First, I want to say I really appreciate you taking the time to share your feedback. I love reading what others think of the story. Also, I am curious though, did you have a chance to play through the "Lita" version of the story? Did that feel short as well? Just curious.Thanks for the update -- it was an interesting one to be sure, but at least as far as the path I'm on goes (no tranny, no NTR) it felt quite short lived. Still, it was simple and effective, got me eager to discover what happens next. I do disagree with some of the reasoning used in the discussion between stripper and MC -- so I'm glad we still were given the option to "opt out." My main disagreement is simple: just because something is attractive or looks good doesn't mean I want to put my penis in it/pleasure myself with it. Sure, stripper is pretty, but I wouldn't be able to achieve sexual arousal upon realizing that she isThere's nothing wrong with her being that, but there's nothing wrong with not being into that, either. The logic used in the after discussion/inner monologue seems to imply that believing otherwise is "closed minded," which sounds like it stems from some good old fashioned, propaganda-fueled social programming.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Either way, I don't come to these games for politics so it didn't bother me (I can ignore it): just some afterthoughts.
As always, appreciate ya putting out this great game.
On a larger note though, I want to stress here and now to EVERYONE, there is no political agendas or social propaganda intended in any of my stories or games. I write for entertainment and amusement only! Never read any deeper than the surface of the text. In the case of Roger and Lola, his thinking might seem a little propagandaish, but I can assure you that his thought process was that of a man who was incredibly horny, desperate to fuck something, and was basically "talking himself into it". Those monologues are Roger talking to Roger and not me talking to the player.
Roger might have relied on some good old fashioned social programming to convince himself that what he really wanted to do was ok, but I'm not here to sell anyone on a view point, political or social stance. It's just me trying to tell a pornographic story with as much psuedo-logic as I can muster.