Do you need some one to help with proofreading so the English isn't so broken, if you do need some help i'm willing to help you out.
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A few grammatical mistakes, but still the game is looking good! Mia is really pretty, unlikely, but hopefully she would be MC's main love interest.
She is supposed to be in high school and you say she looks to young? I think she looks to old. If I had to guess her age it would be 23, not 18ish. It's not just the large breasts, it's her body shape just screams mature.
Mind if I ask you how you come to that opinion? How does she look young to you? How old does she look to you?
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with women it's the hands, a female can have a mature body shape and be nowhere near the age of maturity as specified by law. but the hands always tell on them, especially the ones who look much younger than they are, excluding overweight/chubby/fat women, the extra fat hides the marks on the fingers that give you clues about their ages.
i learned this from a guy who did the guess your age thing at a carnival. he was always spot on with the girls. heh pissed off a lot of them
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Interesting. In reality I think you are right, thing is this is a video game.
Do you think Violet hands are different than the hands from the mother? Pretty sure the body mesh is the same, and taking a re-look, the skin texture is the same with a different tint. Face textures are different and they have different hair, but other than that they seem identical.
Well thanks for answering, I dont understand how it relates to the game but it is interesting to think about in a non-game context.
I think i will wait 1-2 Update to give a "real" Feedback.
Right now it is ok.
Short, nothing really new.
Girls look good.
At this Point i can only complain about one Thing: Violets Pancakes
Right now it is ok.
Short, nothing really new.
Girls look good.
At this Point i can only complain about one Thing: Violets Pancakes
This is rather terrible.
The story/flow is bad.
The code is bad - The FR and L points from dialogue choices aren't added to a total, but merely change the value to the number that is supposed to be added and the +1L point dialogue choice with the teacher doesn't do anything to the value.
These things combined don't really instill much confidence.
The story/flow is bad.
The code is bad - The FR and L points from dialogue choices aren't added to a total, but merely change the value to the number that is supposed to be added and the +1L point dialogue choice with the teacher doesn't do anything to the value.
These things combined don't really instill much confidence.
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I pointed that out because of the Patreon police. I've seen devs lose their page before because a character looked too young, and her face is very young looking.
Backin my high school days I knew a lot of girls who had very mature, big-breasted bodies at 18, so that;s not the issue for me. however, I think her facial features look a little young.
Thanks for posting.
My interpretation of you comment is that you want them to look significantly older to be 100% safe from Patreon being Nazi's. Not a bad reason and also sad.
I still think the I knew ONE girl out of 200 with big breasts in high school is a weak response. You are not the only one to say this. Yes there are always exceptions to things, but exceptions are by definition not common or they wouldn't be exceptions. If you pointed that thick and busty (non fat) student out to others without context, most likely she would be mistaken for a college student.
LOL in my high school of like 400 we had NO one with E cup breasts who was fit but also thick like this. I know some exist and I also know that some people here are exaggerating to make a point.
I have no problem with making Violet be an exception and making her thick and big breasted, but that makes her not look young. She doesn't look like the average high school student. She may be young but she doesn't look it, and being an exception is fine. My issue is that every character doesn't look their age. MC looks like he is 23, Violet looks 23 as well with a baby face. Mother figure looks 30 to me. The other girl in school looks 23. All the high schoolers don't look like they are in high school, but should be graduating from college.
With that I will get off my high horse and stop talking about this. Sorry about my being so vocal.
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This can be a great game. The sisters models are hot the way they are right now. I hope the dev won't modify them. The little sister's big nipples make her stand out, and that's fantastic. Her whole body is sexy.
I just hope the dev perseveres with this one and won't give up by 0.2 if he doesn't get a lot of money immediately, because this game has great potential.
People support the effort put in quality content with regular updates.
I just hope the dev perseveres with this one and won't give up by 0.2 if he doesn't get a lot of money immediately, because this game has great potential.
People support the effort put in quality content with regular updates.
I didn't like the little sister's areolas, too large it doesn't look cute or pretty at all. Not sure "making her stand out" is better than having actual pretty titties in a porn game. Her pretty face already does that very well.
I could also do without the ugly nail polish as I dislike that stuff very much.
The older sister's model is a little too standard for me, particularly compared to the little sister who has a very cute face and nice body.
The dick size is fine, this is a porn game, proportions are often on the better side. No fun seeing a guy pork his sister with a tiny pecker.
And finally the progress with the little sister is a little fast, they seem sexually charged from the get go.
Other than that it looks very good, I do enjoy incest stories and there can't be enough of those so the incest patch is very welcome.
The model for the little sister striked me right away, super cute. Good luck
I could also do without the ugly nail polish as I dislike that stuff very much.
The older sister's model is a little too standard for me, particularly compared to the little sister who has a very cute face and nice body.
The dick size is fine, this is a porn game, proportions are often on the better side. No fun seeing a guy pork his sister with a tiny pecker.
And finally the progress with the little sister is a little fast, they seem sexually charged from the get go.
Other than that it looks very good, I do enjoy incest stories and there can't be enough of those so the incest patch is very welcome.
The model for the little sister striked me right away, super cute. Good luck
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