VN Ren'Py Divinity [Update 2] [toasterkun]

[Deleted member 7705548]

Friendly advice, tread carefully with this kind of teasers.

Good advice dev's really humble and everytime he reply he post a teaser.

 

[garbage.kun]

At this point, the only thing that can ruin this game is the three letter acronym. Friendly advice, tread carefully with this kind of teasers.

Hahaha, yeah...I can get a bit too excited to talk about the plot, even the part that haven't been released hahaha

But usually I keep it "safe", as in the actual interesting point is not shown in those teasers

But I agree, I can be a bit over generous with the possible spoilers hahahaha

Oh btw millyvanilly84, just in case you missed one of my post, my SS account was rejected. I'll DM you if it ever gets approved (somehow)

 

[andrea sasu]

the game is stuck when it says come sit with me my brother

 

[Deleted member 7705548]

the game is stuck when it says come sit with me my brother

Can you post the screenshot so ppl can help you here.

 

[andrea sasu]

Can you post the screenshot so ppl can help you here.

 

[garbage.kun]

Hi andrea sasu.

Have you tried clicking on the symbol on the throne? the one with the slightly swirling background.


It should become slightly brighter when you mouse over it.

Thanks!

 

[andrea sasu]

Hi andrea sasu.

Have you tried clicking on the symbol on the throne? the one with the slightly swirling background.

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It should become slightly brighter when you mouse over it.

Thanks!

Thanks

 

[garbage.kun]

Thanks

No prob 0_0b

One of my tester also had the same problem because his screen brightness was set to really low Still haven't found a way to make them really pop out without :

• addressing you as "a player of the game", instead of "the MC", or
• making it stand out too much when it appears on the left and right side of the screen and making the screen a bit too cluttered.

thanks for trying the game

 

[. ° ☾ ❍]

It's for titles like this one that I keep coming back here, it's a good reminder that there are people out there making genuinely good VN's. When you can feel the passion seeping through the end result, you know you'll be rewarded for your commitment, I appreciate the mutual respect of everyone's time.

The writing, the attention to details, the depictions, the story & plot, all great I give them my utmost appraisal.

I like your approach on the structural level too, it's refreshing and doesn't feel out of place.

On a side note I kind of regret the absence of a background track after the prologue, even something simple I feel like would be a nice complement to the overall atmosphere, idk, ethereal silent hill inspired ambient music or smt That's just me tho, and it's a minor detail if I had to find something to be picky about.

So thank you for your time and effort, I hope this brings you as much enjoyment as it does to the people enjoying your work, and I sincerely wish for a prosperous future upon this Divinity

 

[garbage.kun]

It's for titles like this one that I keep coming back here, it's a good reminder that there are people out there making genuinely good VN's. When you can feel the passion seeping through the end result, you know you'll be rewarded for your commitment, I appreciate the mutual respect of everyone's time.

The writing, the attention to details, the depictions, the story & plot, all great I give them my utmost appraisal.

Hi... ° ☾ ❍

Thank you very much for your kind comments. I'm very happy that you liked the game.
As always, I'm extremely happy to find more people who enjoyed my writing (the part where i'm the weakest actually haha), and a bit anxious if I could achieve the same quality in a shorter time 0_0

I like your approach on the structural level too, it's refreshing and doesn't feel out of place.

I'm glad you find the Hub and Books to be nice too. That part is actually the part where I enjoyed the most to see them all come together, due to the necessary coding to make those haha

On a side note I kind of regret the absence of a background track after the prologue, even something simple I feel like would be a nice complement to the overall atmosphere, idk, ethereal silent hill inspired ambient music or smt That's just me tho, and it's a minor detail if I had to find something to be picky about.

Your comment about the ambience actually pushed me to start looking a little bit more with new queries (ethereal silent hill->fallen lament) and I've found a couple of candidates that were not really what I was envisioning (i was looking for a solo female ambient music with minimal instruments, and of course, copyright free, to convey some of the themes) and instead i found some quiet piano ambient tracks, but they sounds pretty promising... at least to my 4 AM mind hahaha I'll have to listen to test them on the actual scene for a couple more hours to be sure though

The three things that I have to rely on copyright free materials are fonts, musics, and HS2 mods hahaha

So thank you for your time and effort, I hope this brings you as much enjoyment as it does to the people enjoying your work, and I sincerely wish for a prosperous future upon this Divinity

Actually, thank you,° ☾ ❍, because although I do enjoy making this game, it's knowing that there are other people who enjoyed it enough to write detailed comments about the game that really helps with the anxiety that comes with creating something

So, thank you very very much

 

[Deleted member 7705548]

Hi... ° ☾ ❍

Thank you very much for your kind comments. I'm very happy that you liked the game.
As always, I'm extremely happy to find more people who enjoyed my writing (the part where i'm the weakest actually haha), and a bit anxious if I could achieve the same quality in a shorter time 0_0



I'm glad you find the Hub and Books to be nice too. That part is actually the part where I enjoyed the most to see them all come together, due to the necessary coding to make those haha



Your comment about the ambience actually pushed me to start looking a little bit more with new queries (ethereal silent hill->fallen lament) and I've found a couple of candidates that were not really what I was envisioning (i was looking for a solo female ambient music with minimal instruments, and of course, copyright free, to convey some of the themes) and instead i found some quiet piano ambient tracks, but they sounds pretty promising... at least to my 4 AM mind hahaha I'll have to listen to test them on the actual scene for a couple more hours to be sure though

The three things that I have to rely on copyright free materials are fonts, musics, and HS2 mods hahaha



Actually, thank you,° ☾ ❍, because although I do enjoy making this game, it's knowing that there are other people who enjoyed it enough to write detailed comments about the game that really helps with the anxiety that comes with creating something

So, thank you very very much

Man some time you talk like a robot, dunno why.

Not in a bad way!

 

[garbage.kun]

Man some time you talk like a robot, dunno why.

Not in a bad way!

Probably because :

• I have a background in corporate jobs hahahah
• I ran out of ways to convey my gratitude 0__0;;;

hahaha

 

[Deleted member 7705548]

Probably because :

• I have a background in corporate jobs hahahah
• I ran out of ways to convey my gratitude 0__0;;;

hahaha

Ahahhahahha ❌
Ahahhahahah ✔

 

[Deleted member 7705548]

Hey dev I'm curious how many people working with this project?
If it's not personal then please gimme an answer, and dw if you can't it's totally understandable.

Also my friendly advice those who gave you and will going to give you 5 start or 4 star rating then please like their reviews they will appreciate it!

Hahahaha--*ahem*

 

[garbage.kun]

Hey dev I'm curious how many people working with this project?
If it's not personal then please gimme an answer, and dw if you can't it's totally understandable.

Also my friendly advice those gave you and will going give you 5 start or 4 star rating then please like their reviews I'm their will appreciate it!

Hahahaha--*ahem*

Hey <- non standard emoticon ...



Sure I can. The only person who is working on this game is me

About the like for the reviews... i thought it would be unfair if I only like those that gave me good review hahahaha
But I'll think about it I need to first carefully think how I would respond to the trolling reviews that would inevitably come

Thanks <- non robotic laugh emoticon

 

[garbage.kun]

I've read peuir's review, and wow, thank you peuir for still liking it despite your confusion m(_ _)m

To be honest, I completely understand if the reader is confused at this point, especially the prologue. I, as the writer, usually can only answer with "ummm *damn it, how do i describe what the prologue is about 0_0;;;*" when my RL friends who haven't played it asked me "what is it about?"

The funny thing is, another reviewer actually managed to describe the general gist of the story better than i am the first reviewer (pemoj) gave a succinct, to the point, and correct summary of the overall plot up to the prologue

the other reviewers also gave a mostly correct (about 90%) summary of what is happening on the chapters afterward hahaha

and I'm really really grateful that you enjoyed my writing...the part that i'm most worried about...especially for the next update 0_0;;;

again, thank you very much for your very kind review and still enjoying it despite the confusing parts

 

[garbage.kun]

I've been trying to think how to properly reply to CraneZ's very thorough, very kind review for a day, and I'm still coming out blank hahahaha So this reply is more like a stream of thought, and not really a well thought out answers

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Again, thank you very very very much for the review 0__0 it was very thorough and hopefully would bring more people to try it

 

[garbage.kun]

Here's the weekly progress post from my patreon

You must be registered to see the links

TLDR :

• unfortunately, not much done on the writing part (only +316 word for yesterday). I don't really want to be thought as sympathy farming or anything, so I'll leave out the reason in patreon , and beside, its not that interesting anyway
• The renders that are acceptable and doesn't need more adjustments are still at 63 (minus 1), + several rough poses and camera angles (i think there's about 7 main poses done that i still need to adjust the background and lighting. these usually grow by a factor of about 1.5 because these main poses usually gets expanded with minor pose change to punctuate the dialogue)

The post is public, but i'll put the included sketches here anyway



Thanks!

 

[Deleted member 7946941]

Here's the weekly progress post from my patreon

You must be registered to see the links

TLDR :

• unfortunately, not much done on the writing part (only +316 word for yesterday). I don't really want to be thought as sympathy farming or anything, so I'll leave out the reason in patreon , and beside, its not that interesting anyway
• The renders that are acceptable and doesn't need more adjustments are still at 63 (minus 1), + several rough poses and camera angles (i think there's about 7 main poses done that i still need to adjust the background and lighting. these usually grow by a factor of about 1.5 because these main poses usually gets expanded with minor pose change to punctuate the dialogue)

The post is public, but i'll put the included sketches here anyway
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Thanks!

Dude you literally use this emoji too much.....

 

[garbage.kun]

Dude you literally use this emoji too much.....

....

ahhahaahah its because its very short to type and my hand doesn't need to reach for my mouse

but as a special service, i'll use another one