VN Ren'Py Don't Leave My Side [v0.1.2a] [Emotional Tokyo]

[duckydoodoo]

didnt care for the previous version, seemed like it could be entertaining but missed the mark. spose i can try out the rework, seems like most comments agree its better now.

 

[EZ8lt]

Ugh, this isn't good. Graphics are okay, and the main music theme is great (I'd like to know the title), but the rest? Oliver is a dick, Ronnie is a simp cuck, Saide is batshit crazy, and Amanda is a fucking slut. The story basically pans out the same way no matter what you do, NTR is only avoidable, still happens in the background and the future story seems to be setting up for more with Oliver. It's a waste, especially so much content with Amanda if she is gonna fuck off for good with this.

 

[ChrisHaze]

No Mega or GoFile? Sketchy.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

I'll be honest, again without reading comments or doing anything more than reading the description I immediately turned down Sadie because she comes off as crazy ex gf and I didnt want any part of that messing with getting Amanda back. Turned down Sadie at every opportunity.

Again, because it feels like its the correct thing to do if the goal is to get Amanda to change her mind.

I have avoided Amanda as much as I could. For me the big goal is for Amanda to disappear and quickly make way for real LIs. In fact I have said yes to Sadie every time.

And I really dont agree with the final and the camera bit. We just dont know enough yet, and from what we have seen Ronnie is just a pushover who will do anything to please Amanda, it very well could be him saying he is going to go after oliver and nothing to do with Amanda.

I don't know what happens in your game, but in mine what the MC sees is Amanda blackmailing Oliver. Also, I don't know if it happens on other routes, but in my game at a certain point when they are on the porch of the house, Oliver tells the MC that he already had sex with Amanda in the past and for him to be careful with her because she is a manipulative bitch.

Even the end screen grab leaves the "decision" up to Amanda, not the MC.

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That doesnt scream to me someone over a girl and going to move on in a story.

I haven't seen that end screen. In my game the last screens are the next:

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[TsubameYui]

I have avoided Amanda as much as I could. For me the big goal is for Amanda to disappear and quickly make way for real LIs. In fact I have said yes to Sadie every time.



I don't know what happens in your game, but in mine what the MC sees is Amanda blackmailing Oliver. Also, I don't know if it happens on other routes, but in my game at a certain point when they are on the porch of the house, Oliver tells the MC that he already had sex with Amanda in the past and for him to be careful with her because she is a manipulative bitch.




I haven't seen that end screen. In my game the last screens are the next:

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If you choose the NTR route,the video will show Amanda facefucking herself on Oliver's cock, and him enjoying it. No blackmail on either side with that route, just two people enjoying their betrayal of their mutual best friend. Everything else basically plays out the same as the non-NTR route. IIRC both of them still try to convince Ronny that the other is blackmailing them. The end screen micojive was referring to comes up right after that last screenshot you posted. It's just a teaser for next update with some vague plot points.

I forget if it happens on both routes, but at least the non-NTR route has Ronny tell Oliver, in no uncertain terms, that he's over Amanda, and no longer loves or cares about her. He even tells Oliver to go give her the blackmailed goodbye fuck. It seems to me that in the next update, the main difference between NTR and non-NTR routes will boil down to whether Ronny still considers Oliver a friend or not. In the non-NTR route, Oliver was actually being a pretty good friend. He kept as much distance from Amanda as he could, despite her blackmailing, and warned Ronny about her manipulative nature. On the NTR route he is basically just a backstabbing douchebag, and may end up as an antagonist to Ronny and his future harem.

 

[Negate]

I forget if it happens on both routes, but at least the non-NTR route has Ronny tell Oliver, in no uncertain terms, that he's over Amanda, and no longer loves or cares about her. He even tells Oliver to go give her the blackmailed goodbye fuck. It seems to me that in the next update, the main difference between NTR and non-NTR routes will boil down to whether Ronny still considers Oliver a friend or not. In the non-NTR route, Oliver was actually being a pretty good friend. He kept as much distance from Amanda as he could, despite her blackmailing, and warned Ronny about her manipulative nature. On the NTR route he is basically just a backstabbing douchebag, and may end up as an antagonist to Ronny and his future harem.

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I have avoided Amanda as much as I could. For me the big goal is for Amanda to disappear and quickly make way for real LIs. In fact I have said yes to Sadie every time.



I don't know what happens in your game, but in mine what the MC sees is Amanda blackmailing Oliver. Also, I don't know if it happens on other routes, but in my game at a certain point when they are on the porch of the house, Oliver tells the MC that he already had sex with Amanda in the past and for him to be careful with her because she is a manipulative bitch.




I haven't seen that end screen. In my game the last screens are the next:

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[YogSothoth1982]

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Well, I don't know if it's a bug, but I get taken directly to the menu after a black screen.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

If you choose the NTR route,the video will show Amanda facefucking herself on Oliver's cock, and him enjoying it. No blackmail on either side with that route, just two people enjoying their betrayal of their mutual best friend. Everything else basically plays out the same as the non-NTR route. IIRC both of them still try to convince Ronny that the other is blackmailing them. The end screen micojive was referring to comes up right after that last screenshot you posted. It's just a teaser for next update with some vague plot points.

I forget if it happens on both routes, but at least the non-NTR route has Ronny tell Oliver, in no uncertain terms, that he's over Amanda, and no longer loves or cares about her. He even tells Oliver to go give her the blackmailed goodbye fuck. It seems to me that in the next update, the main difference between NTR and non-NTR routes will boil down to whether Ronny still considers Oliver a friend or not. In the non-NTR route, Oliver was actually being a pretty good friend. He kept as much distance from Amanda as he could, despite her blackmailing, and warned Ronny about her manipulative nature. On the NTR route he is basically just a backstabbing douchebag, and may end up as an antagonist to Ronny and his future harem.

I have the same impression, in the non-NTR route it seems like the MC and Oliver are going to end on good terms and continue being friends, while doesn't look like that Amanda will continue being friends (let alone girlfriend) with the MC.

 

[loikl]

I know some people just hate NTR and some people love it and that's fine.

From a narrative perspective... the best thing to have been done, in my opinion and just for the sake of the story, would be to make the NTR scene cannon... but not show it at that time. It would still happen and the MC would still not know about it. The only difference would be that the Player wouldn't know about it either. Reveal the events of the scene later (retain the option to skip it)

It wouldn't change anything from the MC's perspective...but it would allow the player to share that perspective better. It would just make for better storytelling.

I think you have a point, personally I don't mind the "cheating" in itself, what bothers me is the "cuckold", the MC who spies on how someone else has sex with his girl and does nothing or who is pathetically humiliated without do anything. But when it is a game with different perspectives it is quite good, that is, if the girl has sex with half of the town but the MC is not present it is still NTR but it is quite tolerable and entertaining (it happens with Summer with Mia and in several scenes from Pandoras Box).

but I don't know if this goes that way, although judging by the lack of a "female protagonist" tag I doubt it.

 

[Nimbus Commando]

My biggest problem is I don't really want to help the MC succeed at anything. I also don't want anyone else to succeed. Right now the "Good Ending" for me is that Ronnie murders everyone at the party and then caps himself.

I would rather it be he caps them all and then leaves the city and gets some better women in his life and improves him self instead of being a pathetic loser cuck and hanging out with these scum people.

 

[Negate]

I would rather it be he caps them all and then leaves the city and gets some better women in his life and improves him self instead of being a pathetic loser cuck and hanging out with these scum people.

He's surrounded by the people he deserves. Technically though, he's not a cuck. Amanda is not his girlfriend and he doesn't know about her and Oliver. He's just a pathetic loser simp. Amanda's boyfriend over in Portugal is the cuck.

 

[Canto Forte]

Techniquely, he knows, because Oliver tells him so ... something she never told him. He also finds her and Oliver arguing in the kitchen, when she was dissing the MC, so he knows she is on better terms wityh Oliver than with him, which is a huge red flag, precisely after Oliver tells him they banged, in his appartment, on drugs, without MC and never invited him to such a party, ever.

Technically though, he's not a cuck. Amanda is not his girlfriend and he doesn't know about her and Oliver. He's just a pathetic loser simp

If you choose to be a cuck - Oliver and Amanda are total assholes, both cheating and lying pieces of dirt - they are playing MC for a fool who squanders his money on such undeserving vile disgusting creatures - make no mistake, she a whore and he a drug dealer who confesses he has amassed multiple hundreds of dollars, enough to buy a whole appartment - yet MC is again the idiot tool who does not even demant rent, let alone a cut of the huge proffits in sex and drug money Oliver is doing totally because of MC and using MC as cover - anyone would not be wiser to know it was actually Oliver living and running drugs outta MCs appartment.

 

[Negate]

If you choose to be a cuck - Oliver and Amanda are total assholes, both cheating and lying pieces of dirt - they are playing MC for a fool who squanders his money on such undeserving vile disgusting creatures - make no mistake, she a whore and he a drug dealer who confesses he has amassed multiple hundreds of dollars, enough to buy a whole appartment - yet MC is again the idiot tool who does not even demant rent, let alone a cut of the huge proffits in sex and drug money Oliver is doing totally because of MC and using MC as cover - anyone would not be wiser to know it was actually Oliver living and running drugs outta MCs appartment.

Still though, Not a cuck. Just a simp. Amanda isn't his GF. He doesn't get off on Amanda getting plowed by other dudes. She's definitely a slut and Oliver is definitely an asshole. And they are both using Ronnie (I would say Oliver more so)...but he lets them. And Ronnie's a piece of shit too. Sadie's also a piece of shit...but I think, out of all of them, she might actually have Ronnie's best interests at heart... she seems to be trying to get Ronnie to actually stand up for himself...but her methods are fucking terrible.

 

[Meloned]

will ntr be avoidable?

 

[YogSothoth1982]

Still though, Not a cuck. Just a simp. Amanda isn't his GF. He doesn't get off on Amanda getting plowed by other dudes. She's definitely a slut and Oliver is definitely an asshole. And they are both using Ronnie (I would say Oliver more so)...but he lets them. And Ronnie's a piece of shit too. Sadie's also a piece of shit...but I think, out of all of them, she might actually have Ronnie's best interests at heart... she seems to be trying to get Ronnie to actually stand up for himself...but her methods are fucking terrible.

Possibly the MC is a simp and not a cuckold in that route, but my intention to not follow it remains the same. I haven't tried it and will not try it.

In my opinion the non-NTR route seems much better. Also, in that route the only one who looks like a bitch is Amanda.

 

[Negate]

Possibly the MC is a simp and not a cuckold in that route, but my intention to not follow it remains the same. I haven't tried it and will not try it.

In my opinion the non-NTR route seems much better. Also, in that route the only one who looks like a bitch is Amanda.

He's not a cuckold in either route....but he's a simp in both.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

He's not a cuckold in either route....but he's a simp in both.

I have hope that he'll react in the non-NTR route.

 

[Negate]

I have hope that he'll react in the non-NTR route.

Even if he does... it doesn't change that he's been a simp.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

Even if he does... it doesn't change that he's been a simp.

But if he improves, then at least we have gained something. It would be worse if he continued to be the same.

 

[Nimbus Commando]

He's surrounded by the people he deserves. Technically though, he's not a cuck. Amanda is not his girlfriend and he doesn't know about her and Oliver. He's just a pathetic loser simp. Amanda's boyfriend over in Portugal is the cuck.

He should still cap Amanda and Oliver, they are both pure scum.