Ren'Py Doors [v0.3.3 Part 2] [The Neuron Project]

[Mondoblasto]

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an·swer | \ ˈan(t)-sər \
Definition of answer
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1a: something spoken or written in reply to a questionHis answer surprised us.
b: a correct responseknows the answer
2: a reply to a legal charge or suit :

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3: something done in response or reactionHis only answer was to walk out.
4: a solution of a problemMore money is not the answer.
5: one that imitates, matches, or corresponds to anotherThe show is television's answer to the newsmagazines.

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answered; answering\ ˈan(t)s-riŋ , ˈan(t)-sə- \
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1: to speak or write in replyneglected to answer the letter
2a: to be or make oneself responsible or accountableanswer for a debt
b: to make

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He must answer for his crimes.
3: to be in conformity or

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She answered to the description.
4: to act in response to an action performed elsewhere or by anotherThe home team scored first but the visitors answered quickly.
5: to be adequate :

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an old bucket answered for a sinkThe school had to answer for a town hall.

 

[woj_tec]

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an·swer | \ ˈan(t)-sər \
Definition of answer
(Entry 1 of 2)
1a: something spoken or written in reply to a questionHis answer surprised us.
b: a correct responseknows the answer
2: a reply to a legal charge or suit :

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also :

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3: something done in response or reactionHis only answer was to walk out.
4: a solution of a problemMore money is not the answer.
5: one that imitates, matches, or corresponds to anotherThe show is television's answer to the newsmagazines.

answer

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answered; answering\ ˈan(t)s-riŋ , ˈan(t)-sə- \
Definition of answer (Entry 2 of 2)

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1: to speak or write in replyneglected to answer the letter
2a: to be or make oneself responsible or accountableanswer for a debt
b: to make

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:

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He must answer for his crimes.
3: to be in conformity or

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She answered to the description.
4: to act in response to an action performed elsewhere or by anotherThe home team scored first but the visitors answered quickly.
5: to be adequate :

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an old bucket answered for a sinkThe school had to answer for a town hall.

I think you don't understand a question...

 

[woj_tec]

Menu don't work for me... Can't access preferencess, return don't work (only right click)...

 

[The Krypt Angel]

Problem: If it's ever made possible to bone the younger redhead girls the game will not be allowed on this site. Apparently Loli is ONLY legal if in 2d not 3d here for some reason. So you can gangbang a bunch of 2nd graders if it's 2d, but you might get in trouble for 10th graders in 3d. Strange double standard. As a solution to this problem for you... Maybe make it so when you got hit by that car it put you in a coma for like 10 years... You would wake up at age 21. Your big sis, and little sis would be acceptable age ranges. Then you can have an excuse for acting like an immature horny preteen.

You are misusing the term loli in reference to rule #7... Loli's are characters that are of age but appear younger and there are plenty of 3d games on here with those, hell there's a tag for it lol.

 

[vir_cotto]

I'm a little bit wary. If there is Electra complex in the game, that would mean our MC got cucked and I'm not really interested in that. Or is it just a bad choice of words?

 

[Deleted member 1268799]

Everybody is missing the biggest question here... Is that Centaur Transgender? There seems to be a lot going on down there...

 

[Mormont]

Think I'll keep an open mind about this one interesting-looking game though the girl in the shower already has my attention the Mother looks pretty cute good luck with this

 

[woj_tec]

Just looking at the screenshots:

The millennial girl in the first picture looks like she was born in a dark cave and has never left.

The fucking dude in the second one looks like Owen Wilson. WOW

The redhead looks cute until I realize that her mouth is a bit too big for her face an- OH GOD LOOK AT THE FOREHEAD ON THAT MONSTER. What has she got, like, six inches of space between her hairline and her eyebrows?

i think your knowlledge about anatomy is wery low...

 

[Look-see]

it was interesting but the story telling was a bit long. i mean was it even necessary to see the scene with the guy gettig NTR'd? didnt really bug me i was just trying to figure out who MC was lol. so if you go bad choice with dad is this like a "flag" so you dont get to see scenes with him or plan to share girls with him? like i said interesting story just felt like it had a bit of padding

 

[vir_cotto]

it was interesting but the story telling was a bit long. i mean was it even necessary to see the scene with the guy gettig NTR'd? didnt really bug me i was just trying to figure out who MC was lol. so if you go bad choice with dad is this like a "flag" so you dont get to see scenes with him or plan to share girls with him? like i said interesting story just felt like it had a bit of padding

So, it has NTR?
Why they didn't put it amongst fetishes - at least I wouldn't lose my time with this.

 

[TheNeuronProject]

First, let me thank all of you who took the time and responded. I was not expecting this kind of "welcome". Secondly, I want to address the questions raised here and also some of the feedback as well.

Just looking at the screenshots:

The millennial girl in the first picture looks like she was born in a dark cave and has never left.

The fucking dude in the second one looks like Owen Wilson. WOW

The redhead looks cute until I realize that her mouth is a bit too big for her face an- OH GOD LOOK AT THE FOREHEAD ON THAT MONSTER. What has she got, like, six inches of space between her hairline and her eyebrows?

I like to think that I have an above-average creativity index but no matter how hard I try to picture the above mentioned characters the way you described, I can't. Especially the Owen Wilson thing, its not even in the same ballpark. Well, as they say, different strokes...

The highlight to me was seeing the Mustang Fastback bike! Man I wanted one of those so badly back in the early 1970's... I never got one though as parents probably thought I would become a hooligan with a cool bike. (This is probably was a childhood precursor that led to my love of motorcycles).

Anyhow who gives a shit about me...

I found the demo to be pretty good, I'm not quite sure where it is going though, as when you had to make blind decisions you have no idea of the ramifications to come. I also found that if you did not name the characters it just left their name blank instead of using the default values. I had to unpack the game and change everybody's name in the console to fix it.

I look forward to the next installment and may have to do a few playthroughs to shape it to my taste going forward.

PS. If that is Gina in the shower, I'm all in on that!

Honestly, I don't have the slightest clue when did I change that. It was implemented in the code from the get-go, but it seems I have changed it along the way somewhere. I'm gonna fix it in the next update. Side note: That is not Gina.

There is not a whole lot there to judge yet, but I'll give it a shot.

Problem: Characters lack a default name. This part must be fixed.

Characters: The character models are fine. I like redheads and there are a lot in this game, and some are cute.

Drunk Driver: This guy has my greatest sympathies. Honestly, the biggest victim in this story.

Protagonist: Dumb 11-year-old kid that likes to dream, and walk into the street while looking at his phone not looking out for cars.

Dad: Seems like a good guy... so long as you tell him that you liked riding the bike without training wheels and him letting go was fine and you are all happy. If you answer with that you didn't like that... You know him asking the opinion of a child, and answer honestly this guy turns into such a shitty little bitch walking away all sour faced... Then protagonist is all like "how can I be so stupid I'm sorry"... So basically this guy seems like a good parent so long as you tell him what he wants to hear.

Big Sister: She is cute, barely know shit about her.

Little Bro & Sis

Twins? Highlander Syndrome? They got a syndrome that don't let them age, or just the borther does? Sister seems to get upset no matter what you say and is supposed ot be a genius.

Mom: You don't even interact with her. Apparently you are waking up and don't see dream of her, and she is like "OH MY GOD!" when your eyes open. Screaming in the face of the person who just got out of a coma...

Problem: If it's ever made possible to bone the younger redhead girls the game will not be allowed on this site. Apparently Loli is ONLY legal if in 2d not 3d here for some reason. So you can gangbang a bunch of 2nd graders if it's 2d, but you might get in trouble for 10th graders in 3d. Strange double standard. As a solution to this problem for you... Maybe make it so when you got hit by that car it put you in a coma for like 10 years... You would wake up at age 21. Your big sis, and little sis would be acceptable age ranges. Then you can have an excuse for acting like an immature horny preteen.

Exposition: You ramble on a lot about doors... With how much you talk about doors in this there better be some magical doors in this. By answering 2 at the one dream door you meat some hot centaur chick from some fantasy land. It appears almost everything in this version is a part of a dream state.

Problem: Sometimes it appears you follow character perspectives that are not the protagonist. For instance, you followed the perspective of the drunk driver that ran over the stupid 11 year old protagonist walking into the street while looking at his phone. You like follow his whole day... Guy goes into work. He gets fired... His co workers are giving high fives like "fuck that guy, glad he is gone..." So... He is like hell, I'll go have a drink to drown my sorrows.... Goes home from work early... Finds his life long best friend fucking his wife.... in the ass. Is not okay with this... Walks out the door gets back in his car... and if it was ever okay for a man to have a drink now is the time, so the guy goes to have a few beers instead of jumping off a bridge.... So he gets back in his car and then he is all eyes full of tears having the worst day ever and it gets even worse when some stupid child (protagonist) walks out into the middle of the street not at a cross walk, without looking anywhere but at his phone... Then BAM kid gets slammed into by the car driven by a drunk... a drunk that managed to stay in his lines the entire time kinda impressive. Also the car has New York plates so this takes place in New York...

That whole guys day should be removed. It's unnecisary and confusing information. Just show the kid walking into the street getting hit by a car. The driver did NOT need to be drunk, and this could literally happen to any driver, even a good sober driver. The kid is 100% at fault... but knowing how the law is this guy is now in prison getting raped in the ass by Big Black Bubba as a "Child killer"... The absolute worst thing you can do to ruin a story is to follow the perspective of someone other than the protagonist.This guy has it far worse than the protagonist. He lost his wife, job, freedom, best friend, and surely a lot of his money and resources and freedom, and it's not like he is shown doing anything bad or sinister so we can be like, "fuck that guy he deserved it." Protagonist is just having some dreams, gonna wake up all good after his coma. Personally I'm more concerned about the so called drunk driver.

Problem: Sometimes you use too many words, or too big of words like you busted out a thesaurus to get your point across. For instance, one line is:


"My first life ended whit the help of a mind-boggling balance between stupidity and bad luck."
"The adversity came in the guise of a drunk driver who drank himself to oblivion because he had a very, very bad day."

Instead of all that wording, it could have instead been written as something like:

"My life was permanently altered after a car accident that put me into a coma."

Not sure about this game yet. It could be very good, or shit. Time will tell.

Wow bro, you don't take prisoners when it comes to feedback, do you?
As above somewhere I mentioned I'm not a fan of the "here are some random characters, now lets f..k" kind of stories. The plan is to introduce the main characters, their personality, habits and so on, little by little, trough the eyes of the protag. Some of the personality traits you highlighted are spot on, some are not, but the gist of it is this: this is not a quick stroke story and was never intended to be that. Also, if you think about it, there isn't a practical or logical way to tell an 18+ story with preteen characters. So yes, the people in the game gonna age to that point first before you will see any kind of exchange of bodily fluids.
The younger siblings are not twins, here I made a mistake in the writing that I didn't catch before I uploaded it (among other things as well), so thank you for pointing it out.
Lastly the driver. There is a reason why the driver is in the spotlight and there is a reason why the writing in this particular scene is detailed as is. One of them is the reaction you gave because how sorry you felt for the guy.
ps.: I tend to "over explain" things so probably there is merit in what you said. But until I find someone who proofreads my work you guys and girls gonna see it for a while in the game.

I'm a little bit wary. If there is Electra complex in the game, that would mean our MC got cucked and I'm not really interested in that. Or is it just a bad choice of words?

As for the Electral love naming:

Electral love

Noun Sexual relations between close relatives, especially immediate family members and first cousins, usually considered taboo

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Everybody is missing the biggest question here... Is that Centaur Transgender? There seems to be a lot going on down there...

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//mumbles under his nose.:"Shit, I knew I should have made it smaller"//...(throws keyboard out the window)

 

[TheNeuronProject]

So, it has NTR?
Why they didn't put it amongst fetishes - at least I wouldn't lose my time with this.

I considered it but the tagging rule for that fetish doesn't fit for that scene in my view.

Ntr [Designed to cause jealousy by having the romantic interest involved with someone other than the MC.]

 

[Look-see]

So, it has NTR?
Why they didn't put it amongst fetishes - at least I wouldn't lose my time with this.

i wouldnt say it actually has NTR since i dont think it was the MC. but the scene was indeed NTR for the guy in the hypothetical scenario that was being narrated by MC.

 

[vir_cotto]

As for the Electral love naming:

Electral love

Noun Sexual relations between close relatives, especially immediate family members and first cousins, usually considered taboo

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Electral love is based on "Electra complex" which is equivalent of"Oedipus complex" but it's based on Greek mythology character of Electra and it means "sexual attraction of a daughter toward father". Hence, if that is the case, I would consider that as NTR - and that's OK for those who like that but I don't like it and I would be glad to know in advance cause I don't want to lose my time on something I'm not interested in.

 

[woj_tec]

It wasn't a question, it was a statement with a question mark on the end.

If he wanted a serious answer, he should have written it in English and not assume that telepathy works over the internet.

"?" is mark for question... not only in English... When you play this game you understand...

 

[DudeManrod]

Just looking at the screenshots:

The millennial girl in the first picture looks like she was born in a dark cave and has never left.

The fucking dude in the second one looks like Owen Wilson. WOW

The redhead looks cute until I realize that her mouth is a bit too big for her face an- OH GOD LOOK AT THE FOREHEAD ON THAT MONSTER. What has she got, like, six inches of space between her hairline and her eyebrows?

Don't you mean Luke Wilson?

 

[PoyntFury]

Don't you mean Luke Wilson?

I actually didn't know Owen Wilson had brothers when I posted the comment. I think it was a combination of the facial structure and the smile that made me think of Owen.

 

[ThunderRob]

the answer to the question is easy..just look at EXACTLY how the question is shown....and the answer is right there

 

[ThunderRob]

so..of all the new stuff today..this was the biggest surprise....some spelling errors..but well written..interesting..seems worth following..

 

[TokyoRoaster]

OMG this is horrible...