VN Ren'Py Abandoned E.X.P.E.L.L.E.D [v0.1.4] [HopeEsth]

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spooge_nugget

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I didn't like the little sister's areolas, too large it doesn't look cute or pretty at all. Not sure "making her stand out" is better than having actual pretty titties in a porn game. Her pretty face already does that very well.
Peoples tastes differ. I personally quite like them like that and you don't see it too often/at all in these games. My preference is pinkish or quite pale in colour nipples/areolas, mid to large sized areolas and natural - or in games, natural looking - breasts.
Breast size isn't overly important to me, but I'm not too fond of the extremes (i.e. stupidly big or completely flat)
I'm not too fond of the mosquito bite looking nipples/areolas either.
 

dreas

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not sure if anyone has brought this up yet but figured I would bring it to the dev attention as its a simply mistake. So I like testing games and with this I looked at the stats while playing it and they don't seem to be working correctly. The new stat given seems not to add but to replace the old number for example the shower scene with violet. If you do the lust route of 'say something' it brings your stat back down to 1 but then if you pick 'tease her' it brings it up to 3. might just be the vv I use that's the issue here (though its never had an issue like that before) but I would suggest dev takes a look to make sure, as though it doesn't seem to effect the game much at the moment if he plans branching paths based on stats for each character this will be an issue.

O and on the issue of body shape and development are they both meant to be in final year of high school so you know 18ys old. Maybe it just where i grew up but if i compared violet to the girls i new at 18 though its been a while they where much more developed then her and curved. The game does say 'you will be in collage next year or at a job' so i think for an 18/19 yr old her proportions are fine
 
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hopesth

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Apr 5, 2019
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not sure if anyone has brought this up yet but figured I would bring it to the dev attention as its a simply mistake. So I like testing games and with this I looked at the stats while playing it and they don't seem to be working correctly. The new stat given seems not to add but to replace the old number for example the shower scene with violet. If you do the lust route of 'say something' it brings your stat back down to 1 but then if you pick 'tease her' it brings it up to 3. might just be the vv I use that's the issue here (though its never had an issue like that before) but I would suggest dev takes a look to make sure, as though it doesn't seem to effect the game much at the moment if he plans branching paths based on stats for each character this will be an issue.

O and on the issue of body shape and development are they both meant to be in final year of high school so you know 18ys old. Maybe it just where i grew up but if i compared violet to the girls i new at 18 though its been a while they where much more developed then her and curved. The game does say 'you will be in collage next year or at a job' so i think for an 18/19 yr old her proportions are fine
Thanks for your feedback and yes about the stats I already fixed it for the next release, thankfully you and others already pointed this mistake, since it's a demo, most of the code will be reworked since it isn't so long for now.
Thanks again for the feedback
 

seamanq

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The game is good overall and I look forward to the next installment. I wanted to let you know about a continuity break introduced in the last release.

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hopesth

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The game is good overall and I look forward to the next installment. I wanted to let you know about a continuity break introduced in the last release.

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I am sorry for this, I was testing a few things and I forgot to put the sharp symbol to make it into a comment and not appear in-game. I am already fixing and uploading the version without this bug. Thank you for pointing it out.
 

seamanq

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I am sorry for this, I was testing a few things and I forgot to put the sharp symbol to make it into a comment and not appear in-game. I am already fixing and uploading the version without this bug. Thank you for pointing it out.
No worries, I thought you might find the comment useful. Thank you.
 
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hopesth

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The game is good overall and I look forward to the next installment. I wanted to let you know about a continuity break introduced in the last release.

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If anyone else has experienced or noticed this minor error, I already uploaded a new version fixing this which can be download from the following link, I also asked the mods to update the thread. Again, I am really sorry for this error. I wish you all a good night.
 

RoadWulf

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Two things: It's almost never a good idea to put your point system numbers visible in a choice. It's basically like giving people the ability to see whatever path they want, and most playing a porn game will choose the L points just to see what happens.

Second, is it me or did you completely dissolve that system in this update? There wasn't a single choice other than the "Talk to Angel" choice and neither had a point value attached to it.

A good example would have been the Teacher scene. He could have been given the choice to knock before opening the door (R) or simply enter and see her masturbating (L) then back out and knock.

On another topic, I get the brother and sister are extremely close and shared their first kiss, but you made it seem like their relationship was completely platonic after that up to the game start. There is no way she wouldn't get pissed off about him trying to get a view of her tits in the shower. That's an example of how hidden stats could be better. Giver her the towel would be +R, teasing her would be -R not +L.

Just a few thoughts. Other than that it's a nice game, though some of the scenes feel too short.
 
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Crosaith.

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Two things: It's almost never a good idea to put your point system numbers visible in a choice. It's basically like giving people the ability to see whatever path they want, and most playing a porn game will choose the L points just to see what happens..
Nah, please don't hide the point system values. Optional is fine, but don't hide them. If you do, this'll become one of those games that requires a guide.

That being said, the game looks very promising. Characters look nice and I'm liking the tags. ^_^

hopesth We're a demanding bunch(including me). It's fine to turn down our ideas and stick to your vision.
 
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BigIrishLug

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Saw the story line I was sure, why not give it a go and then I saw the preview pictures and my little caged O.C.D. popped out and yelled "Fit Control! Clothing Smoothers! Good God Mate!" and stopped me right there. Sorry.
 
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