Others E-Thots: A NTR Game Set in a 100% PC Interface [Ch. 2 v2.4] [Archipote]

[AluryFreighn]

Not gonna lie. This game is kinda fun. It's got good ideas and a pretty good set up. It is REALLY difficult to care about Avar after like 3 conversations though. I don't think I've met a character more insufferable even as an antagonist of a porn game. 100% get that some people might like that but like holy shit it is difficult to keep playing. I got to Morg calling him an asshole and seeming fed up with him and I was stoked to see that. I didn't wanna go any further because I felt like the next thing I was gonna read was her coming to say sorry to him the next day where he'll then be like "Whatever, stupid dumb bitch. Make me a sandwich". I probably will continue to play the game once more updates come out but I'm super hopeful that Avar softens up or dialogue options to make him less of a worthless human being is implemented or something. It is a really good game and I think it's awesome that something is trying to be different in a sea of rpgmaker scene collectors and renpy VNs that never make it past version 0.2. It's just unfortunate for a HUGE ntr fan like me that an ntr game trying to actually be unique just has maybe the worst main character I've ever seen.

Don't take this too harshly though. I'm a big fan of just full on wimps for main characters so I might just be overly critical of this kind of character. I'm sure there are lots of people who will still like it even if he stays the same the entire game.

 

[archipote]

Not gonna lie. This game is kinda fun. It's got good ideas and a pretty good set up. It is REALLY difficult to care about Avar after like 3 conversations though. I don't think I've met a character more insufferable even as an antagonist of a porn game. 100% get that some people might like that but like holy shit it is difficult to keep playing. I got to Morg calling him an asshole and seeming fed up with him and I was stoked to see that. I didn't wanna go any further because I felt like the next thing I was gonna read was her coming to say sorry to him the next day where he'll then be like "Whatever, stupid dumb bitch. Make me a sandwich". I probably will continue to play the game once more updates come out but I'm super hopeful that Avar softens up or dialogue options to make him less of a worthless human being is implemented or something. It is a really good game and I think it's awesome that something is trying to be different in a sea of rpgmaker scene collectors and renpy VNs that never make it past version 0.2. It's just unfortunate for a HUGE ntr fan like me that an ntr game trying to actually be unique just has maybe the worst main character I've ever seen.

Don't take this too harshly though. I'm a big fan of just full on wimps for main characters so I might just be overly critical of this kind of character. I'm sure there are lots of people who will still like it even if he stays the same the entire game.

Totally understand, if you're played the first version you might want to download the one released today, with a rewritten, less harsh MC.

The overall idea was (and still is) to have Avar evolve in contact with Morgane, who softens him, while continuing a parallel NTR storyline. We already understand this in the first release at the end, but with the rewritten version it's much more noticeable, more quickly.

I hope you'll be able to give the game another chance, either in this update or in the next one. And thanks for your kind words !

 

[LewdAsterisk]

Maybe they're taking the degenerate discord user roleplay too far lol

nah, I understand that Morgane and Avar can be flawed characters that change over the course of the story, but I also don't know if I would really want to read comments like the ones in the first version throughout the entire game, even if watching an asshole MC get cucked would've been satisfying. Having Avar's attitude push the three women away could be interesting too though.

Excited to try the patreon version though, and can't wait until the cheating and NTR ramps up in future releases!

 

[ThatGuyisDifferent]

Yep don't worry, and tbh the "netorare" (cheating) is actually avoidable, as you can literally block any man talking to Morgane via Despot, just like in Discord.

But the fact that your GF and your sisters get groped, touched, and much more soon enough through shows you send them in, is unavoidable.
And since it's the heart of the game in a way, that's unlikely to change, even though I completely understand that it bothers a large proportion of players who don't appreciate NTR, which is an opinion I absolutely respect.


So anyway, I'll see you in two updates then my friend!

Just to clarify further, this is still the plan for the future right? I'm not a big fan of NTR if i'm the character its happening too, but I am a fan of it if i'm doing it to someone else's girl. I don't mind groping, touching, and whatever else happening to them though. I just want to be able to avoid the physical act of cheating on me lol. Other than that, amazing game and I put a few bucks for you on your Patreon! Good luck!

 

[archipote]

Just to clarify further, this is still the plan for the future right? I'm not a big fan of NTR if i'm the character its happening too, but I am a fan of it if i'm doing it to someone else's girl. I don't mind groping, touching, and whatever else happening to them though. I just want to be able to avoid the physical act of cheating on me lol. Other than that, amazing game and I put a few bucks for you on your Patreon! Good luck!

Really glad to hear that mate, and thanks for your support !

And yep, that's still the plan. You will get cheated on only if you let it happen.

So if you're only here for the romance and scenes, and don't mind your girls getting touched and more following an order you gave them, the there's plenty to enjoy down this road too !

 

[Arkade]

But if it is avoidable... for those who want to see it- or are not bothered by it either way(Don't think most people self-insert and more just like the drama that can come in such plots)-.. It should then be able to get rather extreme.. maybe rough even. Not expecting it to go too far but if a girl does get swept off her feet by some guy- it doesn't seem too realistic she would stay working at a brothel for some asshole. There could be "bad ends" for the final choices of such things where a girl leaves but considering the cards any bad end would likely be near the end of the game anyway so instead of having a reload back to before you made the choice that warned you of a game over-... maybe ending/post-credit stuff could show what happened instead?.. That is if you plan to have an actual end and not just an infinite loop of days until you exhaust all cards and stop playing on your own.

 

[archipote]

But if it is avoidable... for those who want to see it- or are not bothered by it either way(Don't think most people self-insert and more just like the drama that can come in such plots)-.. It should then be able to get rather extreme.. maybe rough even. Not expecting it to go too far but if a girl does get swept off her feet by some guy- it doesn't seem too realistic she would stay working at a brothel for some asshole. There could be "bad ends" for the final choices of such things where a girl leaves but considering the cards any bad end would likely be near the end of the game anyway so instead of having a reload back to before you made the choice that warned you of a game over-... maybe ending/post-credit stuff could show what happened instead?.. That is if you plan to have an actual end and not just an infinite loop of days until you exhaust all cards and stop playing on your own.

There's multiple endings planned, but i'm not a big fan of bad ends. I prefer the endings that you chose, which can be triggered by the stats of the different girls, the cheating stats, the career you got for each girls, and more things that's coming with future updates

 

[Dr45]

To be honest, a lot of people bringed it up, and it upset me because it's a slipped in one, it was meant to be changed.
That was one of the first dialogue written here.

I'll work on a "smoothen up edition" in priority to make the MC less of an asshole and modify bits of dialogues like this one.

I'm sorry that it offended you, and i hope you'll give the game a second chance when the updated version will be out, soon.

Honestly, I kind liked the fact all of these people were terrible and the MC was a total dingus through and through. It's a but sad to see that getting watered down.

 

[JackoLant]

Honestly, I kind liked the fact all of these people were terrible and the MC was a total dingus through and through. It's a but sad to see that getting watered down.

Same for me. I didn't like the characters as people but they made the game more fun, funnier, and a general more interesting thing to play. Without them being assholes I imagine it will be kinda plain.

 

[Arkade]

The changes were very minor- Avar is still an asshole and has his personality- dev isn't trying to make him a nice guy but I think the intention is to at least smooth things with Morgane which would actually give them a relationship that was more than abusive master and slave- his interactions with sisters might barely go through any changes. He's not going to be some redeemable unlikely hero i'm sure..

 

[archipote]

The changes were very minor- Avar is still an asshole and has his personality- dev isn't trying to make him a nice guy but I think the intention is to at least smooth things with Morgane which would actually give them a relationship that was more than abusive master and slave- his interactions with sisters might barely go through any changes. He's not going to be some redeemable unlikely hero i'm sure..

Yep, you got it right !

 

[AluryFreighn]

Totally understand, if you're played the first version you might want to download the one released today, with a rewritten, less harsh MC.

The overall idea was (and still is) to have Avar evolve in contact with Morgane, who softens him, while continuing a parallel NTR storyline. We already understand this in the first release at the end, but with the rewritten version it's much more noticeable, more quickly.

I hope you'll be able to give the game another chance, either in this update or in the next one. And thanks for your kind words !

I will probably check out the update soon. I'm happy to hear that it's at least toned down a little and even if it's not perfect or just isn't exactly my cup of tea I'll continue to check back in on this one. I don't like writing things off super early and this game has barely even started it looks like. Excited to see things move forward and excited to see the way the characters change, too.

 

[Unseal]

How do I get past the last message from Lefey? After intitial conversation with her, I get 3 more DMs and I am only able to read 2 of them. The DM from Lefey shows up in Last Messages recieved column but when opening the DM is says End of Discussion. Stuck here

 

[archipote]

How do I get past the last message from Lefey? After intitial conversation with her, I get 3 more DMs and I am only able to read 2 of them. The DM from Lefey shows up in Last Messages recieved column but when opening the DM is says End of Discussion. Stuck here

sounds like a bug to me, can you send me a screenshot of your last discussion with her + the notifications pannel ?

 

[Envoye]

I think, I'm too stupid to understand this type of gameplay. Is there any or only boring typing? The safes are not working.

 

[archipote]

I think, I'm too stupid to understand this type of gameplay. Is there any or only boring typing? The safes are not working.

I'm sorry, is there any what ?
The current gemaplay loop is despot discussions Job gameplay with a "Reigns" type mini-game where you can choose through a ton of choices to unlock content, such as shows, discussions, "tweets" etc.

 

[kazzulicious]

If this release which ends with the start of the ntr is chapter 1, how many chapters are planned?
Also is there any planned ntr for the siblings where they become distant with mc?
I really look forward to future releases, this has great potential!

 

[Altercationz666]

Wow this is surprisingly good. At first glance looking at the screenshots it seemed a bit gimmicky but after playing it, I found it really fun. The job system is something new, at least to me it was. Light hearted cheating where the girl is actually enjoying what she's doing instead of being blackmailed, raped nd molested. And good models. Looking forward to this.

 

[archipote]

If this release which ends with the start of the ntr is chapter 1, how many chapters are planned?
Also is there any planned ntr for the siblings where they become distant with mc?
I really look forward to future releases, this has great potential!

The NTR will be a bit different here, so i can't assure that the siblings will become distant with the MC, but if you're seeking for a heart breaking NTR there might be some options added in the future
And i currently don't know how many chapters are planned, but chapter 2 will be far bigger than chapter 1 imo (and will be released in multiple updates)

Wow this is surprisingly good. At first glance looking at the screenshots it seemed a bit gimmicky but after playing it, I found it really fun. The job system is something new, at least to me it was. Light hearted cheating where the girl is actually enjoying what she's doing instead of being blackmailed, raped nd molested. And good models. Looking forward to this.

Really glad that you enjoyed the game, hope you'll enjoy the future chapters too !

 

[Vince_Tanka]

missing AI art TAG