will look forward to the next update

 

[Rockero_69]

Hi garbage.kun , I have a few questions:
How many LIs will there be and with that there will be a Harem?
There will be action with the non-sister
And how much of the content is forced and how much is avoidable?

 

[garbage.kun]

Hi garbage.kun , I have a few questions:
How many LIs will there be and with that there will be a Harem?
There will be action with the non-sister
And how much of the content is forced and how much is avoidable?

Hi Rockero_69

I will try to answer as detailed as possible, because (i'm really sorry for this) but i might misunderstood some of your question.

• How many LIs will there be :

There are two ways i can answer this, the first one is, here are the design sketches (some of these are rough) for the character designs (in other words, "LIs") that i've made background and rough plot points for :



Among these, plotwise, the LI's in a strict sense (as in, its possible to have a rather "good" ending with them) are ...

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But, with my problem in writing the sentences (not necessarily the plot point by itself), its not realistic to expect all of them anytime soon. the one that are crucial to the plot (which means they have to be included for the plot the progress) are the first three, the blonde at the bottom, and the two with red hair.

• with that there will be a Harem?

With my limited writing skill, my goal is just to write a single path to the end first, and the ending to that path...

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I'm not saying that would be the only path, but that i can't develop more than one path with my current writing speed. 0_0a

• There will be action with the non-sister

I'm not sure i understood this question correctly, so i will try to answer all the possible interpretation

Will there be sex with the twin that are currently with you ? yes. but not anytime soon, because the plot must progress to the point where it makes sense

will there be sex with the other twin ? yes, but with same timeline as the first twin

will there be sex with girls other than the twin ? yes

• And how much of the content is forced and how much is avoidable?

hmm... its a bit hard to quantify. instead of a number, i think my answer would have to be "if a possible sex/erotic scenes occur inside the story, where setting wise, and considering the motivation/behaviour of the character, it doesn't make sense to happen any other way, then it would be unavoidable."

for example, it is alluded in update 1 that our "Sister" have an idea to trade the Servant for favours with the nobilities around the area. this situation would be avoidable because it is still in character for our MC to say no, because he wants to keep her for himself

but, some situation (which i admit some people would be uncomfortable with) like the first sex scene with the servant would be unavoidable. i'm really sorry, but given that it doesn't make sense setting wise for any of the girls (except one) to be "slutty", and plot wise, it doesn't make sense for our MC to suddenly change his character at this point, that encounter have no other way to proceed. Unfortunately, simply skipping through it would also pose a problem because there are some plot points and character actions in there that i (tried to) use to show their "characters"


Thank you for your interest


ps :finally done with the text for the main plot line for update 2 (this amounted to 7.3 K words). currently putting into the code while doing another reread and polishing, and then moving on to the writing of the more ero scenes for update 2.

again, i'm sorry that update would be much shorter (at most perhaps around 9K words), which is slightly less than half of update 1

still working as much as i can 0_0b

 

[Rockero_69]

Hi Rockero_69

I will try to answer as detailed as possible, because (i'm really sorry for this) but i might misunderstood some of your question.

• How many LIs will there be :

There are two ways i can answer this, the first one is, here are the design sketches (some of these are rough) for the character designs (in other words, "LIs") that i've made background and rough plot points for :

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Among these, plotwise, the LI's in a strict sense (as in, its possible to have a rather "good" ending with them) are ...

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But, with my problem in writing the sentences (not necessarily the plot point by itself), its not realistic to expect all of them anytime soon. the one that are crucial to the plot (which means they have to be included for the plot the progress) are the first three, the blonde at the bottom, and the two with red hair.

• with that there will be a Harem?

With my limited writing skill, my goal is just to write a single path to the end first, and the ending to that path...

Spoiler

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I'm not saying that would be the only path, but that i can't develop more than one path with my current writing speed. 0_0a

• There will be action with the non-sister

I'm not sure i understood this question correctly, so i will try to answer all the possible interpretation

Will there be sex with the twin that are currently with you ? yes. but not anytime soon, because the plot must progress to the point where it makes sense

will there be sex with the other twin ? yes, but with same timeline as the first twin

will there be sex with girls other than the twin ? yes

• And how much of the content is forced and how much is avoidable?

hmm... its a bit hard to quantify. instead of a number, i think my answer would have to be "if a possible sex/erotic scenes occur inside the story, where setting wise, and considering the motivation/behaviour of the character, it doesn't make sense to happen any other way, then it would be unavoidable."

for example, it is alluded in update 1 that our "Sister" have an idea to trade the Servant for favours with the nobilities around the area. this situation would be avoidable because it is still in character for our MC to say no, because he wants to keep her for himself

but, some situation (which i admit some people would be uncomfortable with) like the first sex scene with the servant would be unavoidable. i'm really sorry, but given that it doesn't make sense setting wise for any of the girls (except one) to be "slutty", and plot wise, it doesn't make sense for our MC to suddenly change his character at this point, that encounter have no other way to proceed. Unfortunately, simply skipping through it would also pose a problem because there are some plot points and character actions in there that i (tried to) use to show their "characters"


Thank you for your interest


ps :finally done with the text for the main plot line for update 2 (this amounted to 7.3 K words). currently putting into the code while doing another reread and polishing, and then moving on to the writing of the more ero scenes for update 2.

again, i'm sorry that update would be much shorter (at most perhaps around 9K words), which is slightly less than half of update 1

still working as much as i can 0_0b

Ok, thanks for the answers
The non-sister thing is because of what the description says and also because in the unplanned tags there is Incest, that's why I thought there was no action with the sister, I don't know if I made myself clear, my English is bad, so it seems different from there, we'll have to see how it evolves and so on, greetings and good luck DEV

 

[garbage.kun]

Ok, thanks for the answers
The non-sister thing is because of what the description says and also because in the unplanned tags there is Incest, that's why I thought there was no action with the sister, I don't know if I made myself clear, my English is bad, so it seems different from there, we'll have to see how it evolves and so on, greetings and good luck DEV

Hi Rockero_69

Thanks Just to make it clear (i don't know if this will make you avoid the game or not lol ), the tags are correct. This game does not contain incest. But our "Sister" is a LI with planned sex scene, because (spoilers)

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Thanks!

 

[garbage.kun]

Hi

Merry christmas/holidays/ just a day off Sorry, i didn't make any special christmas renders 0_0

with the chapter 2 done (just need 1 more bgm and the endless pass of reread to make sure there are no stupidly missed mistakes), currently pushing the text on the next part of right after that so that i can release at the (very) end of dec with more ero content, because chapter 2 is very sparse in ero content.

these renders are from the part that setting wise makes more sense to have more ero renders (it doesnt make sense to have too much ero renders when there are people trying to kill the MC lol ). (standard disclaimer about "the light and angle can still change depending on the n-th rereading )


thanks!

 

[garbage.kun]

Hi, a release date update (30th/31st December 2024)

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TLDR : in the end, its a passion project, and i don't want to release unpolished sex scenes, so you might want to skip this update, and wait for the more sex oriented update m(_ _)m. this ...relatively non ero update will be released in 30th/31st of december

okay, so here's the current situation :

• Chapter 2 (Keeper of the Garden) from the book of The Abomination is done , with ambiance sound and background music. I've reread through them multiple time, and .... I don't hate it ...too much 0_0a (take it with a grain of salt though, i hated almost everything i make ) i'm just waiting for someone i asked IRL to read through them for any last minute change in the text.
• This means I will release that chapter on 30th/31st of December
• This chapter...is admittedly short (8K words, 158 render, 0 animation). I totally understand if people would be disappointed. For comparison, the Prologue + Chapter 1 is 6K words.
• How satisfied am I with chapter 2 ? ...it is... difficult for me to write, and its not ero. which is why, I don't think it would get a good reception.
  
  In the simplest of term, its a fight scene, built to establish the cost, choices, and risk some of the characters are taking. I understand that in the end its..basically glorified porn, but in the word of another dev i've come to know "i want to make it make sense" which is...hard... because Chapter 2 marks one of the first time the MC make a rather major decision without "other influences"
• Why I won't add Chapter 3, which is ero oriented and I should be able to finish by December too : because I don't think it will be polished enough. As a slow writer, i ruminate for multiple days after the text is integrated into renpy, making a lot of changes to polish them. And also after making Chapter 2, (just like my readers), can no longer allow long pauses of silences in the VN lol.

So what's the plan ? After Update 2, i will release update 2.5 by the end of january, which is ero oriented. Once i've felt that this game has enough/use most of its potential ero scenes based on the progression of the plot, I will then advance the plot again (which will admittedly..take a long time to write for me).

I will be honest, that i'm saddened by my inability to write faster. But in the end, this is a passion project for me, and I have decided not to release anything that i'm not satisfied with.

Thanks! (and sorry for the sombre tone 0__0;;

 

[ModaGr33n]

Hi, a release date update (30th/31st December 2024)

You must be registered to see the links

TLDR : in the end, its a passion project, and i don't want to release unpolished sex scenes, so you might want to skip this update, and wait for the more sex oriented update m(_ _)m. this ...relatively non ero update will be released in 30th/31st of december

okay, so here's the current situation :

• Chapter 2 (Keeper of the Garden) from the book of The Abomination is done , with ambiance sound and background music. I've reread through them multiple time, and .... I don't hate it ...too much 0_0a (take it with a grain of salt though, i hated almost everything i make ) i'm just waiting for someone i asked IRL to read through them for any last minute change in the text.
• This means I will release that chapter on 30th/31st of December
• This chapter...is admittedly short (8K words, 158 render, 0 animation). I totally understand if people would be disappointed. For comparison, the Prologue + Chapter 1 is 6K words.
• How satisfied am I with chapter 2 ? ...it is... difficult for me to write, and its not ero. which is why, I don't think it would get a good reception.
  
  In the simplest of term, its a fight scene, built to establish the cost, choices, and risk some of the characters are taking. I understand that in the end its..basically glorified porn, but in the word of another dev i've come to know "i want to make it make sense" which is...hard... because Chapter 2 marks one of the first time the MC make a rather major decision
• Why I won't add Chapter 3, which is ero oriented and I should be able to finish by December too : because I don't think it will be polished enough. As a slow writer, i ruminate for multiple days after the text is integrated into renpy, making a lot of changes to polish them. And also after making Chapter 2, (just like my readers), can no longer allow long pauses of silences in the VN lol.

So what's the plan ? After Update 2, i will release update 2.5 by the end of january, which is ero oriented. Once i've felt that this game has enough/use most of its potential ero scenes based on the progression of the plot, I will then advance the plot again (which will admittedly..take a long time to write for me).

I will be honest, that i'm saddened by my inability to write faster. But in the end, this is a passion project for me, and I have decided not to release anything that i'm not satisfied with.

Thanks! (and sorry for the sombre tone 0__0;;

I've been waiting for the second update to write a review. Which, I think a number of people do on this site. Based on what you said in your post, would you prefer it be reviewed on the 3rd update, or the 2nd?

I'll probably like both, but if I'm going to give an evaluation, I would prefer it be on the work you want to be evaluated. I get the vibe from your post that you feel not having the ero content is a bit unsatisfactory. Which, is totally fair.

Hopefully, it's not tedious for me to ask. I just want to see this game get made and I know people definitely sometimes decide to give a game a shot based on the reviews.

Cheers, and hope you find time to sleep when you're not working or creating.

 

[garbage.kun]

I've been waiting for the second update to write a review. Which, I think a number of people do on this site. Based on what you said in your post, would you prefer it be reviewed on the 3rd update, or the 2nd?

I'll probably like both, but if I'm going to give an evaluation, I would prefer it be on the work you want to be evaluated. I get the vibe from your post that you feel not having the ero content is a bit unsatisfactory. Which, is totally fair.

Hopefully, it's not tedious for me to ask. I just want to see this game get made and I know people definitely sometimes decide to give a game a shot based on the reviews.

Cheers, and hope you find time to sleep when you're not working or creating.

Hi ModaGr33n

Of course its not tedious . hmm... actually i'm a bit at loss on how to answer this 0_0;; i'm already thankful enough that you actually like update 1, and i (from the bottom of my heart) hope that people that like update 1 would not be too disappointed with update 2 that i feel bad trying to influence your review.

i guess, maybe if update 2 disappoints you in its ero content, i would humbly ask you to wait as i flesh out the ero scenes.

but to tell you the truth, you have already been very supportive, and whatever you choose to do, i'm still very grateful to the point i feel bad for asking to postpone your review or things like that 0_0

Thanks for the likes btw it helps to know

well, like all the dev's that i'm friends with, sleep is basically a time to pause our mind, in order to reread the works again with a clear mind, so yeah. i'm still getting enough sleep thanks its a passion project, so its tiring, but... in a strange way, the satisfaction of making something that looks beautiful is immeasurable.sharing it with the public is...hahaha...anxiety inducing though

 

[ModaGr33n]

Hi ModaGr33n

Of course its not tedious . hmm... actually i'm a bit at loss on how to answer this 0_0;; i'm already thankful enough that you actually like update 1, and i (from the bottom of my heart) hope that people that like update 1 would not be too disappointed with update 2 that i feel bad trying to influence your review.

i guess, maybe if update 2 disappoints you in its ero content, i would humbly ask you to wait as i flesh out the ero scenes.

but to tell you the truth, you have already been very supportive, and whatever you choose to do, i'm still very grateful to the point i feel bad for asking to postpone your review or things like that 0_0

Thanks for the likes btw it helps to know

well, like all the dev's that i'm friends with, sleep is basically a time to pause our mind, in order to reread the works again with a clear mind, so yeah. i'm still getting enough sleep thanks its a passion project, so its tiring, but... in a strange way, the satisfaction of making something that looks beautiful is immeasurable.sharing it with the public is...hahaha...anxiety inducing though

Got it.

If there isn't a specific reason on the dev side to do otherwise, I'll just put it off till the 3rd.

Your renders are awesome. And, I'd definitely want to talk about that. Which, can certainly be done with a fight scene. But, a review is for other people on this site and we know why other people are on this site, lol.

I imagine the fight scene is with the half-demon lady and her tribe (Chapter 2) and the ero chapter is getting more "familiar" with the half-demon lady (Chapter 3), plus other stuff if you have time.

Anyway, I'm a huge fantasy fan, but also a huge ero fan, too. I'm just stoked that someone is trying to go all the way in something that fits both genres.

 

[garbage.kun]

Got it.

If there isn't a specific reason on the dev side to do otherwise, I'll just put it off till the 3rd.

Your renders are awesome. And, I'd definitely want to talk about that. Which, can certainly be done with a fight scene. But, a review is for other people on this site and we know why other people are on this site, lol.

I imagine the fight scene is with the half-demon lady and her tribe (Chapter 2) and the ero chapter is getting more "familiar" with the half-demon lady (Chapter 3), plus other stuff if you have time.

Anyway, I'm a huge fantasy fan, but also a huge ero fan, too. I'm just stoked that someone is trying to go all the way in something that fits both genres.

Thanks!

Your renders are awesome. And, I'd definitely want to talk about that. Which, can certainly be done with a fight scene. But, a review is for other people on this site and we know why other people are on this site, lol.

i'm glad you like it. there's more renders if you want (all free) in my discord, or pixiv, or patreon, or subscribestar lol
yeah...to tell you the truth, for me at least, making ero renders are much easier than writing a fight scene lol but... i believe the way the character acts in non sex related scene would make the actual sex scene hotter because she won't be just "a body" and instead be "a character" 0_0

I imagine the fight scene is with the half-demon lady and her tribe (Chapter 2)

yes, but just...a small group of them. its a continuation of the MC and her Sister's attempt at eliminating/interrogating the "half-demons" one at a time, but something went even more wrong than they anticipated...

there will be another confrontation with them in the very near future.

chapter 3 has multiple erotic part:

• a non explicit scenes with that character from chapter 2, which have a little plot element to make her approach toward sexual scenes with the MC in the future very different from the servant and the Sister
• a more explicit scenes with the Servant as the MC and her "Sister" deal with the aftermath of chapter 2 and 3 and what changes between them (or if its too hard to write, then just a more simpler, but more ero focused)

there are also some already posed renders that needs texts to for an additional path during the first sex scene with the servant where the Sister plays a more active part and detailing the nature of her power (and the consequence of it) a little bit more

and also one (shorter) sex scene as the first sex scene that is accessed through the throne room

but chapter 3 and the sex scenes are for end of january

hahaha i really want to share the renders that are already done for all the above, but i'll wait until i'm more sure about it the angle and lighting

thanks again

 

[ModaGr33n]

i believe the way the character acts in non sex related scene would make the actual sex scene hotter because she won't be just "a body" and instead be "a character" 0_0

Super good point. The nonsex scenes are like the rising action/tension building/character building/or whatever that makes the "climax" of the sex scene pay off.

 

[garbage.kun]

Hi

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I've uploaded update 2 to the main page (its still just the mega link for now).

i'm kinda coming down with a cold, so i'll try to address the questions that new player tends to have beforehand. If i got the energy, i'll reply to them myself

• for returning players... to be honest, i only hope that you won't be too disappointed
• why is it that other than the prologue, the game is silent ? : at the time i made update 1, I'm still not familiar with ai generated music and ai generated sfx. currently, the chapter that are almost completely with sounds are only the prologue and the "Keeper of the Garden" chapter (from update 2). yes, i will try to add more sounds someday(tm) in the future
• there is no sex scene in update 2, only slightly erotic renders : yes, i decided not to include the sex scenes yet because they are not polished enough. i will add them in update 2.5 (end of january) which is a sex scenes oriented update
• Is the rape at update 1 avoidable : unfortunately no. that scene can't happen any other way without breaking their characters. the MC is an evil being, and the girl is not a slut
• does this contain NTR ? : no, but our minions will need to touch the girl in order to capture her. I don't consider it NTR but if you do, then i'm sorry, but i this might not be the game for you. on the bright side, i've seen lots of good games being updated 0_0b i'm sure some of them would be more to your taste
• will some content be avoidable ? : yes, if it makes sense. for example, (in the future)giving a certain girl to the goblin is avoidable, because it makes sense with the MC's character that he might want to keep her for himself 0_0
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  : yes, some antivirus will think that renpy is a virus. but considering its 1 out of 72, i believe it is a false alarm. unlike other renpy games though, Divinity does call some python function, mostly for random number generation and high resolution timers. i guess that makes divinity extra suspicious to antiviruses -_-a
• will we have sex with the "sister" + "What? no incest?" : it is implied in the prologue that she is not your sister

Thanks! i'll be continuing on update 2.5 right after my fever ends 0_0b

 

[Lerd0]

its still just the mega link for now

 

[garbage.kun]

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amazing 0_0b thank you very much. you uploaded the entire thing to several hosts with less time than what i needed to upload it to mega (i got crappy internet lol

thanks again for the good work uploaders!

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

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[garbage.kun]

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thanks as usual compressors you guys really works fast 0_0b

 

[soemantri9]

hi dev, i love the story. but i have suggestion. can you redesign the mask? so mc have acces with his mouth