The game has potential, it need a couple things fixed though. When you choose english as your language, all the text should be in english not defaulting back to spanish. The MC being able to be named by the player is a better idea, since that always gives the player a sense of being more immersed in the character. Last but definitely not least, there either needs to be a text box added or better text characters used.
Storywise the game is doing ok, but needs a little more time to be fleshed out, there is too many time skips, and the story is rather abrupt, reminds me of the 80's soap opera's twisting narrative. There is a good story waiting to come out with some polish, and I hope the authour gets to write it.