I am really thankful for the feedback, I will work on a few things and this was the point of the Demo, so I can see the opinions and make a few changes before going for the game as it should be.
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I was also wondering if you could tell us about planned tags for future content.
Creampies, pregnancy or other stuff, what will and will not be introduced during the development.
Creampies, pregnancy or other stuff, what will and will not be introduced during the development.
Yeah. The adopted mother waking up the main character made me feel like she was a mom. That scene shows SOOOO much potential. She looks good overall, and here a thicker character makes sense being in her late 30's early 40's. Saying that I still think the main character needs to be fleshed out in that scene. Why is he so fit but is a gamer? I personally would change the reason he stayed up so late was football practice. That football status would also explain why he has so much confidence.Damn was there ANYTHING you liked?
Decent start.
Also I like that the caretaker is an older sister and not just slotted into the 'mom' role.
Also I like that the caretaker is an older sister and not just slotted into the 'mom' role.
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i remember back when i was 12 there was a girl in the grade below who grew giant breasts like out of nowhere... she must have been atleast a C and at only 10-11(none of the female teachers/staff at school stacked up to her atleast), she was a bit short too so until she gained some height like a year+ later she looked kinda funny when she came bouncing, she was fit back then too so it was like every little bit of fat she took in poured right into her chest and made her body to chest ratio look very disproportional.
i also remember flipping past the ricki lake show back in the 90s and seeing supposedly 13-15yo girls who looked like 25yo trailer trash. some even looked older than their moms that where with them
tl;dr... girls come in all shapes and sizes and some fill out very early on life and others later
First i would like to take the time to say --- someone is going to make alots of girls happier ?? Huh... Nop comes with an E. But besides alot of weird sentences that you have to read over again. (needs alot of work) Thank god different Actors!!! Kudos on that. and my SIS -- The Nipples!!!
Thank god different Actors!!! Kudos on that. and my SIS -- The Nipples!!! 
- Dec 23, 2017
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I will say this and then drop the subject.
A 15 year old with DD tits who isn't fat is SUPPER RARE. Is it possible? Yes. If you are implying that it is common for 15 year olds to have tits this big, then I am here to tell you that you are objectively wrong. Most people in the world on average don't have big tits. America being an exception but that is more due to obesity. So I think it's unrealistic to have every teenager have big breasts. Thing is I wouldn't complain if it was just one character, but every character has the same body.
I get that this is a style choice, but I am saying for me, that style choice makes me less interested in the game. Others will like the game more with that style, and the creator has to decide who he wants to please. There is no right or wrong choice.
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"is a game about the MC (Main Character) that lost his parents when he was younger and now is living with his 2 friends that are daughters from his mom's best friend. The older girl is Claire and is more strict and there is Violet the younger one which is more daring."
Sounds original. I'll pass.
Sounds original. I'll pass.
- May 10, 2018
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just be happy you are getting free games from a pirate site...her breasts are not abnormally large like many games..they are well within the range 18 year(which we have to assume is her age due to the game needing to be "legal" everywhere) olds would have..and being from Canada..in the humongous city of Toronto..i normally see large breasted 18-20 year olds walking around in tiny tops in the summer...and Canada is one of the lowest number of breast enhancement countries around..most of it is natural..and they are usually slim...they are of course not the majority..but they are common enough to not cause a ruckus among the serfs...i also lived in the U.S for 7 years..and the huge boobed gals i saw mostly were chubby..LOL...(Kentucky is made of gravy and bisquits..true story)
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Quantum Realm boxers...they shrink when the need is there..look for a tiny speck on his peepee..those are his boxers
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In all honesty i think the first thought behind the concept of this "Game" wasn't if the story would make sense but more "What is the minimal amount of effort i would have to put into this to get patreon subs"
Had a girl in my class that was both, she was fat when puberty set in, grew huge tits, then the tits gave her confidence to slim up, turned into a huge-titted babe at 15, though her friend and mom was also big in the chest department. Her friend was always slim, but got B+ cups around the same time out of nowhere at 14, that just grew in what seemed a cup size a year. Third girl in the class didn't get a lot in the chest department, being a sporty tomboy, but got an ass more amazing in terms of proprotion to the rest of her than essentially any I've seen since outside of plastic surgery.
Yes I said third girl, because there was only three girls in my class, because I come from a pissant island (most mountainous island in the northern hemisphere compared to its size = it's a rock sticking out of the ocean) in northern norway, and there were seven students total in the class, five in the class after us (no girls), and just two students in that next class, one a girl (unsurprisingly, the school shut down a couple of years later). And that one girl two classes down had tits bigger than either one of the big-titted girls in my class, even when she was younger than them, and like the second girl she was always slim and practially elfin until she looked like a barbie girl.
That's northern Norway for you, just a few stragglers eking out an existence clinging to the side of a mountain, of course you'd have some damn good genes around then.
(Not denying it isn't super rare, just disputing the "only fat" and America specifically being an exception.)
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* When entering the name, it might be a god idea to specify that ten is the maximum number of characters
* The dialogue is a little stilted, but mostly fine.
* Maybe a little more furniture in the kitchen.
* Violet looks a little young.
* I like Violet
* The banter between the MC and Violet would work better if the English was better. It jut feels forced.
* It would be good to shift aro-und the models' poses more frequently.
Overall not terrible, but I'm not that excited about it either. The stilted English hurts it a lot, alo[ng with it's similarity to so many other games. I've seen much worse, but wee'll see how this plays out.
* The dialogue is a little stilted, but mostly fine.
* Maybe a little more furniture in the kitchen.
* Violet looks a little young.
* I like Violet
* The banter between the MC and Violet would work better if the English was better. It jut feels forced.
* It would be good to shift aro-und the models' poses more frequently.
Overall not terrible, but I'm not that excited about it either. The stilted English hurts it a lot, alo[ng with it's similarity to so many other games. I've seen much worse, but wee'll see how this plays out.