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Bobhanw

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Really loved the update and looking forward to chapter 3. Also the other dude really turned out like most people had assumed but even worse lol.
Tbh thought Alex would be a problem going forward in regards to the girls but after seeing in this update how every single one make it clear they have zero interest in him calmed me down lol unless he pulls something of i know he is only an ass on the Lea path but its going to be hard to trust him overall imo
 
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Almighty

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I know dev is doing it part time but come on, this update was already short as it was. Did Summer sex scene really had to be iterrupted? It would be better to finish this than add three variations of Lea's Titter video.
This the 2nd time he did that mess interrupt a sex scene. So yeah I can see Alice sex scene to be interrupted by her dad or brother.
 

k2ren

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damn those preview picture models are really really hot. are they custom made models? or standard e.g. DAZ models?
 
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sakuyas_mmaster

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I went with Alice, because it seemed to me she felt lonely. And I'll gladly take her on a date when we get to Dreamland. But I really want to bang Lea. That little succubus is is very alluring.
 

Darth Vengeant

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Too many branching paths. You will nearly have to play the game over from scratch 2-3 times every update. Would be nice to have a walkthrough that tells you how to unlock every scene without using the mod. I have never understood the point in making all the different paths and always found it frustrating since you cant just play the game once. A game is supposed to be fun, replaying it 3 times to get everything is NOT fun.

The continual slow screen transitions is driving me mad, but you are forced to keep it on because the dev puts the hidden cards in the middle of them. I cant stand screen transitions. This dev is doing all the things that annoy the hell out of me. lol

And to the people posting the patreon wallpapers in this thread all over the place, how about put them ALL in one post please? And in a .zip. Really hard to get them when they are spread out over 18 pages of posts.
 
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AL.d

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Too many branching paths. You will nearly have to play the game over from scratch 2-3 times every update. Would be nice to have a walkthrough that tells you how to unlock every scene without using the mod.
This updates a couple times a year with 5 mins updates. If it didn't have multiple paths, you couldn't even call it a tech demo as it is content-wise.
 

Maviarab

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Too many branching paths. You will nearly have to play the game over from scratch 2-3 times every update.
That's why you have multiple saves...not difficult.
And to the people posting the patreon wallpapers in this thread all over the place, how about put them ALL in one post please? And in a .zip. Really hard to get them when they are spread out over 18 pages of posts.
Oh the entitlement...boo hoo...gimme a few and I'll grab my violin to play while you whine.
 

xXwankerXx

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"hot" is pretty subjective (ie 99% of AVN pussies are bald and pretty much all look like same identical 10 pussies, just attached to different bodies, I prefer hairy ones if they are not lolis which have a good reason to be bald, hairy pussy really should be a new tag if it isn't already).
Everything YOU said there is very subjective too, and I dare you to go down on a woman, mature or young, with a hairy pussy. I assure you you'll start hating that shit too and join team fresh&clean down there, for obvious reasons.:sneaky:

I like that you can cheat on the girls, and the way Lea wants to fuck with you even knowing you are with Danielle is hot as fuck but this little update is dissapointing man... Why the hell not release the full chapter even if we need to wait more?
Leah's a slut. She herself admitted that on more than one occasion. Surely you don't expect sluts like her to be loyal to anyone, friend or not, do you ?? Don't know why, and I hope I'm wrong, but I suspect the game's going into psycho killer territory after what we've seen in this update, and there's three characters in danger of being killed... Danielle, Mei, Leah, or Summer.:cautious: Not really a fan of pointless killings in stories like this one, so I hope the dev reconsiders this.

The quality of the writing sure went down. It can be saved if what seems to have happened actually didn't happen. If it was done as a misdirection.
I didn't expect Summer to go all out. Dev started so well, but all the girls giving the pussy so easily is not good writing. Seems doki can't do "build up sexy scenes" before the actual intercourse takes place.
Yep, the quality of the storytelling was never anything worth praising, but the whole missing girl that probably got killed mystery and Mei's disappearance at the end of this update are two pretty interesting things to look forward to seeing how they unfold. I agree about Summer's sudden interest in the MC after friendzoning him her whole life for reasons. Dev should rewrite that part and make her have a crush on him like Mei does, otherwise he'll only manage to make her come off as a cheap bitch in heat only interested in riding dicks and nothing more than this, like Leah and Danielle.

We already have two hoes in the game, and we're about to have even more after they finally arrive in Dreamland, so there's no need to make Summer a token slut too for 'the plot' when it's obvious that she's an LI.
 

Maviarab

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Everything YOU said there is very subjective too, and I dare you to go down on a woman, mature or young, with a hairy pussy. I assure you you'll start hating that shit too and join team fresh&clean down there, for obvious reasons.:sneaky:



Leah's a slut. She herself admitted that on more than one occasion. Surely you don't expect sluts like her to be loyal to anyone, friend or not, do you ?? Don't know why, and I hope I'm wrong, but I suspect the game's going into psycho killer territory after what we've seen in this update, and there's three characters in danger of being killed... Danielle, Mei, Leah, or Summer.:cautious: Not really a fan of pointless killings in stories like this one, so I hope the dev reconsiders this.




Yep, the quality of the storytelling was never anything worth praising, but the whole missing girl that probably got killed mystery and Mei's disappearance at the end of this update are two pretty interesting things to look forward to seeing how they unfold. I agree about Summer's sudden interest in the MC after friendzoning him her whole life for reasons. Dev should rewrite that part and make her have a crush on him like Mei does, otherwise he'll only manage to make her come off as a cheap bitch in heat only interested in riding dicks and nothing more than this, like Leah and Danielle.

We already have two hoes in the game, and we're about to have even more after they finally arrive in Dreamland, so there's no need to make Summer a token slut too for 'the plot' when it's obvious that she's an LI.
Or the dev can just make the story he is making and we can accept it or not....
 
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xXwankerXx

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Quality renders and visuals aside the game is kinda lacking any direction story wise. And having these little bits of updates instead of a full chapter make it hard to follow it since I already forgot what was supposed to happen.
I don't know... I'd say it could turn out pretty good or very disappointing, considering everything we've seen so far, but we can't deny the fact that this whole mystery about the missing girl is a pretty good 'ingridient' for the story. Good or bad, the dev can always tweak the story and do damage control where it's needed, but my main concern is the slow release schedule. Not releasing a good amount of content that could justify the time spent on releasing it after a few months will eventually lead to disappointment and subscribers dropping their support, which means a certain abandoned tag in most cases, hopefully, not in ours.

Also why bother making these lewd scenes if we are going to be cock blocked over and over again? I remember it happening once or twice before and now this tired joke is no longer funny nor it serves any purpose and wastes everyone's time.
Have to agree. There's no point in rushing things to get to the 'good stuff', especially not with an LI like Summer. Nobody likes to be blue balled like that. The only thing a stunt like this will 'accomplish' is to piss ppl off and make them cancel their pledges. Even tho it was logical to expect it, I was pretty disappointed by the blue balling with Mei too, but we could pretend that was done to emphasize how pure and innocent she is when it comes to sex... there was no need for another annoying teasing scene with Summer too when we could've made more progress with her or Alice for a more believable build up.

You got something wrong, she did not fuck him..... she would but could not. So she is a pure virgin and I assume, you both have nothing in common in that department.
I was not questioning it, I was saying there is no proof she ever fucked, so I say, she is a virgin until proofen otherwise!
Not a big fan of virgins like Mei myself, but Leah and pure don't belong in the same sentence, ffs. I bet if you tried to type that shit on your phone or tablet, even the damn autocorrect function wouldn't let you post it.:ROFLMAO: She's as pure as Aliza Jane was after she got fucked by 7 basketball players and swallowed their nuts like they were a glass of milk for breakfast and ALL the other dudes who fucked her on camera for her OnlyFans. But then again, she herself admitted she's pretty fucked in the head, so maybe I exaggerated a lil with the comparison, but I'm sure you get the point.
 

xXwankerXx

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I wouldn’t listen to these moans of the sultans of pixel harems about a weak MC. As usual, they overreact and their palms become sweaty when a pixel girl shows even the slightest hint of her own will and dares to have her own motives. If the girl is not completely submissive, these mighty sultans will feel like being cucked.
Only problem here is, the 'sultans' are right. I mean, the MC's a pretty decent-looking fit dude with a male pornstar dick that keeps bitching about a bitch who dumped him, when he could've just fucked around to his dick's content and only gotten into another relationship when or IF he found a woman worth of getting his affection.

He's awkward asf when 'flirting' or whatever you wanna call what he's doing when talking to the girls, and he acted pretty submissive when Leah told him she's usually in control in bed, so these things kinda make him a submissive whiny idiot, not a decent MC that should be drowning in pussy instead of whining about some slut who kicked his ass to the curb. Did you really pay attention to the story, or you just pressed the CTRL button for a quick 'read' ??:unsure:

Or the dev can just make the story he is making and we can accept it or not....
Never said he couldn't do that. On the contrary, it's what I'd encourage him to do, if the dev asked for my advice, but writing the story how Dokiden thinks it's best doesn't automatically make it perfect, and that's where feedback comes in handy allowing him to select which ideas he think suit his vision of the story best and which can be ignored.

Also the other dude really turned out like most people had assumed but even worse lol.
It wasn't that much of a mystery that he's responsible for that girl's disappearance, but I admit I was pretty shocked to find out the lunatic actually killed the poor missing girl, Abigail. Wouldn't be shocked if he killed his sweet love, Rose, too, cuz her friend supposedly corrupted her mind probably by keeping her away from an insane dork like him.:FacePalm: Thought he just kidnapped them both for his sick idea of having fun and still kept them locked up in some freaky ass sex dungeon or something, but this insane virgin creep needs to die ASAP... in a very, very Saw-level brutal way for what he did. Sure hope the dev agrees.
 
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