The current content is awesome. I love the disparity between the Sisters parasitic/malicious character and her sweet/caring demeanor. The whole premise with the mother and her daughters, who appear to be beings from another dimension, slowly corrupting the mc to be less human as the story goes on and suppressing his memories and emotions is really well executed.
One main gripe I have is that after the Chapters with the Human Girl, I tried to proceed with the Sister Chapters but misclicked on the first chapter (the Intro). Afterwards I pressed "quit Replay" but was redirected to the main menu instead of the Throne Room and, because I did not save, will have to play the story again from the beginning. I trust that things like autosaves and a proper menu with functions like skip etc will be implemented later?
Anyways, this is a terrific and interesting start and I would love to see more. By far the most engaging visual novel I have read on this site in a long time. The writing style is also very good with some small mistakes and the text appears much slower than the average reading speed, an option for that would be great.
I also love the slight teasing and intimacy with the Sister, but please let us fuck her at some point.
One the other hand, please no Goblin Sex. I mean, you can do that obviously, but I would love to have the option to avoid it, by any means necessary.
Hi, first of all, thanks for enjoying the game
I'm glad you find it interesting.
The "End replay" should have returned you to the chapter select screen, so thanks for reporting the bug
I'll check it right now (I got a hunch where the bug is)
Skip menu, and text speed is already implemented for the next update and looks to be good to go :
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As for autosaves, I'll have to double check how to implement them, but doubt it should be difficult (I hope), and it should also be in the next update
I'm glad you enjoyed the writing...which is to be honest the part I struggled most hahaha
As for the Sister, she is one of the main love interest, and she will have some sex scene with the MC. But, plot wise, it really doesn't make any sense for her to have sex at this point, or in the very near future.
at least, if I could put these plot points into writing
Agreed on the first part, but please consider implementing some (optional) goblin scenes for the greater degenerates among us.
I agree , having the option is best, I don't want to share my waifus but in the same time I have played and enjoyed brilliant goblin games, but I can't stand guro or snuff content , I want healthy and happy waifus, unfortunately I couldn't watch Goblin no suana because of the snuff. Please garbage.kun-dono no killing the girls .
As for the Goblins stuff, here's how it is in my plan:
- If/when it's implemented, it would be the player's choice whether the MC wants to keep the girl or if he is willing to trade her for some favor. This means that it would be possible (if/when the story reaches that point) to trade a certain girl to another party (not necessarily just goblins) for resource/influence.
- I am not a person who finds guro to be...enticing. There will be no guro/death content, even implicitly. But, on the other hand, I also find the trope of "the heroine becomes a nympho for the goblins" to be implausible (at least without mind control hehehe). So it would probably be somewhere between those two extremes.
please note that this doesn't mean that absolutely no heroines will die in this story, but if it did got to that point, it would be avoidable, and only occur in certain branch. What I meant is that there would be no gratuitous death scene where the objective of the scene is to ...bask in the grotesque.
on the other hand, some unpleasant things might happen to the heroine (example : the stabbing in the prologue) to establish character or the danger of the situation. Most of the time, because its hard to to in HS2, most of the time it would be "obscured", just like in the prologue. But...it should be clear what is going on, so ...yeah...I hope those that really avoid any kind of violence would be patient enough to skip those obscured violence...0_0;;;
- Unfortunately :
- I'm a solo dev
- My body... is not at the best conditions for most of the time
- The path between taking a girl for ourself and trading her would be mutually exclusive
means that when that plot point is reached, I would need to focus on a single path to ensure enough content for the reader.
- Because either way, there will be some reader who would be unhappy with the path I chose develop further first, the choice would be mine to choose I could only hope that those that are unhappy would be patient enough to wait for their fetishes to be included 0_0;;;
But really, thank you very very much to you all for enjoying this VN. It means a lot to me