VN Ren'Py Abandoned Dr. Amana, Sexual Therapist [v2.0.0P] [Ianvs]

[BobbyBrown3000]

Out of curiosity - why is this being redone? Wasn't the first version script good enough?

 

[DSTORQUE]

This game is in dire need of an incest patch. As mentioned above, the awkwardness of the dialogue is distracting and really eats away at some scenes.

 

[sanmal]

Why the game was deleted from OP and added this cut shi..?

 

[♩♪♫ ŤЦ尺尺ØЛ ♫♪♩]

Why the game was deleted from OP and added this cut shi..?

can you link your original copy? for research purposes of course....:tf:

 

[RomanHume]

First time checking this out.

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2) In the meeting with Arthur & Nanami, Arthur says "There's no way he would have put this together himself or had the balls to try and undermind me." Proper English would replace "or" with "nor" in this instance but "or" is colloquially believable. "Undermind" is not even a word. It should be "undermine". Later in same scene: "sweetheart" not "sweet heart", one word not two.

I'll amend this if I find more.

3) Emily in bathtub scene says "Not happy with the distance from the metro. Doesn't moulding in the parlor." Second sentence seems to be missing the word "like". Also, when using the British spelling "moulding" instead of the American "molding" it would seem to make sense to use the British "parlour" (or is "parlour" now an archaic form in Britain, as well?) instead of the American "parlor". 2 sentences later you have "perfectionist" misspelled as "prefectionist". Same scene, several lines after the "be honest" choice Roger says "I've been packing up my offie" (office).

4) Pool scene with the 3 girls, Jane asks about martini, Roger says "Why do you want one". Needs a comma after "Why" since the question is whether she wants one or not. Without the comma it's asking her for what reason she wants one. Later in same scene Amanda says "I'm sorry, I feel wierd brining this up to you." "Weird" & "bringing". a few choices later I ran into this:

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/_Characters/Cassie/cassie01.rpy", line 1685, in <module>
NameError: name 'dissolves' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "_Characters/Cassie/cassie01.rpyc", line 1685, in script
  File "X:\Games\DAST001-1.0.1-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1330, in execute
    trans = renpy.python.py_eval(self.expr)
  File "X:\Games\DAST001-1.0.1-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1943, in py_eval
    return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
  File "X:\Games\DAST001-1.0.1-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1936, in py_eval_bytecode
    return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
  File "game/_Characters/Cassie/cassie01.rpy", line 1685, in <module>
NameError: name 'dissolves' is not defined

Windows-7-6.1.7601-SP1
Ren'Py 7.0.0.196
Doctor Amana: Sexual Therapist 001 1.0.1
Wed Sep 19 03:44:42 2018

When Amanda walks back to pool you have "wanderded" for "wandered". When Jane shows tit she says "You're move". Should be "Your".

5) OK, I like it. Good characters, strange situation, the flashback storytelling that gives it that "film noir" flavour. Lots of potential. As long as you don't go breaking saves I'll definitely be following this.

Excellent. Thanks again for catching these. When we moved from alpha to beta that was the only time we broke saves. We've vowed not to do it again. As a fan of these games I personally know how aggravating that can be and we've taken measures to ensure we won't need to. Thanks again for giving it a play and letting us know what you think. Cheers!

Loving this remake so far. New models and renders is very good, i like all new choices in dialogue with forging our personality and variety of actions in sex. Makes story fuller. Writing and overall scenes are also of much higher quality now. (apart from few bugs and mistakes already mentioned). Wife's scene is very sensual, and pool scene has been greatly improved too. I like different personalities of each girl. Different approach to them. Be it playing dares with Jane, or slowly corrupting sweet Amanda. Looking forward for more. That "neighbor's... daughter..." gave me a good laugh btw. :closedeyesmile: Something original.

We appreciate the feedback! I'm just glad that at least a few people are picking up on the "neighbor's...daughter" joke. I mean, we thought it was a funny way to handle a shitty situation. After all, could you blame Roger for not wanting to tell his therapist everything? Cheers mate, thanks for playing. We'll try to keep the good stuff rolling.

Am I doing something wrong? I see more content in the preview pictures in the OP but in-game it says I've reached the end of the content after telling the doctor about emily and the pool story.

That is because those images were from the alpha we released earlier this year. You can still find that version on our webpage under Downloads. Just look for the link in my signature. So far no images from the new version are in the OP. We're trying to get that fixed though.

it's my first time playing this game and i could not find stats any where in game so i wanted to ask ::

why is the choice's one is blue and one is red?

One is the path of the gentleman, the other the path of the rake. Both lead to sexual outcomes, but the type, style and flavor of it all can change depending on your propensity to choose one color over the other.

there are a bunch of no show pictures especially during the pool scenes...and can anyone tell what is the significance of the red and blue choices? anything red is sexual and blue is just honest answers/good/boring route?

Several of those have been flagged and we've fixed them for the next release, which hopefully will be very soon.

nice game nice girls looking forward to more interaction

Thanks for giving us a shot! Salute mate.

Is there some kind of restoration patch?? Whole "restart to follow Patreon policies to a letter" is really annoying. Reading things like "saying that in front of your.... neighbor's.... daughter" is awkward and it ruins immersion.

No "restoration patch" exists because it was never written any other way. Even in the previous version of our game there was no direct link between Roger and Cassie. We started this game after the great Patreon purge of 2017. We restarted our game because we felt there were several places we could improve the game, from the writing, to the coding and through the renders themselves. We restarted because we felt a superior product was within our direct grasp. That's why. No other reason.

a clear cut choice at the start would be nice...like what is your relation to her or him...I don`t think nazitreon can impose a strike on you if the player has to make the choice???

This is also a no fly zone. Mr Dots tried that with his game and Patreon still shut him down so bad he had to create a brand new game. We've been closed down by Patreon once already and it wasn't a fun experience. If we want to keep working on this game and if people want to keep playing it, we have to toe the line. It's as simple as that. Patreon can shut us down simply for not liking the color of our background. It's their site and we live and die by their favor. What little pleasure might be gained by skirting their rules isn't worth testing their ire. It sucks, but that's the reality we live in currently.

Out of curiosity - why is this being redone? Wasn't the first version script good enough?

I mean, as the creator, I'd say the first script was Ok. But we always knew we could do better. I like to think that is what we're doing. The new scenes are more robust, include many more options and the render quality is exponentially better.

The first version of this game wasn't just the first version of the game, it was the first game we had made using Renpy and Daz. In the months following, we learned a great deal. We felt it was worth it since we weren't in very far to just go ahead and redo those opening scenes using the skills and tools we had acquired. We hope in the end, people will agree it was the right choice.

This game is in dire need of an incest patch. As mentioned above, the awkwardness of the dialogue is distracting and really eats away at some scenes.

We're sorry that you and others are finding it distracting. Our intent was to add a little levity and humor by having Roger blatantly lie to his therapist about things. At the end of the day, if someone mods or patches our game, we don't mind. It's flattering to us. But such a patch will never come from us. We risk losing the project if we were to even think of it.

Now one day we do hope to move on and make other games. We have several stories in mind after this one. At that time, when this game hits our archived library of games, we'd like to do a "Director's Cut" that clears up a few things and adds back in some features. But while operating under the eye of Saur-eon, we have to mind the T's & C's.

Why the game was deleted from OP and added this cut shi..?

To mad you and make say shi...

 

[RomanHume]

can you link your original copy? for research purposes of course....:tf:

I wish I could add it to the OP. Just go to our webpage (link in the sig) and go to downloads. It's under v0.9.0.

Cheers mate!

 

[Ignatz]

I got a few errors in the game and a couple of "image missing" moments. Do you need some feedback on this or have you already spotted them? I ran a fresh start (no save loaded).

The girl interaction sets up nicely. I like the new looks of 2 of the three teens. Still not thrilled with Jane, but that's okay, I don't have to be a horndog with all of them.

The missus seems quite a bit more understanding. Did you really soften her that much or is there more conflict coming (even without Nanami cheating)?

 

[RomanHume]

I got a few errors in the game and a couple of "image missing" moments. Do you need some feedback on this or have you already spotted them? I ran a fresh start (no save loaded).

The girl interaction sets up nicely. I like the new looks of 2 of the three teens. Still not thrilled with Jane, but that's okay, I don't have to be a horndog with all of them.

The missus seems quite a bit more understanding. Did you really soften her that much or is there more conflict coming (even without Nanami cheating)?

I want to say that by now we've found most of them. Over the last day and half people have been reporting the same three or four bugs. If you have the errors or missing images handy we can at least cross reference them to be sure. But I haven't seen a "new" bug in about 24 hours. So hopefully we're good.

As for Emily, since this time around we wanted more of a "This is how it all began..." story, we thought we'd start Emily as the loving wife. But with each subsequent scene that you treat her like shit, she morphs into the vicious harpy we know she has the potential to become. We felt from a story perspective there was much more drama and story potential in actually witnessing the transformation and watching it all deteriorate, if a player chooses to go that route. So yeah, hate-fucking is still on the table. =)

 

[Ignatz]

I'm too nice to treat her that way, but I bet even so, if I'm cheating on her everywhere else, it will catch up to me sooner or later. That's why, when the game gets larger, I'll start making split saves.

 

[Wookie]

Just discovered this one and it looks promising, but I have a question please?

Using v1.0.1 and it seems that there are only scenes with Nanami and Emily plus interactions with the three girls.

In the Change-log there are references to scenes with Lupita the housekeeper and in the sample images on the OP there is a gym trainer, but neither of these characters seem to appear in the actual story?

 

[bas]

@bossapplesauce I don't know if this is doable, but is there a way for me to obtain permission to modify the OP? It would be nice if we had a way to regularly update the images with some of the original HD artwork from the current version. Give new comers a fresh view of what lies within.

We'd also assume responsibility for keeping the change log current and updating with any new tags as we add fetishes to the game. I'd even like to do a custom F95 Banner for the thread.

This community has been great to us and really good for exposure. We'd like to give back by making sure people in the forum have the most up to date info on the game. Appreciate any advice you have. Cheers!

Working on it and will get back to you

 

[bronze189]

When pregnancy is turned on, there is a random chance one or more of the girls in the game become pregnant. This becomes part of the story later on.

Is this implemented now, or will it be in future content?

 

[RomanHume]

Is this implemented now, or will it be in future content?

So the mechanic is already there. So if you left pregnancy turned on, then there is a chance you've already gotten Nanami or Emily pregnant. However, the results of that outcome won't appear until later in the story. We'll have a whole side arc to play out around it.

 

[bronze189]

So the mechanic is already there. So if you left pregnancy turned on, then there is a chance you've already gotten Nanami or Emily pregnant. However, the results of that outcome won't appear until later in the story. We'll have a whole side arc to play out around it.

Will any of them actually be visibly pregnant, or will it all be early-stages?

 

[JayneCobb]

Here's a quick incest patch for anyone that just can't get their rocks off without it:

You must be registered to see the links

Instructions: extract inside the main DAST folder


(Personally, I think the game is fine as it is. It seems pretty clear to me that Roger is deliberately (and kinda awkwardly) lying to Doctor Amana about his exact relationship with Cassie. This is more of a "viewing thru someone else's perspective" than a "self-insert" kind of experience. We're just kinda watching Roger talk to his therapist and nudging his past decisions slightly this way or slightly that way.)

 

[RomanHume]

Will any of them actually be visibly pregnant, or will it all be early-stages?

Well now it wouldn't be very exciting if we didn't make it visible. =D

Our assumption is that people who say they want pregnancy in the game, want Pregnancy! So we're going to pull out all the stops when that time comes. No fears mate. Just be patient with us. The timing has the be right for the story.

 

[RomanHume]

Here's a quick incest patch for anyone that just can't get their rocks off without it:

You must be registered to see the links

Instructions: extract inside the main DAST folder


(Personally, I think the game is fine as it is. It seems pretty clear to me that Roger is deliberately (and kinda awkwardly) lying to Doctor Amana about his exact relationship with Cassie. This is more of a "viewing thru someone else's perspective" than a "self-insert" kind of experience. We're just kinda watching Roger talk to his therapist and nudging his past decisions slightly this way or slightly that way.)

You probably just made yourself the most popular person on this thread. penedeyewink:

Salute mate!

 

[RomanHume]

Here's a quick incest patch for anyone that just can't get their rocks off without it:

You must be registered to see the links

Instructions: extract inside the main DAST folder


(Personally, I think the game is fine as it is. It seems pretty clear to me that Roger is deliberately (and kinda awkwardly) lying to Doctor Amana about his exact relationship with Cassie. This is more of a "viewing thru someone else's perspective" than a "self-insert" kind of experience. We're just kinda watching Roger talk to his therapist and nudging his past decisions slightly this way or slightly that way.)

But to be clear, I don't endorse this. I can't endorse this, endorsing this would put me in a helluva bad spot. But oh geez, I can't do anything about it. My hands are tied. Not my webpage.

I'm officially requesting you take it down. What, you won't? Awe damn. Shucks. Got me by the balls. I guess I'm out of luck. Oh well...…

At least a mod hasn't moved it to the OP for everyone's convenience...……………….ahem.

:extremelyhappy:

 

[JayneCobb]

It's okay, I accept FULL responsibility for my actions.

You, as the game developer, were powerless to keep this from happening.

If not I, then eventually another would have perverted your wonderful creation with our filthy fetish.

How tragic. Nothing can be done.



(Sidenote: I don't even really like incest, but clearly a bunch of other people do! So go nuts.)

 

[goobdoob]

Here's a quick incest patch for anyone that just can't get their rocks off without it:

You must be registered to see the links

Instructions: extract inside the main DAST folder


(Personally, I think the game is fine as it is. It seems pretty clear to me that Roger is deliberately (and kinda awkwardly) lying to Doctor Amana about his exact relationship with Cassie. This is more of a "viewing thru someone else's perspective" than a "self-insert" kind of experience. We're just kinda watching Roger talk to his therapist and nudging his past decisions slightly this way or slightly that way.)

Some suggestions:

The top level patch is a .rpyc. Include the .rpy instead. Don't make me run it through unren to see what it does.

You've got a lot of stuff in the patch that doesn't need to be there, in the "tl" directory. You don't need both .rpy and .rpyc files. The .rpyc files are generated from the .rpy files. Cut the size down and you can attach it instead of uploading it to mega.

Doing the patch as a translation is very inefficient. You're duplicating every line of dialog to only change a few. Better would be a patch that acts like @bossapplesauce 's

You must be registered to see the links

. Treat the incest changes like he does spelling/grammar errors, and you'll be golden.

@RomanHume - check out how games like

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handle incest stuff. A small patch sets a persistent variable, which is checked when displaying certain dialog, like this:

                if game.is_special:
                    "{i}Soon, you're both completely absorbed by the music and the dance and everything else falls away. Your sister smiles at you."
                else:
                    "{i}Soon, you're both completely absorbed by the music and the dance and everything else falls away. Your friend smiles at you."