Ren'Py Dorothy's Journey [v0.2] [Myon-San]

[Deadshot1984]

My guy, not everyone has to cater to your specific, narrowly defined fetish. Let homeboy do what they want.

My guy, this is a forum. The most useful to the creator is feedback, opinions.

 

[Myon-San]

What a tremendous experience the update was for me! It really is a new game.

I didn't played the first version because the designs didn't look pretty, but I admit that I'm seduced by the idea of women wanting to be more muscular just by exercising, although the new plot is equally entertaining.

I hope you continue to introduce new characters, some ideas could be a tanned blonde bimbo girl in a shopping mall and on the beach, there could also be girls with a Wellness-type physique with very muscular legs, more realistic physiques because not every girl in that town has to have had her muscles with magic. The idea is that there are other characters that interact in all places, whether in the bar, in the gym, at the college, etc.

The idea as a sandbox is that the content is not so expected, that at any time you can meet very different and random people and things, so that you don't know what to expect or predict.

I don't know if the name "Dorothy's Journey" is the best one anymore if she is far from being the main character, rather it is Jenny's journey to become the most muscular in the world, but I think that her stages growth as well as Dorothy's are too masive, there is not much space left for future updates, giving the impression that the game will be very short (no, it is not the idea that Jenny will later be bigger than a building). At least I don't have a fetish for amazons of absurd heights, I like to maintain a certain size ratio.

Muscle growth, instead of just increasing mass, would be good for the muscles to become more defined, with more veins, drier as in contest shape.

I hope you consider these tips, I leave you some reference photos and I will become a patreon.

PS: My maximum fetish is the typical pretty young girl who looks skinny until she takes off her long coat and grows 2 times her size from pure muscle growth.

I thank you for giving your ideas and long feedback. This is still an early version and will be updated a lot in the future, maybe one day there will be something that will perfectly match your fetish. Thank you for playing.

 

[Myon-San]

My guy, not everyone has to cater to your specific, narrowly defined fetish. Let homeboy do what they want.

It's okay, I'll still be open to listening to ideas, although I will never promise anything (I'm not a politician), even so, consideration will always be there, but, I will always make whatever pleases me first and then others, but still, I don't reject any ideas at all.

 

[Devinebeast]

Please add hyper muscle (like women's biceps is size of the guy's height) and hyper boobs size too in future, you can make it optional by providing a dialogue box

 

[fards]

My guy, this is a forum. The most useful to the creator is feedback, opinions.

Sure, but the way in which some of your feedback was given seemed to verge on the edge of demanding.

Whatever, I've said my piece.

 

[girthfreak]

Wow, loved playing the game, there is hardly quality FMG content out there like that. I also really appreciate you giving the MC a big dick, at least somewhat befitting of the women's physicality. Thank you so much for creating this! Really!

With female muscle content (also real life one) in general, it's often such a turn off, that you have these women who devote their whole lives to basically looking like real live goddesses, and on video you get to see them almost exclusively interacting with extremely scrawny men with little dick who never went to the gym once.
I know this sounds harsh, I don't want to put anyone down saying this, it's just from an aesthetics point of view, what I enjoy in porn. And I'm aware that the above is part of a fetish and has a right to exist etc...

So if I ever could wish for something in this game, it would be a sex scene, where the MC puts his big dick to good use and makes the muscle woman cum.
I actually wouldn't mind the MC gaining a bit of musculature, but I understand that this probably is not really in line with what the story is about.

Maybe some day there will be another creator for us folks into muscular huge dick mc fucking huge muscle women out there, besides the great EpicLust .

 

[Izaki999]

splendid

 

[Melmoth99]

Any News on a Update?

 

[cgfhy]

Any News on a Update?

he said he works on it after when the dystopian abyss remake come out. it will be soon i think.

 

[coomeah123!]

It's out.

 

[Gojii]

Version 0.3 is out public:

You must be registered to see the links

Though when downloading it itch is flagging it as being suspect. I'm not sure why. Its also apparently 7.8GB, so its as beefy as the waifus in the game are.

 

[Myon-San]

Version 0.3 is out public:

You must be registered to see the links

Though when downloading it itch is flagging it as being suspect. I'm not sure why. Its also apparently 7.8GB, so its as beefy as the waifus in the game are.

Hello there, yeah the new update can be downloaded at itch Io, and for suspicious activity Flagged by itch Io, I think it's the mistake by the itch io system, I think I'll email them again about this, thanks!

 

[Deadshot1984]

Hello there, yeah the new update can be downloaded at itch Io, and for suspicious activity Flagged by itch Io, I think it's the mistake by the itch io system, I think I'll email them again about this, thanks!

Hey! Congratulations on the update! The new scenes are amazing, but I have a few comments.

The issue with the colors: if the scene is a dream, it could have more fantasy colors. For example, I didn't know if that moment of "encountering" with Olivia was a dream or not.

The number of days for those scenes to appear needs to be adjusted. For example, it doesn't make sense to wait 100 days for the last scene to appear if you've already finished all the open-world content in less than 20 days. Plus, there's no point in making money if you can't buy anything.

More than anything, the whole point is to improve the open world, or the entire game experience can become very boring. Think about the experience and perspective of the person playing it; they're all about having fun. If they get bored with nothing to do, like me, they'll end up looking for images in their folder instead of playing.

Every location the player is in should have activities to do, from working out at the gym, browsing the internet, searching for muscle porn content, watch tv, cooking, eating, going to the supermarket, going dancing at a club, etc. For example, searching for information about the amulet in the library, and there are countless ways to get the most out of the open world. I hope the next update focuses on that more than the story.

Best wishes and success! I love the game, and that's why I want it to improve.

 

[Zefki]

Hey, there. I really enjoyed playing the new update even though I'm not a fan of the sandbox system in these games. ) Still, it took time but that's the whole point I guess and I barely noticed how much time I had spent on the game, cause the story was intriguing enough to keep my focus on it. The usage of the "Most-Musuclar Pose" by all three women (Olivia - Dorothy - Jenny) was really unexpected to me but at the same time, truly awesome to see. I can 100 percent confirm that I enjoyed the scenes which included that pose the most, so I'm grateful for the idea. In my opinion, it sets a dominant yet interesting tone between mc and the ladies. Best wishes on developing this game further to even better highs.

 

[Myon-San]

Hey! Congratulations on the update! The new scenes are amazing, but I have a few comments.

The issue with the colors: if the scene is a dream, it could have more fantasy colors. For example, I didn't know if that moment of "encountering" with Olivia was a dream or not.

The number of days for those scenes to appear needs to be adjusted. For example, it doesn't make sense to wait 100 days for the last scene to appear if you've already finished all the open-world content in less than 20 days. Plus, there's no point in making money if you can't buy anything.

More than anything, the whole point is to improve the open world, or the entire game experience can become very boring. Think about the experience and perspective of the person playing it; they're all about having fun. If they get bored with nothing to do, like me, they'll end up looking for images in their folder instead of playing.

Every location the player is in should have activities to do, from working out at the gym, browsing the internet, searching for muscle porn content, watch tv, cooking, eating, going to the supermarket, going dancing at a club, etc. For example, searching for information about the amulet in the library, and there are countless ways to get the most out of the open world. I hope the next update focuses on that more than the story.

Best wishes and success! I love the game, and that's why I want it to improve.

Thanks for playing and giving suggestions

 

[Myon-San]

Hey, there. I really enjoyed playing the new update even though I'm not a fan of the sandbox system in these games. ) Still, it took time but that's the whole point I guess and I barely noticed how much time I had spent on the game, cause the story was intriguing enough to keep my focus on it. The usage of the "Most-Musuclar Pose" by all three women (Olivia - Dorothy - Jenny) was really unexpected to me but at the same time, truly awesome to see. I can 100 percent confirm that I enjoyed the scenes which included that pose the most, so I'm grateful for the idea. In my opinion, it sets a dominant yet interesting tone between mc and the ladies. Best wishes on developing this game further to even better highs.

Thanks

Hey, there. I really enjoyed playing the new update even though I'm not a fan of the sandbox system in these games. ) Still, it took time but that's the whole point I guess and I barely noticed how much time I had spent on the game, cause the story was intriguing enough to keep my focus on it. The usage of the "Most-Musuclar Pose" by all three women (Olivia - Dorothy - Jenny) was really unexpected to me but at the same time, truly awesome to see. I can 100 percent confirm that I enjoyed the scenes which included that pose the most, so I'm grateful for the idea. In my opinion, it sets a dominant yet interesting tone between mc and the ladies. Best wishes on developing this game further to even better highs.

Thank you for playing

 

[Melmoth99]

How long before F95 gets an Update?

 

[Myon-San]

How long before F95 gets an Update?

I don't really feel like updating on F95, probably some mod on this site will Update it. But it is now available publicly for free on itch Io. You can download it there, I just too lazy to update the game in here, because there are so many step (no offense to f95 though)

 

[AmelRose]

Now that I have played the update, I 100% agree with the poll, this should have never became a sandbox, if it had more content and more girls' stories fleshed out maybe, but for now it just feels empty and I had to skip over a lot of days to get to events, this game should've judt been a visual novel

 

[Myon-San]

Now that I have played the update, I 100% agree with the poll, this should have never became a sandbox, if it had more content and more girls' stories fleshed out maybe, but for now it just feels empty and I had to skip over a lot of days to get to events, this game should've judt been a visual novel

Yeah I realized this problem, but yeah it's still in V0.3. more sandbox on the next update, because my plan is really just focusing on stories for this update, thank you for your insight though