Tomy75

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I agree with some comments here and there, the MC is now an even bigger asshole than he used to be, his attitude toward Morgana is totally uncalled for, he treats her like shit and does not expect her to betray him in the end just like Aria says she will? Well, I for one hope she will, he deserves it, karma is a bitch.

And while I hate it, Lyria’s departure is no surprise, she offered him her virginity, meaning that he would be the only man of her long life, and yet he was ignoring her most of the time, preferring to spend his days and nights with bitchy-Aria. I’m glad Amynth came into play and is now a main LI (f*ck off Aria), but I will really miss Lyria, she was THE one, a counter-balance to his bitter/asshole attitude, and I agree with most here, it was a very bad decision from the dev to let her evolve in the story for so long just to remove her so suddenly. Well, each decision has a consequence, and by removing Lyria from the story the dev has also removed a part of his followers...
 
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i like the multiple warning to not kill off dumbass cause that is the first thing i'm still going to do given the chance. i hate being forced into other characters and i've stopped playing other games that push that to far.

yay for the typical forest elf fucking off. i'd be fine with elves if they werent always hippy tree hugging fucks. gimme Drow, dark elves, shit even blood elves from wow.
 

Modhunter

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Don't see the problem, Lyria was great and all, but the point in leaving here behind in the first place was to fufill his mission and carry the burden himself initially. This was clearly explained several times. She tracked him down, and to be honest, he has to become a force and she would have frankly given him pause. It was for her own good in the long run. She will probably be there at the end to help bring him back after using the sword in the coming wars. Diid he not question how he treated Morgana to Aria? He is in a bit of a pickle and is struggling to keep his morality and resolve and he will fail without likeminded allies next to him.

It is weird that Eris did not warn him the queen was her apparent aunt though. seems like important information
 
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Woodstock_1983

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Can we deny Silas any females and keep them all for the MC? Also, can the Dev make away to skip Silas missions? I only want to play the MC story no one else's. I don't know about others but it's really starting to get boring.
 
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Claet

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I was enjoying the story until I got punched in the face by the dev with that protag switch. Why?! Why will I want to play another protag so far in the game? No, I don't, and I don't care!

"and the game ends if Silas dies." - Are you kidding me?! It's not enough that there is no option to skip it, but I'm being forced to care about it?!

So frustrating... Well, for me the game just died. Bye!
 

Nxooda

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Awesome game! Have been playing since release and there are a couple comments that are way too harsh but they hold some truth to them.

Think I would agree that you should be able to skip playing Silas. However, it's cool that you've included that so there's more background info. Speaking about background info, feels rather rushed compared to the main story. Why is there almost next to none affection shown between the MC and his girls? And no, I don't mean the sex scenes. I mean the little hugs, kisses and other types of affection. Now, it just looks like they're fighting and arguing 24/7 and they just have sex on certain occasions. They barely even share the same bed after the fact, or at night. I guess it has been a little better but far from what would deem logical in all of these scenarios.

Sandbox part is a genuine concern as well. There doesn't seem to be any impact to your choices in outcome? You can sent out Yana or Lyria and the outcome doesn't change the story. Or why is Morgana not an optional choice when you're already in the sandbox either way? She barely has any content whatsoever anyways and she could just as easily be cut out from the scenes. Correct me if I'm wrong about any of this.

To go into more specific details; Aria. She does so much for the MC and receives barely any appreciation or affection. You can clearly tell she's way more entranced to the MC than she explicitly says yet MC seems to be oblivious for such a smart guy? Especially since he has multiple lovers you'd think he'd be able to tell surface things better. Yes, she behaves like a bitch but some people show affection through that type of negative energy until they're convinced that that person really cares about them.

I think you're confusing being steadfast with being unemotional. Do people here even bother trying to understand the stories they're reading?
This is exactly why he then shouldn't engage in a relationship if the core of the game is revolving around that. So he's just steadfast in not showing emotions inside of a relationship but he isn't showing that steadfastness engaging in a relationship? For such a moralistic MC this doesn't even add up. Let alone have 4 women that he does this with.

All in all, I hope some stuff gets rewritten and proper affection is given to interactions between LI and MC. Keep up the great work!
 
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pilapila3

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Mystic seriously!? Did you have to drop it in on Steam today!? Do you realize I have to go to work!?

BTW, I love it ;)
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Once again, I know this sounds like a repeat of my last Steam post. I know. I know. I’m fully aware of the mistakes, the things that could’ve been done better, and the things that can be done better. I’ll do my best to improve what’s within my ability. This whole process has been a massive learning experience for me—something I’ll carry with me into Book 2 of Elleria to make it far better than what Book 1 is.

Elleria Book 1 is rough. It has its moments, and it has its downsides. But on a personal level—speaking only for myself—I’m satisfied with it.

When I started this, I didn’t have any specific intent. For me, it was my story—a reflection of my thoughts on our world, my opinions, and my views. I turned it into something meaningful for myself, and then I decided to share it with the world because… well, why not?

So, despite its flaws—flaws that can be improved on—I’m happy with it.

It’s not everyone’s cup of tea, and I respect that. But the important thing is... it doesn’t have to be. It’s mine. And I’ll gladly share this cup with those who want a sip, while respecting those who don’t. Whatever the case may be, I hope you enjoy the conclusion of Book 1 and Chapter 5.

It’s been a long road, and honestly, my car tires are flat, and I’m out of fuel. I'm tired. But don’t worry—I’ve got a mechanic. I’ll see you around sooner than you might think with further additions and improvements for Book 1 of Elleria. As for Book 2 and when its poppin, no comments for now.

Anyhow, thanks for reading and... well... enjoy the update and this wrap up. As usual, you know where to find it!

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yup88888

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well the last chapter is not a conclusion.... it ends with a cliffhanger....
for my taste is a big down, and if the book 2 is not the same mc we don't gonna see the resolution of that fight, so a way to blow up a story
 

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well the last chapter is not a conclusion.... it ends with a cliffhanger....
for my taste is a big down, and if the book 2 is not the same mc we don't gonna see the resolution of that fight, so a way to blow up a story
Yes. Cliffhangers, thing that people hate, but also thing that is there to be used for what it should be used. They serve their purpose.

And don't confuse Book term with "Elleria 2", that is entirely separate game. Book 2 resumes where Book 1 left at. Or, well, few months after that moment.

But that doesn't mean you don't see the fight or how it ends.
 
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indio68

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i don't understand why elarya was been discharged like this....was an interesting char and important too for a big part of the game..and i liked her render so much...i'm pissed by this
 
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