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This game was once great. However, It has really gone downhill. It's kinda broken at this point, and I'll elaborate on that.
A good story structure would be as follows:
1) Elena is in a zone of comfort, stability, and familiarity: This would be Elena from the start of the game.
2) Elena feels something is missing in her life: This didn't really happen until after she started getting dicked, and she started to long for more and more dick over time, but it happened.
3) Elena engages in new situations she is not familiar with. This checks out as well, ramping it up to anal, threesomes, sex with strangers and so on.
4) Elena adapts to the new situation. Again checks out she becomes a total slut gradually.
5) Elena gets what she wanted. Again checks out, she has fucked every man in town a number of times. Honestly, the only logical next step is prostitution. That's the one thing she hasn't really any experience with yet, but she is so degraded at this point she will be like a fish in water when that happens. It's kinda "too late" for it to be good prostitution scenes. She is too far gone.
6) Elena Pays a heavy price: Nope did NOT happen. She hasn't really paid any price at all and that's kinda the problem. Sure at first she had some bad feelings of guilt, but over time no just no. She doesn't even care anymore and this where things deviate from it being a "good story". David is good to her, and she is just a lying bitch. She doesn't really have any compassion for David left, and she seems downright hateful to the man. Yet she continues to string him along for some reason. If Elena were a "Good person" she would have dumped David LONG AGO. She just keeps up this ruse though, and he is apparently none the wiser, way too trusting. There has gotta be some back and forth there for it to be an interesting story. David's presence ruins the story at this point. Elena isn't even sly about cheating on him. She has fucked in the same bed as him a number of times, under same roof tons of times, sucked dick under the desk when he is there how many times now? Yet she never "gets caught" and he is never the wiser. He is fine with her going on dates with other men. It's like watching Mike Tyson beat up a grandma... It's not right lol. David can't be that retarded. The ONLY possible ending to this story at this point that would make "Elena Pay a heavy Price" is if David finds out, and goes on a murder spree shooting up his work, the clothing store, the gym, the school ect ect ect killing all of Elena's lovers... ending the rampage by blowing his brains out in front of Elena splattering fragments of his skull onto her face after saying "I loved you, now live with this!" Nah, she aint gonna pay that price though.
7) Elena Returns to her familiarity changed for the better: NO CHANCE
8) Elena has changed as a result of her story: Obviously
So in summary, it goes to part 5 of the arc, and just goes on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on stuck at part 5 perpetually. I'll explain how movies would be if written in this fashion:
Rocky Franchise: After the end of Rocky 2 Rocky goes on to fight a string of 50 weak fighters keeping the championship title the whole time, always getting richer, never fighting a real fight, and continuing on fighting up into old age retiring super rich, nobody dies, no fight with Mr T or Ivan Draco or anyone who can punch back. Just Rocky is champ and knocks em all out every time.
Titanic: Jack doesn't die at the end. Then the movie goes on for like 9 more hours of Jack fucking Rose, and romancing her and them being a lovey dovey couple and he is an old ass man telling the story along her side at the end.
The Social Network: It tells most the same story, but then goes on for another 4 hours of just Mark Zuckerberg being rich and doing rich guy stuff.
Forest Gump: Actually... Come to think of it "David" is Forest in Forest Gump, but not a sympathetic or likable character. It's basically Jenny fucking around on Forest the entire movie, and Forest just being Forest. This game is Forest Gump minus the Charisma of Gump. Come to think of it Elena dying of some disease and leaving David an AIDS baby would be a very fitting ending lol, but that won't happen. Elena will get a "Happy Ending" at the end for some reason though she deserves death by fire.
A good story structure would be as follows:
1) Elena is in a zone of comfort, stability, and familiarity: This would be Elena from the start of the game.
2) Elena feels something is missing in her life: This didn't really happen until after she started getting dicked, and she started to long for more and more dick over time, but it happened.
3) Elena engages in new situations she is not familiar with. This checks out as well, ramping it up to anal, threesomes, sex with strangers and so on.
4) Elena adapts to the new situation. Again checks out she becomes a total slut gradually.
5) Elena gets what she wanted. Again checks out, she has fucked every man in town a number of times. Honestly, the only logical next step is prostitution. That's the one thing she hasn't really any experience with yet, but she is so degraded at this point she will be like a fish in water when that happens. It's kinda "too late" for it to be good prostitution scenes. She is too far gone.
6) Elena Pays a heavy price: Nope did NOT happen. She hasn't really paid any price at all and that's kinda the problem. Sure at first she had some bad feelings of guilt, but over time no just no. She doesn't even care anymore and this where things deviate from it being a "good story". David is good to her, and she is just a lying bitch. She doesn't really have any compassion for David left, and she seems downright hateful to the man. Yet she continues to string him along for some reason. If Elena were a "Good person" she would have dumped David LONG AGO. She just keeps up this ruse though, and he is apparently none the wiser, way too trusting. There has gotta be some back and forth there for it to be an interesting story. David's presence ruins the story at this point. Elena isn't even sly about cheating on him. She has fucked in the same bed as him a number of times, under same roof tons of times, sucked dick under the desk when he is there how many times now? Yet she never "gets caught" and he is never the wiser. He is fine with her going on dates with other men. It's like watching Mike Tyson beat up a grandma... It's not right lol. David can't be that retarded. The ONLY possible ending to this story at this point that would make "Elena Pay a heavy Price" is if David finds out, and goes on a murder spree shooting up his work, the clothing store, the gym, the school ect ect ect killing all of Elena's lovers... ending the rampage by blowing his brains out in front of Elena splattering fragments of his skull onto her face after saying "I loved you, now live with this!" Nah, she aint gonna pay that price though.
7) Elena Returns to her familiarity changed for the better: NO CHANCE
8) Elena has changed as a result of her story: Obviously
So in summary, it goes to part 5 of the arc, and just goes on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on and on stuck at part 5 perpetually. I'll explain how movies would be if written in this fashion:
Rocky Franchise: After the end of Rocky 2 Rocky goes on to fight a string of 50 weak fighters keeping the championship title the whole time, always getting richer, never fighting a real fight, and continuing on fighting up into old age retiring super rich, nobody dies, no fight with Mr T or Ivan Draco or anyone who can punch back. Just Rocky is champ and knocks em all out every time.
Titanic: Jack doesn't die at the end. Then the movie goes on for like 9 more hours of Jack fucking Rose, and romancing her and them being a lovey dovey couple and he is an old ass man telling the story along her side at the end.
The Social Network: It tells most the same story, but then goes on for another 4 hours of just Mark Zuckerberg being rich and doing rich guy stuff.
Forest Gump: Actually... Come to think of it "David" is Forest in Forest Gump, but not a sympathetic or likable character. It's basically Jenny fucking around on Forest the entire movie, and Forest just being Forest. This game is Forest Gump minus the Charisma of Gump. Come to think of it Elena dying of some disease and leaving David an AIDS baby would be a very fitting ending lol, but that won't happen. Elena will get a "Happy Ending" at the end for some reason though she deserves death by fire.
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- Jan 13, 2018
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I have been playing this game for a while now and Elena has certainly become a cum slut, which I am sure we are all happy about, but it's time to ditch David and move the story along.
What u mean online? Its an rpgm game. You cant play it online unless u mean in pc.
- Aug 8, 2017
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It's built in RPGM MV which is made in javascript. You don't even have to click the .exe to play (the exe is basically a modified web browser)
With FireFox you could just go in to the www folder and open the index.html and play the game
So you could also put it on a web-server and play the game online
Does anyone has just the CG rip? As I'd rather just have that than download the whole game each time.
- Oct 13, 2016
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That happens to me when I am trying to skim through the text and the next scene is animated.
All you can do is save OFTEN and restart the game when you get that error message and try not to skom the text when the scene changes
i think it makes no sense to upload the cg only because the pictures folder is 1.55 gb big and the complete game is 1.79 gb.there are 3 things you can do:first youl download the complete game and have a look at the pictures.Second: take the version from crust which is only 232mb big.Third: hope someone uploads the cg.
- Mar 23, 2019
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Hi. I enjoy your analisis and agree some parts. Fact that Elena has been slutier and slutier. i wouldnt know because i still hadn´t played the game without glitches or bugs. The dev made and excelent plot and everyone wants to fuck the new girl. She can still comute her sluty life with familiar one it doesnt has to go perpetually has you said.
There can still have some surprises and the Tom story could be more developed. The way she is lead by Tom in his innocence ( not so) is excellent.There is also Tom´s father, i dunno but its doesnt have to finish so bloody. David could break up with Elena because he has an affair with a men or something like that. Men could loose interest in her since she is married no more.
It doesnt has to finish in murder.
Even so i think this game misses a thing. Elena´s self will. Why couldn´t she go to char´s house and have sex with them, not because she was blackmailed but she wanted.
Thanks
- Aug 6, 2016
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Cheating isn't worth death. It bugged me when Joss Whedon's wife aired their dirty laundry, trying to get him lumped in with Harvey Weinstein. Cheating with a willing person isn't the same as rape, not even close. Sure, makes you a bad husband and a cad, but it's something you can come back from if you work hard to change.
This is just a game that dropped any pretense of story and just moves you from sex scene to sex scene. Can't really blame the dev because it's still got me downloading it every update so he's doing something right. Elena can't be a bad character because she isn't a character at all anymore.
This is just a game that dropped any pretense of story and just moves you from sex scene to sex scene. Can't really blame the dev because it's still got me downloading it every update so he's doing something right. Elena can't be a bad character because she isn't a character at all anymore.
