VN Ren'Py Divinity [Update 2] [toasterkun]

[garbage.kun]

Thank you very much ProtonMH for the very kind review

To be honest, I was smiling like crazy when I read your review (not in a mocking way, I assure you). It was because i was struck by the thought "oh, that's right...it can be interpreted that way". Nice interpretation!

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Whenever I read a review, I always gets excited to write things that are actually spoilers ("But, did you notice that...") hahaha, so I have to stop myself before I ruin this story

Thank you very very much for the kind review

 

[garbage.kun]

Thank you DerAnyme for the review

To be honest, I forgot to reply to your review because I ran out of ways to express my gratitude without sounding like I'm copypasting 0_0;;;

I'm glad you liked the dialogues. I agree with you that sometime when I read a book/novel, I also got the impression of "why do I need to know this? I know people normally begin with greetings and all, but...its a bit undramatic" 0_0a;

I can assure you, my earlier drafts contains more unimportant narration and dialogues hahaha But, in a way, Divinity's dialogues gives me an easy way out to write shorter, more to the point dialogues because the characters (for now) are either "two very close ...beings" that can meld their thought (yay for narration shortcut hahaha), or people scared out of their minds

speaking of short, concise dialogue, here's a very funny thing (for me) i found out 2 days ago:

Spoiler: Related to Divinity, but IRL

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Again, thank you very very much for you review

 

[RandyPhoenix]

Are goblin scenes mandatory or avoidable?

 

[garbage.kun]

Are goblin scenes mandatory or avoidable?

Hi Randy,

The TLDR version is : sex scene between a character and the goblins (when they are finally implemented in the game) are avoidable, but the goblins do appear in some more plot related scenes.

I've written the full explanation here :

https://f95zone.to/threads/divinity-update-1-toasterkun.219307/post-14584961

Thanks!

 

[RandyPhoenix]

Hi Randy,

The TLDR version is : sex scene between a character and the goblins (when they are finally implemented in the game) are avoidable, but the goblins do appear in some more plot related scenes.

I've written the full explanation here :

https://f95zone.to/threads/divinity-update-1-toasterkun.219307/post-14584961

Thanks!

I already read that before asking, but maybe that's only me, but that wasn't clear answer, it was mostly about future plans you have. Thanks for sharing your plans, but my question is more simple and practical, what I'm asking is current scenes with goblins the game has, like the ones shown in game threat are avoidable or not? Right now, not in future, like if I install the game and play can I skip/avoid these or not, that's what I'm asking here.

 

[Rodrigoofb]

I already read that before asking, but maybe that's only me, but that wasn't clear answer, it was mostly about future plans you have. Thanks for sharing your plans, but my question is more simple and practical, what I'm asking is current scenes with goblins the game has, like the ones shown in game threat are avoidable or not? Right now, not in future, like if I install the game and play can I skip/avoid these or not, that's what I'm asking here.

No you cannot. They are part of the game, the MC uses them as his minions, and while you can prevent them from doing too much, they're still goblins so they see some pussy and may go berserk(the MC even kills one for touching the boobs of his servant if i'm not mistaken, and it's unavoidable). Not really a fan of that but i can tolerate because the game is that good and the dev made it clear that there will be no ntr, so i imagine any scenes where the goblins get action will probably be with random girls, and even then they'll be avoidable.

 

[garbage.kun]

I already read that before asking, but maybe that's only me, but that wasn't clear answer, it was mostly about future plans you have. Thanks for sharing your plans, but my question is more simple and practical, what I'm asking is current scenes with goblins the game has, like the ones shown in game threat are avoidable or not? Right now, not in future, like if I install the game and play can I skip/avoid these or not, that's what I'm asking here.

Ah, I understand now. I'm sorry, I misunderstood by what you meant with "scenes". I thought you meant "sex scenes", and that is why I referred you to that post.

For the scenes that are shown (I guess those would be scenes with nudity that involves goblins, but are not sex scenes)in the preview, no, those scenes are not avoidable due to plot reasons

Based on your question, I'm afraid this game might be not to your taste.

But thanks anyway for asking!

 

[RandyPhoenix]

Ah, I understand now. I'm sorry, I misunderstood by what you meant with "scenes". I thought you meant "sex scenes", and that is why I referred you to that post.

For the scenes that are shown (I guess those would be scenes with nudity that involves goblins, but are not sex scenes)in the preview, no, those scenes are not avoidable due to plot reasons

Based on your question, I'm afraid this game might be not to your taste.

But thanks anyway for asking!

Thanks for answering, shame they are not avoidable, even for plot reasons your LI getting touched and done stuff by goblins is ''no'' for me personally, just to clear things, you have any plan to make these scenes and these type of scenes avoidable in next update/updates? Or they will stay?

 

[garbage.kun]

No you cannot. They are part of the game, the MC uses them as his minions, and while you can prevent them from doing too much, they're still goblins so they see some pussy and may go berserk(the MC even kills one for touching the boobs of his servant if i'm not mistaken, and it's unavoidable). Not really a fan of that but i can tolerate because the game is that good and the dev made it clear that there will be no ntr, so i imagine any scenes where the goblins get action will probably be with random girls, and even then they'll be avoidable.

Wow, thanks Rodrigoofb!

I'm glad you still liked it despite those scenes are not to your taste

Yeah... the truth is, although some might not agree, those scenes with the goblins are needed to establish some points about the character :

• the MC's first encounter with another aspect of his corruption (not only lust for violence, but carnal lust)
• the MC's unwillingness to allow something that he perceives as dirty (the goblins) to touch something that he wants
• Illa's dislike for the goblins, where she even refuses to use their language, and instead uses sign language
• etc

Thanks again Rodrigoofb!

 

[garbage.kun]

Thanks for answering, shame they are not avoidable, even for plot reasons your LI getting touched and done stuff by goblins is ''no'' for me personally, just to clear things, you have any plan to make these scenes and these type of scenes avoidable in next update/updates? Or they will stay?

Oops, I was typing my answer to rodrigoofb when you replied, and the answer is partially in my response to his.

Yeah, I'm sorry, but that scene is needed to show those things I pointed out, and to be honest, I don't have any idea to "show" those points without the MC taking action when it actually happens without resorting to a ...long exposition which i hope to avoid.

Therefore, due to my lack of writing skill, I have no plan of making those scenes avoidable, because i don't know how to keep the consistency of the rest of the story if those parts are avoided and replaced by an exposition.

Again, I'm afraid this game might not be for you. But, again, thanks anyway!

 

[RandyPhoenix]

Oops, I was typing my answer to rodrigoofb when you replied, and the answer is partially in my response to his.

Yeah, I'm sorry, but that scene is needed to show those things I pointed out.

Again, I'm afraid this game might not be for you. But, again, thanks anyway!

Alright got it, thank for answering fast, and honestly I don't really mind goblin scenes or anything that much, but MC's love interests or women who belong MC, etc, having scenes like, like other males gropping them, doing stuff, etc, are quite pointless, and makes no sense at all, by logic it
contradicts with the meaning of love interests or women who belong to MC, other women do nothing with MC (not love interests, etc) having is no problem obviously, anyways I guess I will skip the game, good luck with it

 

[garbage.kun]

Alright got it, thank for answering fast, and honestly I don't really mind goblin scenes or anything that much, but MC's love interests or women who belong MC, etc, having scenes like, like other males gropping them, doing stuff, etc, are quite pointless, and makes no sense at all, other women do nothing with MC having is no problem I think, anyways I guess I will skip the game, good luck with it

No prob!

Have fun enjoying the rest of your weekend

 

[garbage.kun]

Hey Dev, are there any Sneeks or a date for the next update?

Hi Proton

In short, 3-4 months from August 4th 2024. Here's the summary and I put all the details on the links below :

• The next plot relevant sex scene is 3 chapters away. Since this is F95 and divinity is a porn game, I doubt the reaction would be nice if an update is released without any new sex scene
• A non interlude chapter needs about 60-70 renders (which is all 3 of them)
• Currently I'm at 50-ish render and about 1K text for the first chapter, both of which are on my 2nd iteration, so I don't think that 50+ renders will go through any more major changes, so I'm looking at needing 2.5 more weeks (I hope..) for this chapter
• Right now (as in...in this very moment), I'm working out the kinks in the text for the 50ish renders as I integrate them into renpy and reading them again...and again...and again...
• Once a chapter's done, I usually askbeg my RL friends to read them so I can fix some minor things and possible inconsistencies. This usually takes a week, but can be done in parallel with working on the next chapter

Sneeks as in renders ? there's a few of them on my free patreon post (shameless plug...), but I'll put them here (minor spoilers of course)

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Here's the general breakdown for my plan for the next update : https://f95zone.to/threads/divinity-update-1-toasterkun.219307/post-14498072

And here are the weekly progress reports (if you could call them that...) for the last two weeks (all of them are public posts):

This week :

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Last week :

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Thanks!

 

[Deleted member 7705548]

Your game is really really unique!
And I like it alot somehow your game remind me of this game Dogma, it's tough to understand everything at first release but really love it!

There's something I wanna know.

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[garbage.kun]

Your game is really really unique!
And I like it alot somehow your game remind me of this game Dogma, it's tough to understand everything at first release but really love it!

There's something I wanna know.

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Hi Kinky Boi

I'm glad you still liked it it is...different hahahah

I'll try to explain what that language is and its relevance in the story. Because this touches on the backstory of the worldbuilding, I will put them in multiple level of spoilers tag.

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I have also read your review, and wow, you're a tough customer, but I kinda expected your reaction about the MC hahaha. He is ... not your usual MC, to put it mildly

As for the UI, just in case you missed them :

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which should solve the "please allow me to make the text go faster" and the quick nav button at the bottom.

For the Throne room and chapter select, yeah, I was hoping to add some sex scenes for the servant that can be accessed from the throne room (a sort of "daily life sex" as opposed to "plot related sex" that is in the books) to show the reader why I made them that way, but I'm not sure I have enough time to put it on the next update

Thank you very much for still giving it a 5 star, despite the parts that doesn't really fit your taste

 

[Deleted member 7705548]

Hi Kinky Boi

I'm glad you liked it it is...different hahahah

I'll try to explain what that language is and its relevance in the story. Because this touches on the backstory of the worldbuilding, I will put them in multiple level of spoilers tag.

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I have also read your review, and wow, you're a tough customer, but I kinda expected your reaction about the MC hahaha. He is ... not your usual MC, to put it mildly

As for the UI, just in case you missed them :

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which should solve the "please allow me to make the text go faster" and the quick nav button at the bottom.

For the Throne room and chapter select, yeah, I was hoping to add some sex scenes for the servant that can be accessed from the throne room (a sort of "daily life sex" as opposed to "plot related sex" that is in the books) to show the reader why I made them that way, but I'm not sure I have enough time to put it on the next update

Thank you very much for still giving it a 5 star, despite the parts that doesn't really fit your taste

Goddamn! You are really something else, you write all these just to answer my question?
Damn, you're really something else!
I will tell my friend to advertise your game, you can befriend with him on discord, and thanks alot for those answers.

but I kinda expected your reaction about the MC hahaha. He is ... not your usual MC, to put it mildly

I didn't said I dislike the MC, it's just I can't say anything about him, but he seems pretty decent to me.
Edit:- indeed he's not our usual wimp MC, he's at least not a pathetic wimp at all.
And this is good enough for me!
You surely created a unique shit, hope see your game in trending!

Good luck!❤

 

[garbage.kun]

First, a very big thank you to EstrangedTurtle for the very kind review that you gave this game

Speaking of "being a complete puppet"...hmm, well, I hope I can show you in future updates what "complete puppet" really means in this world hahahah

Again, thank you very very much! All the very very kind and generous comments and reviews always give me the energy to work on this when I read them



Next is the 4 week progress report and some sneak peeks 0_0. You can read them on my patreon of course and give me the traffic hahaah, but to save you the hassle, I'll put the TLDR version here

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The first chapter is at about 80% done, currently consisting of 53 renders and 2.5 K words. Lets see if I can finish it in the next 10 days

And here's the most spoiler free render I can give



And a splashscreen candidate to be used when the player had reached a certain point (not sure when I'm going to put this in the game though...)



There are two versions of this render, the first one is the "innocent illa version", and the second is...well...hahahah

Thanks again!

 

[Deleted member 7705548]

First, a very big thank you to EstrangedTurtle for the very kind review that you gave this game

Speaking of "being a complete puppet"...hmm, well, I hope I can show you in future updates what "complete puppet" really means in this world hahahah

Again, thank you very very much! All the very very kind and generous comments and reviews always give me the energy to work on this when I read them



Next is the 4 week progress report and some sneak peeks 0_0. You can read them on my patreon of course and give me the traffic hahaah, but to save you the hassle, I'll put the TLDR version here

You must be registered to see the links

The first chapter is at about 80% done, currently consisting of 53 renders and 2.5 K words. Lets see if I can finish it in the next 10 days

And here's the most spoiler free render I can give

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And a splashscreen candidate to be used when the player had reached a certain point (not sure when I'm going to put this in the game though...)

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There are two versions of this render, the first one is the "innocent illa version", and the second is...well...hahahah

Thanks again!

So far no haters have come I hope they won't.

 

[garbage.kun]

So far no haters have come I hope they won't.

I better keep collecting these very very kind reviews then, because the storm will inevitably come based on what I've seen on other threads

 

[millyvanilly84]

I better keep collecting these very very kind reviews then, because the storm will inevitably come based on what I've seen on other threads

At this point, the only thing that can ruin this game is the three letter acronym. Friendly advice, tread carefully with this kind of teasers.