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It is a stand alone chapter (for now, integration of 1.1.5 with 2.0 and further future content will happen). But yeah, step by step content expansion.
So I just want to throw this out there, but if you played the game it would help me immensely if you left some feedback. Good or bad. I like reading everything to get a feel for what's working and what's not.
Of course, if you're going to leave bad feedback I only ask that you at least make your criticism constructive and offer me some insights about what I can do better. You know, rather than just accusing me of being an amateur that's shilling patrons for money. Give me something I can work with. Others will tell you, I'm all ears and eagerly want to know what I can do to make this the best game I possibly can.
Cheers mates!
Of course, if you're going to leave bad feedback I only ask that you at least make your criticism constructive and offer me some insights about what I can do better. You know, rather than just accusing me of being an amateur that's shilling patrons for money. Give me something I can work with. Others will tell you, I'm all ears and eagerly want to know what I can do to make this the best game I possibly can.
Cheers mates!
My only bad feedback is that this is a new client without the previous chapters. I know why that is and so yeah...not much to say on either side of this. Once everything can be merged/re-done i'll be happy.
But yeah. Gib more good shit.
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Of course. If only one guy is a Monica fan and has been supporting just for her it would be a douchebag move. I would be very surprised anyone care about her, but hey... I am always wrong, so what do I know. I don't know when was the last poll and it is probably biased as it really matters when you make the poll, but I am confident she would be last as main LI. And even behind other non main love interest.Maybe the patrons will say differently? I agree, don't care much about Monica and would rather have Lola instead. But i am just a pirate so everything that comes my way is profit.
I was just mentioning what for me would be a totally better alternative. The prostitutes (using Lita for non futa using Lola for futa) i think are way better characters than Monica.
I dislike futa so obviously I am not interested in Lola. But given how much I love the novel I decided to try it once (obviously chose not to fuck her cause I dislike it) but I felt she was a great character. Like if we could have a non sexual path, a friend path, I would definitely enjoy seeing more about her as I think she is really interesting and well written character.
Lita, on the other hand, obviously was super great and I was sooo into her when I met her. I mentioned I really think she would do for a great more permanent lover, and specially meeting her outside her job sounds super interesting to me.
I don't remember once in which I care 5 words that Monica said.
So my comment was simply an expression of desire, not an actual recommendation.
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I think Monica has a couple of uphill battles to fight to gather people's attention. She is sat right between "that young thing" (aka teenagers, the "college kink") and a grown woman ("milf kink") so doesn't profit off these very popular likeability boosts. Lore wise she is further removed from the MC - wife, daughter, co-worker are just closer, daughter's friends you've known for years as well - without any meaningful interaction so far in the game. She's not "conventionally hot" being short haired and butch (which of course also can be kinky but not on a "milf" level in general popularity).
But what I think puts her at a disadvantage the most is that - apart from the wife, but wives/fiancées/established girlfriends work a bit differently - she isn't taboo in the slightest (no incest, no boss-subordinate, no patient-therapist), removing that little tingling on the inside, there is no real conflict as with Nanami. You could just cut her out of your life without any consequences while the other girls you'll have to continue living with to some extent so you'll have to "make arrangements" with them, even with Lupita (who also serves the Latino kink, not the most common, then again I wouldn't know many who dislike it, while Monica arguably isn't dark skinned enough to score with ebony lovers just for that).
Now, all this could hold for Ayhsel's alternative suggestion of Lita/Lola as well even though they look younger and more "classic hot", but they would still be some kind of "forbidden fruit": having an affair with a prostitute would be seen differently than one with a fitness coach.
So in conclusion there's not too much that makes her stand out for probably a large swath of the player base. She isn't bad but overshadowed because her development will have less impact on the character's story and in a more story driven novel like this that doesn't promote her. If we had the same characters in an "everybody wants to jump your bones after two minutes" game, results might be different, but here the story element is stronger. And even in that other one, not serving a major kink may relegate her to midfield at best.
And I gotta admit even though personally I like her for not filling a character mould seen in every other game and then some, she has some high-end competition here. Yes, even Amanda, who is arguably the most classic character in this game (shy young girl with a little crush on you).
But what I think puts her at a disadvantage the most is that - apart from the wife, but wives/fiancées/established girlfriends work a bit differently - she isn't taboo in the slightest (no incest, no boss-subordinate, no patient-therapist), removing that little tingling on the inside, there is no real conflict as with Nanami. You could just cut her out of your life without any consequences while the other girls you'll have to continue living with to some extent so you'll have to "make arrangements" with them, even with Lupita (who also serves the Latino kink, not the most common, then again I wouldn't know many who dislike it, while Monica arguably isn't dark skinned enough to score with ebony lovers just for that).
Now, all this could hold for Ayhsel's alternative suggestion of Lita/Lola as well even though they look younger and more "classic hot", but they would still be some kind of "forbidden fruit": having an affair with a prostitute would be seen differently than one with a fitness coach.
So in conclusion there's not too much that makes her stand out for probably a large swath of the player base. She isn't bad but overshadowed because her development will have less impact on the character's story and in a more story driven novel like this that doesn't promote her. If we had the same characters in an "everybody wants to jump your bones after two minutes" game, results might be different, but here the story element is stronger. And even in that other one, not serving a major kink may relegate her to midfield at best.
And I gotta admit even though personally I like her for not filling a character mould seen in every other game and then some, she has some high-end competition here. Yes, even Amanda, who is arguably the most classic character in this game (shy young girl with a little crush on you).
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Yet, an employee of the club seems to be her boyfriend. She also has an overly judgmental view of said man, which says to me that their relationship dynamic, the MC's deepening interactions with the "boss" from that club and the MC desiring to keep his (paid) affairs a secret could all pull together into a world of hurt and even blackmail against the MC, while adding unknown amounts of tension into any affair he has with Monica.
She came off like a self-assured nobody, but all those tendrils leads me to believe she will play a role in undesired exposures and concerns for the MC. So, I'd like her path explored for those factors, essentially.
While I voted Emily because I like the character, I admit I have no clue what her love path could be about. No problem with the hate path, it will have its own dramas and aims, stuff will happen, but what about the love path (if you already wrote the story Hume, don't reply, I prefer being surprised).
As for advice to make the game better I have none, it's hard to be really critical toward this game for me. Of course I have personal preferences (like I'm a bit sad the old scene with swimsuit-Cassie and her father in the kitchen will be rewritten), but nothing I would objectively criticize as poorly made. I just hope once again for big differences between blue/red paths.
As for advice to make the game better I have none, it's hard to be really critical toward this game for me. Of course I have personal preferences (like I'm a bit sad the old scene with swimsuit-Cassie and her father in the kitchen will be rewritten), but nothing I would objectively criticize as poorly made. I just hope once again for big differences between blue/red paths.
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Haven't thought about that. So far while we had women characters involved with a blackmail plot (Nanami, Lola and Lita) none was the direct responsible.
It would be interesting if Monica reveals herself as such a dangerous and scummy character. Hmm i think i may be changing my mind about who looks more intriguing for the next route.
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It's been a quiet week but not an unproductive one. The character design for Lupita's son has been completed and we'll be seeing him in game very soon!
News update coming tomorrow and then maybe we'll get some streams in this weekend.
Cheers and I'll talk to you soon!
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That puts me in a lot of trouble. I really enjoyed Red with Lupita. But I still want to treat her kid good...
It's gonna be interesting how things play out.
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Those are very valid points and a potential good explanation about why I don't care about her. It is true that I found her physically not very appealing. But even her personality was not a turn on for me, while Lita was a "my goodness, this girl with suck me dry before we get to fuck given how hot she is" and I am talking about her personality not looks.
And yes, the lack of a more important presence of her in MC's life compared to the other characters or a specific kink as "a relationship with a prostitute" and all the complications a guy as MC could have is that relationship is disclosed to the public are probably a reason.
So looks, bla. Personality, bla. Personal situation, bla. Poor girl, she had no chance from the beginning.
I am always all in for the conflict, but I would prefer that that guy has nothing to do. Monica herself could bring the potential "risk of the affairs" without blackmail from some external guy.
Anyway, we'll see what happens.. My opinions on her have been spoken. Remains to see if they can be overturned.
2021-03-13 News
Alright, it’s that time again let. So let’s recap the week.
Cassie’s Alt Game Mode Images (Nude and Lingerie)
As I’m sure you $20+ patrons are aware, I have not yet provided the alternate images for the recently released Cassie chapter. I am still working on these. We created the images during the original artwork creation for Cassie’s chapter. But in an attempt to get Cassie’s chapter out as quickly as possible I hadn’t queued many of them until it was done.
I’ve had the machines running night and day working to play catch up and as soon as these assets are done I’ll post up the link. If you were a $20+ Patron in the Month of February or March, I owe you these images. Even if you’ve reduced or removed your pledge since.
Going forward I’m going to render these alternate images at the same time I do the core content so that there is no lag.
Where were the Live Streams?
This week didn’t provide much of an opportunity to do the streaming. The real job kept encroaching upon my time (go figure the bastards want me to work on their shit during the time they’re paying for instead of working on my game…the pricks).
However, I did spend my evenings and afternoons working on other aspects of the game. Some character designs were finished and some additional rewrites done to tighten up the story. Some additional improvements and modules were written for the Scrivener to Python Conversion script to add some additional functionality that I felt would offer us more variety in the story.
Now that the conversion machine is built it’s proved to be incredibly easy to expand. The last upgrade automatically writes almost 30 lines of code based on a six character notation in the script. It’s a massive time saver because it not only writes the code but does so the same every time to ensure it’s error free. So no debugging required.
Thus the week wasn’t lost, I just didn’t have any convenient mornings available to do an uninterrupted stream.
Script Re-Writes
One of my goals for moving forward is to have chapters that are shorter but dense. A lot of action in a tiny well paced package. Cassie’s chapter, while fun to do and play, can’t be a template for chapters going forward. Counting from when work on her chapter actually started, it took three to four months to put together. I want updates to be faster than that.
That said I’m going to start pacing out some of the plot in the hopes that we can achieve an update schedule of every month and a half to two months. This will give a nice steady stream of new content while allowing us to cycle through characters more frequently.
This means most new chapters will play out around the length of Amanda’s last chapter. A healthy amount of content with enough forward momentum to keep the story moving.
It is with this goal in mind I’ve started going through portions of the script and viciously trimming fat. Ultimately this was a good thing because in re-writing Emily’s newest chapter I had a ton of content that could not only be introduced at a later time, but could be done so in a much more dramatic and enjoyable fashion. All the while plot points I had in mind for later found opportunity to get introduced earlier and in a much more satisfying way. I’m just as excited about Emily’s upcoming chapter as I was about Cassie’s and as I am about Lupita now. (What can I say, I love my characters!)
Poll Results
Which reminds me, Emily won our recent “~Who’s Next” poll.
So when Lupita’s chapter is concluded, expect Emily’s to follow.
The 3-1-1 Plan
Starting next week I want to begin the 3-1-1 plan. I want to spend Monday, Tuesday and Wednesday working on Lupita. Thursday I want to spend working on Emily, and then if we are lucky and get to squeeze in a Friday stream, spend this day working on old content or creating custom assets in Blender.
That’s the tentative plan and if it works like hope, by the time we’re finishing up with Lupita we’ll be half way done with Emily. Emily can then move to Monday, Tuesday and Wednesday and the next character can fill up the Thursday slot.
We’ll give a go starting next week and see how it plays out.
Character Cards
Finally, I’ve started putting together character cards to introduce new characters as they’re completed. They aren’t anything special, just quick easy renders and some back story. Since they’re so effortless to make I want to do a series of them, one for each character in the game.
I’ll go back and do some for the characters we’ve already met and as they’re done post them under the ‘characters’ tag on Patreon and Subscribestar. I’ve also created a channel in the discord to collect this as well. Think of it as the out of game equivalent of the journal for players to reference or review.
Again, I know they don’t add much. They’re just easy to make and I think they look pretty sweet when they’re done. I won’t try and convince you it’s any deeper than that. =D
Conclusion
Alright, that’s all I got for now. The real job might not have left me with any uninterrupted time to stream, but between those interruptions I’m still very happy with how much was accomplished. I’ll spend this weekend continuing my education on creating a Blender -> Substance -> Daz pipeline for custom environments and assets. And then on Monday, we kick off again fresh and drive forward with Lupita.
Everyone have a great weekend and I’ll catch up with you soon.
Cheers!
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Have you thought about putting this game on Steam Early Access? It has enough content to qualify, and would get great exposure that way. I'm not sure how that all works, but there are a lot of much worse adult games on Steam, and I think this could do well there.
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Here is a character that has long been in the works. I've teased her in the past but I've just recently finalized her design and personality.
Originally I was saving Sarah for introduction in Monica's upcoming chapter. But as I thought more about the character, who she was and her role in the story, I found other places that she fit as well.
And so now Sarah's role has increased ten-fold in some pretty amazing ways that I think will cross over well with some of the other characters.
If you ever stood a chance of having a three way with your wife an another character...Sarah just may be the ally you need to help her (and potentially others) unlock some of their inner desires.
And no, it's not through the use of fucking healing crystals....
Cheers mates. We'll talk soon!
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Wow Sarah's model is so pretty. I look forward seeing her in the story.