VN Ren'Py Abandoned Elven Tales: The Rise of Darkness [v0.4] [Darchengel VN]

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What version do you prefer?

  • The "Wise" version

    Votes: 9 37.5%
  • The "Young" version

    Votes: 15 62.5%

  • Total voters
    24
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Pogo123

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Mar 25, 2019
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quality looks really good, female elf in a fantasy setting is always nice, she looks really great and unique with a tasteful curvy body! :) really nice. - even monster sex it seems?

but male protagonist????????? the girl looks so tasty and is even alone in the thumbnail, why can't i play her? /Ó_Ò\
or do i play a narrotar? since i see a monster with the elf. OR do i play an elfen guy and you can let her cheat and him cuckold? that would be interesting too.
 

Pogo123

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Could really use a protagonist tag. Unless one doesn't exist because you are playing as that Falmer. Was killing all those Falmer in Skyrim wrong and they were really just minding their own business trying to hook up with hot elves?

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there are even mods on loverslab where you can let falmers have some... fun. idk to play a falmer if it has to be a male protag :)
 

Pogo123

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Wow, all I gave Dobby was a sock.
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I guess we all leave the sock behind one day.
played it and i have to say he is more a mix - and btw "dobby" is pretty shredded lol. elfen girls look damn fine. both of them. music is nice too. and character wise he seems to be more an aragorn type of guy - or... quasimodo. not dumb, alien to his world.

tbh i also feel sometimes alien to this world - and no i don't look like a shredded "dobby"... lol
 

DarchengelVN

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Sep 17, 2020
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I could see that potentially being very powerful/moving, however the first version of the game should probably fully reveal that concept.
BayJay47 , hi!

Thanks for your feedback!

I understand your point of view.
Be sure that every "page" of this story will be turned at the right time.

I have already written the whole first arc of the story. But that does not mean that opinions will not be taken into account. After all, each question from you is like a new color being added to the palette. ;)
 
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Pogo123

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The MC looks like a rotten turd why.
he looks great the wau he looks. There is also goblin porn on this site.
The only thing which puts me a bit of (confuses me)is that he is so shredded lol. I expected him to be more... think and “boney“ like a big dobby or faun like creature
 

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he looks great the wau he looks. There is also goblin porn on this site.
The only thing which puts me a bit of (confuses me)is that he is so shredded lol. I expected him to be more... think and “boney“ like a big dobby or faun like creature
But goblins are small rats.
 

str8up

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Jun 4, 2020
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i just hope theres some vaginal sex and creampies ...havent tried any new games in a while so ill give this a shot
my expectations are pretty low these days if the game ends up being over 5mins long ill be shocked
UPDATED;good thing my expectations are low with trying new games....its about a 5min game ...from what ive seen of it so far seems ok
and well perhaps ill play more as updates comes out just hope longer then 5mins of game plays and hope for creampie and impragnate tags to be added
 
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Uzhirian

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Nice work dev. So far so good. It's pretty short so far but seems like an interesting premise and has nice renders too.

Text needs a proof read though, a few spelling/grammar issues throughout and this really needs to lose the transitions that need two clicks to move to the next render (where first click makes the text go away and second changes to next render) as that's pretty annoying.
 
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DarchengelVN

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Sep 17, 2020
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Nice work dev. So far so good. It's pretty short so far but seems like an interesting premise and has nice renders too.

Text needs a proof read though, a few spelling/grammar issues throughout and this really needs to lose the transitions that need two clicks to move to the next render (where first click makes the text go away and second changes to next render) as that's pretty annoying.
Hi,
Thanks for your feed back!
 
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