VN Ren'Py Early Life Crisis [v0.4] [Noegrets]

[ffive]

Assuming quite a bit there - they could have opened the thread uncertain and then read the description or other comments to confirm.

Sigh. OK, even presuming that they might've been uncertain, that still makes the whole pointless complaint entirely on them: "i have assumed that maybe Shit Burgers didn't really sell shit burgers. But then it turned out to be actually true." isn't in any shape a justification to complain about the content that matches the tag.

Heck, even without any tags the whole "this game is not to my liking and hence i won't be playing it" is just an exercise in self-importance.

 

[KirielStoneborn]

For a brief moment I thought this was that game finally getting a update and getting continued, but lo and behold the surprise when I opened it and fully noticed the new title. Will say this is an interesting concept but I one don't play many female protag games in the first place and two don't typically touch fan stories of games I've already played before seeing the fan story in question. I do hope however that myself and any others commenting in the negative aren't discouraging you and that this game is well received and well developed on your part

 

[KirielStoneborn]

For a brief moment I thought this was that game finally getting a update and getting continued, but lo and behold the surprise when I opened it and fully noticed the new title. Will say this is an interesting concept but I one don't play many female protag games in the first place and two don't typically touch fan stories of games I've already played before seeing the fan story in question. I do hope however that myself and any others commenting in the negative aren't discouraging you and that this game is well received and well developed on your part

 

[Digitalzig]

the original game finally needs an update

 

[Benn Swagger]

Everything about the original and this fan version, are sad.

 

[jameszs6669]

I think the reviews arent being helpful here. This game derserves a ton of credit. It is doing what pther games arent anymore. They gave us the choice on the age variable and thats super important to me. Well done. I know this could be a lot cleaner and a lot more this or that.... but it has the most important stuff right. Keep going dev.

Also, what other games on f95 allow you to set a custom age? PLZ and Thanks!!!

 

[skullert]

reboot of the old project?
or continouiation where we left off?

 

[Capt. Fubar]

I played MLC because of jokes and silliness of my MC, of course I did, we all did. But this... "ELC"... is human manure in glove compartment, wet blanket on you, wet willy in your ear. Well, I wish I have a digital Tommygun...... So I can kill lot of you with drive by shooting.

Aww man, even idea of doing it felt reeeeeaaaaally exciting. Pulling out my tommy from window and "eat this madafakas" (pata-pata-pata-pata-pata-pata-pata-pata-pata) Awww dude I think same of you still hungry... how about some dessert... (pata-pata-pata-pata-pata-pata-pata-pata-pata).

 

[Pyromancy]

Good luck to the Dev. I'm curious to see where you go with this one, but unless the MidLife Crisis Dev returns you're sadly limited on future material. All the same, I do wish you luck and all that.

I'll be following your progress, although not as dedicated as some of the other fans of the original game will be.

 

[darksouldrinker]

In terms of content what is actually planned here and how will it deviate from Midlife? It sounds like the protag is Christine so my first question is, does she go around fucking a bunch of guys? If she focuses just on the Dad, is it going to be new situations and how will the rest of the family and friends play into it?

 

[Noegrets]

In terms of content what is actually planned here and how will it deviate from Midlife? It sounds like the protag is Christine so my first question is, does she go around fucking a bunch of guys? If she focuses just on the Dad, is it going to be new situations and how will the rest of the family and friends play into it?

No other guys are planned. But more threesomes and some girl on girl. So far Amanda and niece are planned. Game also follows mc only action at times With same girls.

 

[magistrate]

I love seeing these characters again but the writing is pretty poor, nowhere near the quality of the original. Way too much narration. Hopefully it improves with later updates, I'll be watching with interest.

 

[edgebravesteam]

despite the negative feedback, kudos to you on a continuation of a great game. it may not be the same, and may be headed in a different direction, but you deserve the props for doing it and making it into something you want.

personally, i definitely would've preferred a more faithful continuation, as well as MC being the father, but if i really want it that badly, i'd do it myself.

props to you.

keep it up, focus on improving and finding your stride

 

[darksouldrinker]

No other guys are planned. But more threesomes and some girl on girl. So far Amanda and niece are planned. Game also follows mc only action at times With same girls.

I gave it a try and it's a decent start. The transition from scene/location to next seem a bit abrupt though. Like one second we're at the pool and then the next we're in a hotel after the concert. I am unclear if we're supposed to know the original game's events (which this scene changed seemed to suggest) if the story is going to be different and from Christine's POV.

 

[Noegrets]

I gave it a try and it's a decent start. The transition from scene/location to next seem a bit abrupt though. Like one second we're at the pool and then the next we're in a hotel after the concert. I am unclear if we're supposed to know the original game's events (which this scene changed seemed to suggest) if the story is going to be different and from Christine's POV.

It is a flashback so that you don’t have to know details of the original game. It’s just Christine listening to the OG events. happy to add any context you feel is missing. I believe she mentions that this is last weekend And then there is the fade to new scene mechanic.

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[HATETHISFUCKINGSITE]

I have a question; is this game gonna consists of povs from everyone except MC?

 

[Throwawayxyz]

Yo, with the original dev gone, do you have a Patreon or something where I can support this development?

 

[Noegrets]

Yo, with the original dev gone, do you have a Patreon or something where I can support this development?

I would love someone to help edit the dialogue. That would be amazing support.
I am not otherwise accepting support at this time. But if I end up hiring someone to help with the project might make a subscribe star so they get paid.

 

[RuthlessSlayer]

Please make it slow-burn and add new content that isn’t in the original game.