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Oh . . . alright . . . thanks for sharing?
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- Apr 2, 2018
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Game has potential, but the plot could be slightly better imo (pacing at the beginning and MC's actions before we reach the city feel off to me, changes between scenes seem somewhat jarring), and I swear everytime MC starts with a gf in any game it's always the ugliest girl in the game (or at least the one I find least attractive). Shame that to see nicer content (and officer Wayne in action) we have to disobey, I hope that hard femdom will also be possible even if MC obeys his betters. And I hope for more officer Wayne in a game (hopefully she can replace Sarah as MC's owner 
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In any case I rather liked what I've seen and I wish the dev all the luck.
).In any case I rather liked what I've seen and I wish the dev all the luck.
- Apr 29, 2018
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- Mar 9, 2022
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Thanks for the feedback Mister_M!Game has potential, but the plot could be slightly better imo (pacing at the beginning and MC's actions before we reach the city feel off to me, changes between scenes seem somewhat jarring), and I swear everytime MC starts with a gf in any game it's always the ugliest girl in the game (or at least the one I find least attractive). Shame that to see nicer content (and officer Wayne in action) we have to disobey, I hope that hard femdom will also be possible even if MC obeys his betters. And I hope for more officer Wayne in a game (hopefully she can replace Sarah as MC's owner
In any case I rather liked what I've seen and I wish the dev all the luck.
I'm aiming to make this game the best experience for you guys that I can. That said, could you get a bit more into detail:
When you say "pacing feels off" - Are you talking about writing or images? Can you put the finger in, which particular scenes or story parts feel off for you? Please feel free to IM as well, if you like.
I'm not going to argue about beauty standards but expect Officer Wayne to be back for more trouble.
I usually lurk, but since you asked for feedback, here is mine:
-dialogues are decent. I didn't find any major problems there. Maybe some better pacing down the line, but for a Beta-version it is more than good enough.
-I applaud the fact that you didn't use the usual "cookie-cutter" backgrounds and models.
-there is just enough of a hint of something more sinister to the therapist to make me wonder if that would go anywhere. keeps the interest going.
-the sex scenes are good. There seems to be enough variety there to keep us going.
Overall, a much better version 0.1 than most I have seen. Keep up the good work.
-dialogues are decent. I didn't find any major problems there. Maybe some better pacing down the line, but for a Beta-version it is more than good enough.
-I applaud the fact that you didn't use the usual "cookie-cutter" backgrounds and models.
-there is just enough of a hint of something more sinister to the therapist to make me wonder if that would go anywhere. keeps the interest going.
-the sex scenes are good. There seems to be enough variety there to keep us going.
Overall, a much better version 0.1 than most I have seen. Keep up the good work.
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Thank you, Ano Nymous. I will take the pacing issue to heart. Can you give me any hint, what pacing would have a better feel?
- Mar 9, 2022
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In what measure do you quantify "foot stuff"? Feet?
Seriously, I have no clue. Right now I am drafting the road map to get a feeling for the overall size, the finished game should have. That said, one very likely idea for the next step might be right up your street. Hope you get there on foot.
- Mar 9, 2022
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Thank you for taking the trouble to letting us know. We await your game with interest.
- Apr 2, 2018
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Thanks for the feedback Mister_M!
I'm aiming to make this game the best experience for you guys that I can. That said, could you get a bit more into detail:
When you say "pacing feels off" - Are you talking about writing or images? Can you put the finger in, which particular scenes or story parts feel off for you? Please feel free to IM as well, if you like.
I'm not going to argue about beauty standards but expect Officer Wayne to be back for more trouble.
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For instance, at the very start of the game, give us a short scene or two with the girlfriend where we see MC's daily life. That way, we could get a feel for what she's like under normal circumstances and what she's like in bed, and why he doesn't want their relationship to end.
- Mar 9, 2022
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Thank you Mister M! That helped a lot. The rest of the game will feel pretty different from the introduction but based on your feedback I absolutely consider fleshing out the prologue! Nothing to be sorry about, that was just the kind of input I needed and asked for
PS: That Lady is positively hot. I can't see a reason why she wouldn't show her face again
- Mar 9, 2022
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Thanks Ano Nymous. I think you and Mister M are pretty much on the same page there. I come to think our MC need some background to his Hows and Whys
- Sep 3, 2018
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Probably because it helps establish a universe when you can have both a thrilling story and extreme sex acts.
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Ah yes a universe where half of the population is treated like subhuman beings helps with that?, don't get me wrong the reverse wouldn't be better either. Alot of people seem to think dom sub is just the dom abusing/treating the sub like shit.