Thank you for your very nice reply. I think that your spoiler made me even more excited for the future of this game.thank you very muchi am genuinely happy every time i found people who liked this
thank you very much
yes, i understand completely your thought about the sex scenes, because that's is exactly what i thought about this update
there is actually already some rough sketches and text drafts (which i can't remember if i removed them from this update or not) that gave you another option before the sex scene in the stone altar where (ok, i honestly dont know how the tags will fit into this) illa controls the servant as you ravish the girl.
but writing a sex scene is very time consuming in both animating the scenes and describing it, and I needed to get some plot points across first in order for this update to be releasable.
this is actually the reason for the library, because once its implemented, you could just replay them and try the alternative sex scene
I'm glad you felt that way about having some control over them. I also enjoyed it in other games where we are given similar choices
Thank you for your suggession about subscribestar. Gosh I hate doing the entire registration and review process again though hahaah
Ah, Rise of the Orcs. I still keep it in my harddrive
well, fellow goblin connoiseur, here's two rough sketches that relates to that (disclaimer, this is some old work and lacking any thorough quality improvement that goes into a final product:
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I don't particularly enjoy NTR so I will want to keep this wonderful waifu for MC, but then again Frogs got to eat too, I suggest you don't make the girl too fancy, think how Goblin Slayer essentially obscured the rape victims and spent milliseconds for them on screen so they don't become LIs, maybe you could serve it as a spoil of war or something similar, so the player does not feel cheated.
However, the scene you provided is already pretty hot, so regardless of my suggestions, I like your writing and I would love to see your story, with your fantasies in place. As for the sex scenes, considering that this is an erotic game, you could flesh it out, this is something that Rise also did inadequately, you have domination going on and it is done in 2 scenes - 4 screenshots and an animation. I believe it would benefit from multiple poses, or a goal, a mini plot of what happened during that session, maybe the girl got a Stockholm syndrome love going on, or they mentioned something that appealed to the human side of the MC, or something was to be gained. Then you can have "throwaway" content like sex service next to the throne, or while sitting with them, unassociated from the general plot. Other Gobo/Orc games do dungeons for that.
In any case, as the rest of the commenters have observed, your writing skills and story setup (along with the actual technical presentation) is far above the average and you should continue with your vision. I will support you on SubscribeStar, but not on Patreon, as I have closed my account after they killed all my favorite VNs.
One last thing, it struck me as odd. The remaining villagers, while rounded up in the hut, where the blonde girl was, where supposed to be terrified of the presence of the Lady in black, the terrifying monster that MC is, and a host of Goblins ready to actually eat them. It is cognitively dissassociating and immersion breaking for them to be horny or pretty much anything else than deathly terrorized. Like someone just had his entirely family and house blown up, and immediately got a hard on by a girl getting probably killed. Kind of weird, or maybe just me.
P.S. It is up to you, but please, make harmful, bloody, vore or guro content avoidable or give a warning. I detest violence on my LIs, and I would like for the option to not harm them (more than the plot requires). Even if you give some to the goblins, please give us the option to keep them alive and (fairly) unharmed.
Sorry for the wall of text.
