- Nov 6, 2017
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The structure building of the sentences are really bad, spelling is off.... and so on, nothing personal but in short going by the novel and your replies on here you are just not good enough at english to make a visual novel in english whitout assistance.I know but I can't hire one
Hey dude it is out of curiosity, you're saying i need a proff reader, but german guy read my vn and said it is not a masterpiece writing buthe understands and evn donated a good amount (I'm not lying) can you tell me why you think it need proofreading like i didn't understand, what to what kind of English do i use ?
can you please answer these questions
To make it clear I have no problem with the story as you seem to have misinterpreted me as saying.
Make whatever story you want.