VN Ren'Py Divinity [Update 2] [toasterkun]

[Deleted member 7946941]

Hahaha yep, can't make a one size fits all game

Thanks btw, I hope i won't disappoint you on the next update

I'm sure you won't, as long as you will use emoji here.
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[akira123]

sorry but this game is very good, more than that the graphics and plot are quite new for VN porn games today. Can someone give me some more games like this. Another thing is that the sound seems to be not very complete.

 

[Deleted member 7946941]

sorry but this game is very good, more than that the graphics and plot are quite new for VN porn games today. Can someone give me some more games like this. Another thing is that the sound seems to be not very complete.

I think Dogma is similar to this one, not sure.

 

[garbage.kun]

sorry but this game is very good, more than that the graphics and plot are quite new for VN porn games today. Can someone give me some more games like this. Another thing is that the sound seems to be not very complete.

Hi akira123,

Personally, i think plot wise (although i think its less darker) , the closest one is Crown of Desire The UI is polished too 0_0b. That game actually pushes me to release my game a little earlier because I if waited too long, people might think my plot is inspired by that game hahaha

As for the art style (HS2 renders with extra attention to lighting and shadows), I haven't played it (don't have the time yet -_-), but based on the screenshots, Mayfly looks good 0_0b.

Thank you very very much for your praise m(_ _)m. Yes, the problem with the sound is that I haven't found enough free music that fits my vision for the ambiance (solo female with minimal instruments) that sounds consistent between music as for the sound...hahaha yeah, I have to admit, i'm very lazy at editing the available free sound effect to make it fit the scenes, but...i hope (wish me luck..) i can add one music for the throne room, and give at least the crows their sound hahahah

Thanks!

 

[Deleted member 7946941]

Hi akira123,



As for the art style (HS2 renders with extra attention to lighting and shadows), I haven't played it (don't have the time yet -_-), but based on the screenshots, Mayfly looks good 0_0b.

Meh, this game MC sucks, he's cocky as hell personality wise he's a wimp.

And it's doesn't even have horror like yours, Dogma or Astral lust is best option.

 

[garbage.kun]

Meh, this game MC sucks, he's cocky as hell personality wise he's a wimp.

And it's doesn't even have horror like yours, Dogma or Astral lust is best option.

Hmm... I'm gonna need to try those games then

 

[Deleted member 7946941]

Hmm... I'm gonna need to try those games then

Then try dogma, astral lust MC is no good than mayfly he's a wimp, only Sandbox is interesting.

 

[garbage.kun]

To add to that, I think adding more and fitting sounds and balancing them properly (the crows gawking when Sister arrives nearly gave me a heart attack) would help the atmosphere tremendously. I did not think that the game lacks music, but going some minutes without hearing anything makes it feel like something is missing. Being too lazy for that is a good argument, though, and I can relate to that ^^

EDIT: For some reason I wrote gawking, but it is kinda funny so I will let it stay

LOL gawking hahahahha

"Out of the corner of my eyes, I saw the crow gawked at the female, as if mesmerized by her curves just like I am. Am I going to be NTRed by this damn crow?"

Yeah...after my purposeful misinterpretation of "MC is going to be corrupted into a slut" and "divinity is a human milking simulator", i think funny misinterpretation is becoming your trademark

(the crows gawking when Sister arrives nearly gave me a heart attack)

Sound design is...well, one of my main alibi for my laziness is that "sound design skill" ranks below even "writing" for me hahhaha. i'm lousy at it and have to rely on minor edits to existing free resources instead of things that I can make from scratch and matches my real vision of how they should be

Being lousy at it means that its hard to identify mistakes/improvements

If i'm being serious, I think what you meant is that ideally there shouldn't be a long gap of silence between sounds, as in the crows "gawking" that was the only sound for that whole chapter? I wholly agree with that

Thanks btw! Just like another post of rather similar nature, this kinda pushes me to "cmon toaster, go to pixabay again, maybe you'll find it this time", which had resulted in a kinda cool ambiance music candidate for the throne room a couple of weeks ago that might get implemented in the next update if the testing goes well

 

[akira123]

Hi akira123,

Personally, i think plot wise (although i think its less darker) , the closest one is Crown of Desire The UI is polished too 0_0b. That game actually pushes me to release my game a little earlier because I if waited too long, people might think my plot is inspired by that game hahaha

As for the art style (HS2 renders with extra attention to lighting and shadows), I haven't played it (don't have the time yet -_-), but based on the screenshots, Mayfly looks good 0_0b.

Thank you very very much for your praise m(_ _)m. Yes, the problem with the sound is that I haven't found enough free music that fits my vision for the ambiance (solo female with minimal instruments) that sounds consistent between music as for the sound...hahaha yeah, I have to admit, i'm very lazy at editing the available free sound effect to make it fit the scenes, but...i hope (wish me luck..) i can add one music for the throne room, and give at least the crows their sound hahahah

Thanks!

ignore the relevant factors. I think I like your game.

 

[garbage.kun]

Yay its been 2 months since the first update was released

here's the full post in my patreon (it's a public post) :

You must be registered to see the links

and here are the included sketches


The first one is a polished version of an unused render, while the second one is an unused 1st iteration render that got scrapped from this update

in summary :

• 97+ renders in (2 months minus about 1.5 weeks) is as fast as I expected it
• 3K words is...too slow
• I am still aiming for another update in 2 months, but it will most likely have less plot progression, and i hoped that I can cover it by adding some ero scenes.
• This is not a hard schedule though...in the end, i have to be honest and admit that i'm doing this out of enjoyment, and not really as a "job"

Thanks!

 

[toffus]

this game is so good. when will the next update release?

 

[garbage.kun]

this game is so good. when will the next update release?

Hi minhmama1122

I hope I can release something in about 2 months, but this is not a hard schedule set in stone. You can read about the current progress in the post just right above you, or for a more complete version and some samples of the completed renders in my patreon as a free member (the link is also in that post)

Thank you very much for liking my game

 

[toffus]

Hi minhmama1122

I hope I can release something in about 2 months, but this is not a hard schedule set in stone. You can read about the current progress in the post just right above you, or for a more complete version and some samples of the completed renders in my patreon as a free member (the link is also in that post)

Thank you very much for liking my game

Take your time friend. Quality on top.

 

[BOBtheboober1995]

love the art! 10/10 game design!

 

[garbage.kun]

love the art! 10/10 game design!

Thank you very much BOBtheboober1995

I'm glad you liked the art 0_0 I wasn't very confident with it at the beginning, but i'm glad that it turns out that they fit some people's tastes

Anyway, for the (almost weekly) update :

You must be registered to see the links

summary :

• 101 renders, which is all of the first chapter's renders + a couple from the smaller, more ero oriented chapters
• a discord server (i've put the link in that post, if you're interested. Its a public post 0_0b)
• some explanation why i finally relented and made a discord server hahaha, and some explanation on what you could expect from the discord : i'm an introvert, so chatroom kinda exhausts me, but i do enjoy 1 on 1, deep discussion, so feel free to DM me 0_0b
• i'll be using the discord mainly to show more scrapped/test sketches that doesn't really pass the test for my patreon page (got to keep only the better ones on display hahaha)

To save you some time from going to patreon if you just want the renders, here they are




thank you very much for your patience m(_ _)m

 

[w123t4]

Finally have time to try this game.
Well it is kind of not my cup of tea, since the word of description is... How do I say the exact word? A feeling of Chunibyo? I had already long passed the teens-novel age long time ago.
Btw, why am I have the dejavu that I am not the first time to try this game like I had played it once before?

 

[garbage.kun]

Finally have time to try this game.
Well it is kind of not my cup of tea, since the word of description is... How do I say the exact word? A feeling of Chunibyo? I had already long passed the teens-novel age long time ago.
Btw, why am I have the dejavu that I am not the first time to try this game like I had played it once before?

Well, I'm sorry it wasn't to your taste. But thank you for giving it a try anyway

I believe the closest one in theme and plot would be Crown of Desire.

Thanks!

 

[w123t4]

Well, I'm sorry it wasn't to your taste. But thank you for giving it a try anyway

I believe the closest one in theme and plot would be Crown of Desire.

Thanks!

Maybe? It is sure that your game have a similar style to his game that may make the dejavu feeling happened, but it is how the "sister" appearance look familiar to me which make me wonder I had tried your game before.
I also remember seeing a developer which I forgot his name talking about how you helped his game in their thread, maybe it is where I have an image to your game scene even I had never played it before?
Anyway, I also talked to some of my friends which is interested in the game "superhuman" to try your game too, hope you will get more players.

 

[garbage.kun]

Maybe? It is sure that your game have a similar style to his game that may make the dejavu feeling happened, but it is how the "sister" appearance look familiar to me which make me wonder I had tried your game before.
I also remember seeing a developer which I forgot his name talking about how you helped his game in their thread, maybe it is where I have an image to your game scene even I had never played it before?
Anyway, I also talked to some of my friends which is interested in the game "superhuman" to try your game too, hope you will get more players.

I...think you might be mistaken on this part hahaha Because I don't remember having helped any other devs with their game hahaha.

thanks!

 

[Kai Zhu]

Introverts really out here making a Game of the Year contender lol. Just gotta lock them in a room with a computer and boom, magic happens. This game might not be my vibe right now, but I’ll stick around through all the future updates just to watch it glow up.

Good luck with the game, Game Dev! ˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶