Some stuff
Pro
- good dialogue, you got the "teens trying to be edgy" well, a tad too much (since imo they start already reaaally sex obsessed) but oh well that's still fine. I'd say try to vary though, there need to be some up and downs in snarkiness for it to be fun, some honesty and normalcy to balance things out, but maybe that's just me...
- The emojis and discord thing are cute, along with the overall interface.
- The way the story is told is interesting and pretty cool, albeit maybe needing at least some VN like intro imo just to know who is who, it's a little hard at the start.
Con/suggestions
- The mc is honestly insufferable at the start, even if this is supposed to be the less asshole version. I think you can make him nicer without being less interesting. Or at least tone down the rudeness in favour of more innocent quips. Or simply having him mature and actually behave like a character in love at some point.
- The videos/hoot things go sexy very fast, keep it slow lol. Why not start with some clothed action before nude kissing?
- I agree with
Sieglinnde : if you wanted to go to an good ntr/erotic feel, IMO you shouldn't make it like a scheme fully orchestrated by the mc's sister and him, and even less both watching and commenting, it completely waters down the idea of her corruption/ntr behind his back. Maybe keep it like that until last scene then make a simple event where both think she's not interested anymore, she changes her password, and they stop looking, trusting her, but add a ghost/magical app for the player only so we can see what's going behind the back of the mc? This horny dickpic dude is a good idea though.
- Allow to zoom for the discord app, I use a 4k monitor and it needs maybe 25-50% zoom to be really nice. Especially as this is where the majority of the story is + being able to properly see emojis.
- Please decouple music from sfx, I listen to my own music when playing the game and I don't want to mute the whole game.
- Allow saving with an already existing name without having to enter a new name.
- Allow saving with a premade name when it's empty (for example the date yyyy-mm-dd-hh-mm-ss)
- Maybe create an autosave every new day?
- Allow to load without closing the game and relaunching it.
- Maybe add a counter for day somewhere (DAY X).
- You probably thought of that but add more gacha like reward stuff in your card game, for example giving credit so you can get perks, wallpapers, etc. It's more fun than just unlocking dialogues.