VN Ren'Py Abandoned E.X.P.E.L.L.E.D [v0.1.4] [HopeEsth]

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bsjfan69

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I don't have high standards for games. But this has to be the most generic 3d incest porn game I've seen. All girls trying to have sex with you for no reason, grainy 3d renders using stock clothes, 0.1 release with little content and grammar and punctuation errors all over the place...
 

lorddarkam

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i never use incest patch when author give a plot that look like ohhh "make sense this boy living with these people then" since his parets are dead its ok
 

HowlingCurve

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I don't have high standards for games. But this has to be the most generic 3d incest porn game I've seen. All girls trying to have sex with you for no reason, grainy 3d renders using stock clothes, 0.1 release with little content and grammar and punctuation errors all over the place...
I have started proof reading the script so hopefully I can catch the spelling and grammatical errors before each release, if you guys find anything that I've missed you can direct those comments towards me because the dev has more important things to care of. I in no way have any input towards the direction of the project so please don't ask me to make suggestions.
 
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Adoringfan

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Game uses a lot of tropes and needs some serious help with the engrish.
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Also what's up with sleeping with the lights on, with no covers and that pose... was way too funny.
Wtf is up with disappearing shorts and breaking the 4th wall to justify it seems sloppy.
 

hopesth

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Apr 5, 2019
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Two things: It's almost never a good idea to put your point system numbers visible in a choice. It's basically like giving people the ability to see whatever path they want, and most playing a porn game will choose the L points just to see what happens.

Second, is it me or did you completely dissolve that system in this update? There wasn't a single choice other than the "Talk to Angel" choice and neither had a point value attached to it.

A good example would have been the Teacher scene. He could have been given the choice to knock before opening the door (R) or simply enter and see her masturbating (L) then back out and knock.

On another topic, I get the brother and sister are extremely close and shared their first kiss, but you made it seem like their relationship was completely platonic after that up to the game start. There is no way she wouldn't get pissed off about him trying to get a view of her tits in the shower. That's an example of how hidden stats could be better. Giver her the towel would be +R, teasing her would be -R not +L.

Just a few thoughts. Other than that it's a nice game, though some of the scenes feel too short.
That is the fun part, not all points are visible, only a few of them. Most of the points in this update weren't visible since they were a setup for the coming story.
 
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hopesth

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Apr 5, 2019
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Nah, please don't hide the point system values. Optional is fine, but don't hide them. If you do, this'll become one of those games that requires a guide.

That being said, the game looks very promising. Characters look nice and I'm liking the tags. ^_^

hopesth We're a demanding bunch(including me). It's fine to turn down our ideas and stick to your vision.
thanks for your feedback bro, hope you enjoy the next updates.
 

Nelythia

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It's almost never a good idea to put your point system numbers visible in a choice.
I disagree. I think it's a great idea and more games should do it.
I DO want to know which path I am taking, without being forced to download or open a walkthrough.
I want games to be enjoyable without ruining the immersion due to having to switch around with alt+tab.
 

seamanq

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Also what's up with sleeping with the lights on, with no covers and that pose...
Ah yes, constant pet peeves of mine as well. I can tell you as a developer that doing "lights out" or darkened rooms in Daz 3D to create the images makes the render times go through the roof, as Daz 3D takes a ton more time to render a darkened room than a light one. That being said, people sleeping on top of the covers in fully lit rooms is completely unrealistic and other developers like Ptolomy (Alexandra, Life With Mary, among others) and I (Broken Hearts Club [BHC]) don't do it. But I can understand why developers who feel that their readers/viewers "demand" a high number of renders per release do lit rooms at night, at least. This becomes especially challenging when the developer is a one-man show, doing all the work (writing, artwork, rendering) on a single machine.

The other thing is that putting covers on a sleeping actor is challenging and requires a fairly sophisticated knowledge of dForce simulations (in Daz 3D) as well as being time consuming and requiring a lot of time to "get it right" and some developers either don't know how to find this information or know how to do it, but aren't willing to invest the time for sleep scenes (for the same reasons as cited above). In Episode 2 of my game BHC I had to monkey with the sleep scene for hours and pull the bed out from under the bedding unit in order to get the covers dropped (and then put it back, with the actor in it) -- and then the scene took hella long to render because it was dark. It's a challenge.
 

seamanq

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@hopesth You should ask a mod for the Game Developer title so you're more visible in the thread.
It's a bit of a tricky process if you don't know where the instructions are. I sent a private message to @hopesth with instructions on how to request the Game Developer tag. Thanks for mentioning it.
 

ThunderRob

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my greatest personal triumph in gaming(except being a weapons/item artist on Jagged Aliiance v1.13)
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had to start a new game to see it..LOL missed it because i had played from a save that was well beyond this scene..HAHAA!!
thanks @hopesth
 
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Chrathrard

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So, wait, I'm confused. Is it an initialism, with a plain 'D' at the end, or an acronym just missing the final period? :unsure:
 
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