HTML Dune – Breeding a Dynasty [v0.1.1] [lmno]

[Deleted member 5582187]

"Lady Jessica" looks like a twenty year old girl.

That's because AICG can only draw like three different women, and they're all in their twenties. Other than that it's just shifting hair colors.

 

[degenerado]

Shani and the fremen are supposed to be at least lightskin/black. Why not?

 

[megaloser]

Very impressive for an AICG game. Writing is good with minimal grammar issues, but I would love it if the speakers had their lines color coded during conversations to help break up the walls of text. I also agree with some of the critiques on Lady Jessica looking too young. She doesn't need much, but it would better imo if she looked mid 30s, instead of how she looks now.

 

[name]

Not sure you've seen this already be there is an optional lewd scene hidden away in dialogue in the current chapter. But yes, the plan is to have more optional scenes later down the line.

i've seen the Revered Mother and game over scenes, which seemed like hidden easter egg scenes, but it's definitely possible i missed something

 

[Euron13]

I’m putting it out into the cosmos... I hope we breed the Reverend Mother.

 

[battleguy]

Yes Yes Yes

 

[reynold.biplane]

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Awesome. I am always glad to meet like minded people.

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[Dummy256]

Is there a possibility that Paul will somehow alter the canon timeline and himself becomes Alia's father instead of Leto? Degenerate side of me would scream of excitement.

 

[jetama]

Awesome first release, well done, really. As a fan of the books I can appreciate your dedication to want to stay true to the canon, and even moreso appreciate your skills as a writer. I want to ask if moving forward you can add hotkeys to move onto the next page/dialogue (A and D for left and right) like in College Daze?

Definitely makes it easier for us one handed players...

 

[Kirie]

Keep on going.
Deliver the prophecy of Hadarah's seed to the universe.
That. Is. The Mission!

 

[reynold.biplane]

Is there a possibility that Paul will somehow alter the canon timeline and himself becomes Alia's father instead of Leto? Degenerate side of me would scream of excitement.

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Awesome first release, well done, really. As a fan of the books I can appreciate your dedication to want to stay true to the canon, and even moreso appreciate your skills as a writer. I want to ask if moving forward you can add hotkeys to move onto the next page/dialogue (A and D for left and right) like in College Daze?

Definitely makes it easier for us one handed players...

Thanks!
Hmm, I assume you mean left-handed specifically, because technically the game is one-handed. It only requires the mouse.
Myself, I have mastered the art of ambidextrous wanking a long time ago, but I understand not everyone can do that.
I guess hotkeys could work during scenes, but you would always need the mouse to navigate dialogues.

 

[lmno]

Awesome first release, well done, really. As a fan of the books I can appreciate your dedication to want to stay true to the canon, and even moreso appreciate your skills as a writer. I want to ask if moving forward you can add hotkeys to move onto the next page/dialogue (A and D for left and right) like in College Daze?

Definitely makes it easier for us one handed players...

Thanks for your feedback! It is really appreciated by reynold and I. With regards to hotkeys, I can look into adding some kind of similar feature but I will get back to you on that.

 

[lmno]

Is there a possibility that Paul will somehow alter the canon timeline and himself becomes Alia's father instead of Leto? Degenerate side of me would scream of excitement.

It is a possibility we were looking into. I guess you'll just have to wait and see...

 

[lmno]

Are you guys planning to stick with HTML throughout development? In my experience, longer or more complicated games can easily become a buggy mess in HTML, and it seems like this game is meant to be both long and complicated. Are you planning to move to another engine eventually, or break it up into smaller games to keep it playable as the story becomes more and more unwieldy?

My main focus will be finishing this game using HTML/Twine as that's what I'm used to and I have experience with it. If we moved to a different engine I would have to learn more and this would only add to development time. I would consider looking into it once the game is complete but for now we are sticking with HTML.

 

[KingsRaiden]

Wasn't there another game like this one here? Or was that my imagination?

Yes, Beyond the Dune, its linked in an earlier post on this thread.

 

[Derpsel]

Absolutely love the Dune book, hope this takes off.

 

[Nobody Cares]

You think so? I haven't read his later works (I stopped after God Emperor), but I did get the impression that he got a little bit more perverted with age.

Suffice to say the rumors are true

 

[walker188]

Frank Herbert would be proud.

 

[lmno]

Here's a sample image for the new poll I just posted