VN Ren'Py Divinity [Update 2] [toasterkun]

[Deleted member 7705548]

chill guys... lets just enjoy the nice things in life, right ?

You got 6 reviews with 5 star, it's not unusual when haters start coming here.

Just wait, there will be ntr dreamers who will give you 1 star. so yeah ignore this type of post, it's f95.

 

[garbage.kun]

I need to get back to work on the next update, so I won't be monitoring this thread for a while.

So lets stop the negativity, right? I enjoy what I enjoy, and you do you. We are all perverse, but in a different way.

And text messages like these are prone to be misunderstood. Just take a deep breath, and... if its hard to say nice things about someone else, maybe just take a breather and do something else that makes you happier, and reply the message when you've all cooled down 0_0b

personally, it makes my life a whole lot more difficult if prospective player go into this thread and found people fighting instead of enjoying the game

 

[Readerf2b]

Does she look "goblinish"?

Yes. Almost same ugly as fuck model as in "Date my goblin daughter."

 

[Eonor]

Made a compressed Android port of Divinity Update 1.

Got some basic gestures loaded in: swipe up for save menu, swipe down to hide UI, swipe left to rollback and swipe right to skip. Save files are now stored in the Documents folder. This sometimes means that you may need to close and re-open the port after installing so the save folder is properly created.

Please let me know if you encounter any issues with the port and I'll see what I can do to get them sorted.

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[Deleted member 7705548]

Made a compressed Android port of Divinity Update 1.

Got some basic gestures loaded in: swipe up for save menu, swipe down to hide UI, swipe left to rollback and swipe right to skip. Save files are now stored in the Documents folder. This sometimes means that you may need to close and re-open the port after installing so the save folder is properly created.

Please let me know if you encounter any issues with the port and I'll see what I can do to get them sorted.

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Oh god thanks alot dude I'm literally dying to play this game, the history will never forget your courage and sacrifice!

 

[garbage.kun]

Oh god thanks alot dude I'm literally dying to play this game, the history will never forget your courage and sacrifice!
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I hope you won't be disappointed ... this VN is...not to everyone's taste

 

[Deleted member 7705548]

I hope you won't be disappointed ... this VN is...not to everyone's taste

Dw buddy, if MC is badass or at least decent, then now matter how dark your game is I will gonna like, I'm a sucker of badass MC games.

 

[garbage.kun]

Dw buddy, if MC is badass or at least decent, then now matter how dark your game is I will gonna like, I'm a sucker of badass MC games.

Actually...by chance I read your review on that new Isekai games and that's why I thought "I hope that guy won't be disappointed" for this VN, because i think this VN is the complete opposite of that game 0_0;;;

The MC is... I wouldn't describe him as badass 0_0a... he might come off as cruel in this update he's no pushover, but he is... conflicted i guess (the best way i could find to explain without spoiling)

he will have a fight scene in the next update...

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well, even if it turned out not to be your taste, I'm glad you give it a try

 

[Deleted member 7705548]

Actually...by chance I read your review on that new Isekai games and that's why I thought "I hope that guy won't be disappointed" for this VN, because i think this VN is the complete opposite of that game 0_0;;;

The MC is... I wouldn't describe him as badass 0_0a... he might come off as cruel in this update he's no pushover, but he is... conflicted i guess (the best way i could find to explain without spoiling)

he will have a fight scene in the next update...

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well, even if it turned out not to be your taste, I'm glad you give it a try

Well I will see tonight how's game.

Thanks for the explanation.

 

[millyvanilly84]

I'm sorry, I'm a bit unclear about your question, so I'll try to cover all the possible interpretation, and why neither of these are feasible. But, there will be other female character that our MC will interact with, and maybe some of them would be more to your taste, I hope

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I'm glad you enjoyed it, but I'm not at the condition (both financially and timewise) to really fulfil any requests other than things that I could do in a few hours (usually code related). My only hope is that you might find other female characters that might be more to your taste later in the story.

Here's some other character design's that I have made (old rough sketches, without optimized lighting) , although whether they would appear in the story or not really depends on my skill in writing them. But to be honest, I'm a bit skeptical that you would find them "nice", because I completely agree that Daz's model are much better looking

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Again, thank you very much, and I'm sorry for the disappointing answer.

Dragon mommyyyy hnnnnggghhhhhhh

 

[Deleted member 7705548]

Actually...by chance I read your review on that new Isekai games and that's why I thought "I hope that guy won't be disappointed" for this VN, because i think this VN is the complete opposite of that game 0_0;;;

The MC is... I wouldn't describe him as badass 0_0a... he might come off as cruel in this update he's no pushover, but he is... conflicted i guess (the best way i could find to explain without spoiling)

he will have a fight scene in the next update...

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well, even if it turned out not to be your taste, I'm glad you give it a try

Wow I'm just in chapter 1 but I'm starting to like this game already.
Can't say anything about MC for now, but one thing i like he's a bit cold blooded and I like it!

His sister look cute af, probably one of the best designing so far I saw in honey select games.

I have good eye sight and I can say there's no "goblinish" about MC's sister.

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You tell me man how tf she look goblinish?
For me she look so so so cute!!!

Oh and mr dev you said something about Isekai paradise?
Well I think I like your game as much as Isekai paradise.
Your game's truly a masterpiece indeed!
Believe me I don't like game any game just like that, there's only few games I like, yours is one of them!

Well I will write the honest review when I will finish your game.

 

[garbage.kun]

Wow I'm just in chapter 1 but I'm starting to like this game already.
Can't say anything about MC for now, but one thing like he's a bit cold blooded and I like it!

His sister look cute af, probably one of the best designing so far I saw in honey select games.

I have good eye sight and I can say there's no "goblinish" about MC's sister.
You tell me man how tf she look goblinish?
For me she look so so so cute!!!

Oh and mr dev you said something about Isekai paradise?
Well I think I like your game as much as Isekai paradise.
Your game's truly a masterpiece indeed!
Believe me I don't like game any game just like that, there's only few games I like yours is one of them!

Well I will write the honestly review when I will finish your game.

Nice! Glad I haven't disappointed you...yet

Well, he was referring to the blonde girl, and his example was one of the vid for the side pictures, which... let's just say that a picture from directly front rarely makes anyone looks pretty

But don't worry about it. Everybody will like what they like, and dislike what they don't. It's our own preferences.

As a player, please, just enjoy the game if you do As the dev, its my responsibility to respond to the comments (both positive and negative)

Thanks!

 

[degen987654321]

Very cool concept, hope the game manages to gain some traction. Bets of luck and looking forward to further updates!

 

[degen987654321]

I also love the slight teasing and intimacy with the Sister, but please let us fuck her at some point.

One the other hand, please no Goblin Sex. I mean, you can do that obviously, but I would love to have the option to avoid it, by any means necessary.

Agreed on the first part, but please consider implementing some (optional) goblin scenes for the greater degenerates among us.

 

[R1k0]

I also love the slight teasing and intimacy with the Sister, but please let us fuck her at some point.

One the other hand, please no Goblin Sex. I mean, you can do that obviously, but I would love to have the option to avoid it, by any means necessary.

With this level of support (10$) per month there may not only be no sex with goblins but no sex and game at all.

 

[millyvanilly84]

Agreed on the first part, but please consider implementing some (optional) goblin scenes for the greater degenerates among us.

I agree , having the option is best, I don't want to share my waifus but in the same time I have played and enjoyed brilliant goblin games, but I can't stand guro or snuff content , I want healthy and happy waifus, unfortunately I couldn't watch Goblin no suana because of the snuff. Please garbage.kun-dono no killing the girls .

 

[garbage.kun]

The current content is awesome. I love the disparity between the Sisters parasitic/malicious character and her sweet/caring demeanor. The whole premise with the mother and her daughters, who appear to be beings from another dimension, slowly corrupting the mc to be less human as the story goes on and suppressing his memories and emotions is really well executed.

One main gripe I have is that after the Chapters with the Human Girl, I tried to proceed with the Sister Chapters but misclicked on the first chapter (the Intro). Afterwards I pressed "quit Replay" but was redirected to the main menu instead of the Throne Room and, because I did not save, will have to play the story again from the beginning. I trust that things like autosaves and a proper menu with functions like skip etc will be implemented later?

Anyways, this is a terrific and interesting start and I would love to see more. By far the most engaging visual novel I have read on this site in a long time. The writing style is also very good with some small mistakes and the text appears much slower than the average reading speed, an option for that would be great.

I also love the slight teasing and intimacy with the Sister, but please let us fuck her at some point.

One the other hand, please no Goblin Sex. I mean, you can do that obviously, but I would love to have the option to avoid it, by any means necessary.

Hi, first of all, thanks for enjoying the game I'm glad you find it interesting.

The "End replay" should have returned you to the chapter select screen, so thanks for reporting the bug I'll check it right now (I got a hunch where the bug is)

Skip menu, and text speed is already implemented for the next update and looks to be good to go :

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As for autosaves, I'll have to double check how to implement them, but doubt it should be difficult (I hope), and it should also be in the next update

I'm glad you enjoyed the writing...which is to be honest the part I struggled most hahaha

As for the Sister, she is one of the main love interest, and she will have some sex scene with the MC. But, plot wise, it really doesn't make any sense for her to have sex at this point, or in the very near future.

at least, if I could put these plot points into writing

Agreed on the first part, but please consider implementing some (optional) goblin scenes for the greater degenerates among us.

I agree , having the option is best, I don't want to share my waifus but in the same time I have played and enjoyed brilliant goblin games, but I can't stand guro or snuff content , I want healthy and happy waifus, unfortunately I couldn't watch Goblin no suana because of the snuff. Please garbage.kun-dono no killing the girls .

As for the Goblins stuff, here's how it is in my plan:

• If/when it's implemented, it would be the player's choice whether the MC wants to keep the girl or if he is willing to trade her for some favor. This means that it would be possible (if/when the story reaches that point) to trade a certain girl to another party (not necessarily just goblins) for resource/influence.
• I am not a person who finds guro to be...enticing. There will be no guro/death content, even implicitly. But, on the other hand, I also find the trope of "the heroine becomes a nympho for the goblins" to be implausible (at least without mind control hehehe). So it would probably be somewhere between those two extremes.
  
  please note that this doesn't mean that absolutely no heroines will die in this story, but if it did got to that point, it would be avoidable, and only occur in certain branch. What I meant is that there would be no gratuitous death scene where the objective of the scene is to ...bask in the grotesque.
  
  on the other hand, some unpleasant things might happen to the heroine (example : the stabbing in the prologue) to establish character or the danger of the situation. Most of the time, because its hard to to in HS2, most of the time it would be "obscured", just like in the prologue. But...it should be clear what is going on, so ...yeah...I hope those that really avoid any kind of violence would be patient enough to skip those obscured violence...0_0;;;
• Unfortunately :
  • I'm a solo dev
  • My body... is not at the best conditions for most of the time
  • The path between taking a girl for ourself and trading her would be mutually exclusive
    
    means that when that plot point is reached, I would need to focus on a single path to ensure enough content for the reader.
• Because either way, there will be some reader who would be unhappy with the path I chose develop further first, the choice would be mine to choose I could only hope that those that are unhappy would be patient enough to wait for their fetishes to be included 0_0;;;

But really, thank you very very much to you all for enjoying this VN. It means a lot to me

 

[garbage.kun]

Very cool concept, hope the game manages to gain some traction. Bets of luck and looking forward to further updates!

I almost missed your comment hahahah

Thanks!! I'm glad you still liked it despite some of its shortcomings

As for traction...well...hahahah. It is what it is. The story is niche, so... what will be, will be hahaha

Thanks again!

 

[garbage.kun]

One thing I am curious about is the second folder in %appdata%/Renpy. What is the signing key used for?
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Hi ProtonMH,

Here's what i found so far (still a bit sleepy, so I could be wrong):

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  "A list of keys that the game will trust when loading a save file. This can be used to allow the game's creator to distribute save files that will be loaded without displaying a warning."
• My best guess is that renpy's save files are signed with the signing key (which renpy "tries" to make a unique one for each computer (this is just a theory of mine)), and the only save file that you can (or should) open are the ones that you created yourself, or from the dev of that specific game (since theoretically I, as the dev, can put the verifying key (taken from my development computer) in the config file of my game)
• I think the tokens folder is shared by all renpy based games
• I've checked the options.rpy of both my dev copy and distributed folders, and I didn't found that config set in there. (I checked both of them because renpy has a habit of adding some codes during the build process).
• I did find in reddit some people that had deleted that tokens folder in order to use an edited save, but personally, I have never tried it.

That's what I had found about that token folder. Take it with a grain of salt though, I'm not an IT sec guy and I only know the bare minimum about this topic

thanks!

 

[garbage.kun]

Current progress update :

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*cough* shamelessly trying to bring traffic *cough*

TLDR : 41 renders, about 1K words, both are on their 2nd iteration.